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Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2009 3:58:45 PM Title: Leave / But don't leave me

Brilliant chapter!
Placed comments in my other review.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2009 5:48:34 AM Title: Leave / But don't leave me

And I thought we'd get the happily ever after sequel... I know would a been to easy.

Author's Response: Unfortunately, yes...I tend to think in epics. *pokes stubborn brain*

Reviewer: Tasa Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2009 10:59:16 AM Title: Leave / But don't leave me

Noes!
;_;

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: :) Sunday at the latest!

Reviewer: Alana Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2009 8:21:07 PM Title: Leave / But don't leave me

Another great start to what I know will be a wonderful story. It's quite possible this is my favorite chapter of the series thus far. I was interested to see how Marie was going to handle holding herself back from touching Logan, and you've done a masterful job portraying the difficulty both parties have in restraining themselves. Love it. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! Rogue has a lot of restraint in X2, telling Bobby that she doesn't want to hurt him, etc., so I definitely wanted to show sort of the psychosis behind that fear. But, since it's Logan we're talking about here, she's more willing to push the envelope. *g* More soon!

Reviewer: Dita Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2009 6:01:28 PM Title: Leave / But don't leave me

Awesome continuation! I'm just going to assume that Rogue is going to get her chance to tease Logan again... otherwise her leaving would have been a sad scene. Good writing on your part.

Author's Response: Haha, Rogue will always tease Logan. From that "Suddenly, my life doesn't look so bad," in the truck in X1 to that "Aren't you going to tell me to go upstairs?" in X3, giving Logan crap is just what Rogue does. ;)

Reviewer: miss vixen Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2009 4:15:40 PM Title: Leave / But don't leave me

Oh, wow!! You're writing the next part! Fantastic!

Author's Response: Yep! Glad you're excited.

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