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Reviewer: springbok7 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2012 5:59:52 AM Title: Chapter 10: Discovery

I have to say, my most favourite line in this fic is "You’ve become just another boyf, and will now receive the Jubilee stare of whatever. WHATEVER, dude." I seriously laughed out loud when I read that :D

This fic is really interesting. Of course I love the Rogue/Marie Logan/Wolverine interactions, but the way your other characters are built up is lovely as well. So many fics have developed leads but the rest of the cast is frustratingly two dimensional, and you have anything but two-dimensional supporting cast members in this fic! I would have liked to see a little more loose-end-wrapping in terms of the raids and such, it was a little abrupt to go from Max and Alec and X5s and X6s to camper-buying, but lol that is my ONLY gripe, and I still think this fic is a 10/10!

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2011 11:45:57 PM Title: Chapter 10: Discovery

You know when the author says 'JaqofSpades' that the story is going to be good. I have to admit, that the ending was a little confusing, but I think I got the sum of it. I liked it. Well done. ;)

Reviewer: lily5 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2011 7:27:44 PM Title: Chapter 10: Discovery

There was so many surprises and delicious moments here... Really left me stunned and breathless.
Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: thatcraftykid Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2011 2:22:40 PM Title: Chapter 10: Discovery

As a caveat, I'm not the biggest fan of cut and clear differences between the Logan/Wolverine, Marie/Rogue personas, it's never really rang true for me. But the payoff at the end was really nice. And, boy, did this line ever resonate:
“Well, fuck you! Just fuck right off! God forbid you should ever love anyone who had the guts to love you back! Anyone who might be your equal!”
Preach it, Rogue. Preach.

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2011 12:21:50 PM Title: Chapter 10: Discovery

This was a truly powerful piece of art. I am very glad I got to read it. Thank you.

~Mia

Reviewer: doctorg Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2011 4:51:21 PM Title: Chapter 10: Discovery

Wow. I almost feel like I need to think a little more before writing a review, which is really a compliment to the complexity of your story. I think the shift in Marie and ultimately in Logan was a very bold choice. I'm still thinking about it. Still kind of sad for Logan and Marie, but maybe like Wolverine thought I need some time to adjust to fall in love with these two new people who did find their happiness together. Overall, a great story, and I'm so glad to have read it!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2009 4:03:41 AM Title: Chapter 10: Discovery

i still miss Marie, that sweet innocent girl. but now that Logan has integrated the Wolverine into his persona fully and they are one i understand why Rogue is right for him.

but i still miss Marie. her being gone makes me really sad.

what a beautiful story, even if it made me freaking cry at the end to know Marie was gone for good.

Reviewer: Geeves Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2009 5:13:26 PM Title: Chapter 10: Discovery

Wow! That was an AMAZING STORY! I've been reading this story on my G1 on the train and it is has been my favorite story of the week! Oh very very well writen!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 3:26:00 AM Title: Chapter 10: Discovery

Aww that was really sad even though rogue and Wolverine got together. very powerful! Great fic!

Author's Response: Thank you! I find it interesting how different people read different things as sad. While it got a bit angsty, I thought that the path they were on ... self realisation, in both cases ... was generally positive. Mostly.

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