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Rogue has been having some pretty steamy dreams...but is that all they are?

Rated: PG
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: Adaptations
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1466 - Hits: 5428
Complete?: Yes - Published: 10/02/2000 - Last Updated: 10/02/2000
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Date: 10/11/2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oooh. Intriguing. Can't wait to read whats next!!

Bobby's little display of Dominance provokes the Wolverine into feelings he probably shouldn't have.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Foof
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1271 - Hits: 3111
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/26/2003 - Last Updated: 05/26/2003
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Date: 10/10/2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cute story. I wish you would write more along these lines or on this story.

Marie is at a lab. Logan ends up there too. What will happen when their world collide?

A series of 100 short scenes that tell their story. Back to Back POV.

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Dark, Drabble, Humor, Shipper, Vignette
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 27
Wordcount: 9270 - Hits: 80395
Complete?: No - Published: 09/20/2011 - Last Updated: 10/21/2015
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Date: 10/11/2015 Title: Chapter 12: Domination

She followed carefully, minding his signals with a twitchy swiftness and calming altogether when he set a hand on some part of her ***Love it!! I forgot how batshit she is in this story!***

In the end he maintained mastery of his instincts. It would prove though, that the girl would not maintain control over hers. ***Okay now I need to read this whole thing!!!***

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Date: 10/11/2015 Title: Chapter 11: Have I Ever Steered You Wrong?

Really, what did he expect anyway, with that tan expanse of skin so close to her lips and teeth? So she bit him. *** EEEK!!!! I love it!***

Author's Response: I know! *flails*

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Date: 10/11/2015 Title: Chapter 13: Keeping Warm

And froze.

She was so cold, too cold, and they were cutting and hurting and burning and the patch of skin they peeled from her left arm was the only place she could focus on. Someone else spoke then, someone burned into her brain a long long time ago. The first.

That’s what you get you dirty mutie, that’s what you fucking deserve. All those things I told you, they were a lie. I only wanted to hurt you. It’s because you’re nothing. You’re lower than low, you’re not human.

Marie slid to the floor, a worthless loony girl as cold as ice. She wondered, briefly, if the man would even notice that she was gone. ***Oh. *cries* So sad.***

Author's Response: \r\n:(

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Date: 10/11/2015 Title: Chapter 8: Bare Bones

I can't copy this whole chapter so I will just say I loved it all.

Author's Response: Lol

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Date: 10/11/2015 Title: Chapter 2: In The Line Of Fire

He made the best of his last few moments, radioing Scott to get the fuck outta Dodge, he’d catch up later, and killing five more of the fuckers before his eyelids closed. He lashed out with his claws in a dramatic Last Stand before unconsciousness claimed him.
***Love this Logan. The real Logan.***

Author's Response: Yes ma\'am!!

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Date: 10/11/2015 Title: Chapter 1: A Cunning Plan

I love this whole chapter. Bat shit cray cray Marie trying to figure out a plan.

Author's Response: Yes ma\'am!!

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Date: 10/11/2015 Title: Chapter 3: When it Rains

The yellow lines running along the seams were pretty. She wanted one. It was the least he could do for spoiling her escape plans ***LOL***
His mouth needed some washing out. She wasn’t sure how to talk to him. It had been so long, she tried or form coherent natural speech, instead of the erratic rapid speech she was accustomed to in her own brain.
***Aww***

Author's Response: Yeah.

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Date: 10/11/2015 Title: Chapter 4: Fool's Gold

“Times? I don’t seem to have my blackberry on my right now, but if you give me a minute I’ll have my secretary pull up a list of tomorrows activities and you can pour over them to your heart’s content.” She leveled a bright eyed stare at him. “Does it look like I’ve got a window? My internal clock runs on 24 hours of dimness. They like it when the bright lights make you blink and squint, it’s easier not to see them coming.”
***She seems so with it right there.***

Logan found little help in the divided attention of a bat-shit girl disgruntled about her fate ***I Can see him there thinking "Fuck" LOL ***

Author's Response: I forgot how much I loved this story! I\'m going to have to read them all again! I love that last line from Logan!

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Date: 10/11/2015 Title: Chapter 5: Temptation

Loved the whole chapter. But my favorite was ***“I have a name. And I need this ribbon.”***

Author's Response: Lol she\'s so fun and crazy and fun!

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Date: 10/11/2015 Title: Chapter 7: Slow Burn

Certain as she was that her own skin could be deadly, Mare knew something so beautiful couldn’t be touched without a price to be paid. ***Sad and poetic***
She reached out slowly, so slowly, and touched the smooth skin between his knuckles where the metal knives had appeared. She stared at her own hand, her fingers making contact with someone or the first time in a long time without causing pain and ripping and tearing and sucking and… pretty yellow trim. *** Possibly my favorite chapter on the whole. Thought favorite line in the whole story is still the "she bit him" line. LOL. Loved this chapter!***

Author's Response: Yeah. It\'s such a poetic section. And sometimes she\'s so lucid it hurts.

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Date: 10/11/2015 Title: Chapter 6: And Now for Something Completely Different

Poor fucked up Marie. I love how Logan is all "I'll do it anyways" With his claws.

Author's Response: Yes!! He totally is. And crazy Marie is cray cray.

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Date: 10/11/2015 Title: Chapter 9: Face to Face

Logan!” The Ugly never saw him coming. ***What happens next! YAY!***

Author's Response: Lol keep reading silly girl.

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Date: 10/11/2015 Title: Chapter 10: Showing Off

It had been a force of will for Logan to wait until she'd called his name. *** Awww.***
He turned to Marie and tamped down the absurd inclination to boast ***he is still a man after all.LOL***

Author's Response: Lol, she is so cute but so fucked up.

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Date: 10/11/2015 Title: Chapter 15: Black Knight

She couldn’t remember where she was or how she got there, but the thumpity- thump in her chest was hard and fast and terrible. ***I see her as a scared child in this scene rather than a 24 year old. Poor girl***

Some broken synapses in her brain fired once, three times, unexpectedly she remembered only his name, that he’d gifted her the ribbon, and that she liked touching him. She crawled forward to wrap her arms around one of his legs just as he was turning around to her.
***I second my last statement***

“Logan.” It came out on the heels of a bright eyed smirk. ***I laughed. I like it***

Uglies tasted nasty. When she had his hand open, and the vulnerable flesh between his thumb and finger bared to her, she did what instinct called for. She bit him. *** Two things. How the hell does she know what Uglies taste like? And she really likes biting him does she?***

Author's Response: Yes. Marie likes biting Logan. She knows what they taste like because she bitten the uglies before, while she\'s been toted around and foghting to get free.

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Date: 10/11/2015 Title: Chapter 14: Inhospitable Lodgings

The thought of leaving her behind had, briefly, entered his mind. He’d chased it away with a feral growl. She was his now, damn it, and he wasn’t going to let her go. She smelled like his, looked like his, felt like his… all she needed was time, and help. ***Yay! We like feral Wolverine***

Author's Response: That we do girl, that we do.

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Date: 10/11/2015 Title: Chapter 18: Backlash

Her body molded against his and it so completely occupied the animal within him back that it wasn’t until the third time he felt her push his hand forward did he realize what she wanted.
***She is so scared. Aww***

“Logan,” Jean reached out with her mind, scanning him. He growled at her, annoyed that she’d do it in the first place instead of just talking to him. An exasperated sigh escaped her lips, but her eyes narrowed on him. “What’s with the claws?”

He shrugged. “Makes her feel better.” He saw Jeans refocus her attention, settle it on a place behind him. Before he could open his mouth t say speak, Marie screamed. ***Hate Jean. Love Logan. Poor Marie!***

Author's Response: Jean is a little hoity toity in this one. :) I loved making this Marie!

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Date: 10/11/2015 Title: Chapter 16: Gossip

Her tongue traced the imprint of his teeth, the marks fading as if she were licking them away. ***Huh what? She is liking where he bit himself?***

He growled aloud at the question, low and long an unmistakable warning even over the airways.

“Mine,” was his only reply. And he didn’t care how much Scooter talked about it, as long as everyone knew. ***You know I love that line! I love possessive Territorial Logan***

Author's Response: Love that it\'s Scott that is going to be bitching. I meant her teeth.

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Date: 10/11/2015 Title: Chapter 17: Obsession

Her annoyance and anger at him for toting her around was completely forgotten when he finally, finally, let her explore the world again. She lifted her hands above her head, breathing deeply and twirling and spinning and happy.

“Logan!” She launched herself at him. A flying mass of dirty brown hair and bright happy eyes and long mostly bare limbs that she didn’t want to cover up ever again. He caught her easily. Gathering her close and whispering to her.
*** I keep seeing her as childlike and its bugging me. But in whole I love this part. So sweet.***

And she didn’t even stop the flying thing landed in their vicinity and belched out people ***Belched out people. OMG.LOL!!!***

Author's Response: Lol she\'s crazy but don\'t worry she won\'t stay that way forever.

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Date: 10/11/2015 Title: Chapter 19: Lipstick

One voice broke free of the din, to ring a little clearer. “She’s sorry she hurt you.”

Marie thought about that for a moment. It was a new concept.
***It wasn't until this chapter where I really see the death of her crazy. I knew she was batshit but I didn't pity here till here. So sad.***

Author's Response: Yeah. I really just make her super crazy and stuff. It\'s not all fun and games I suppose.

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Date: 10/11/2015 Title: Chapter 20: Patience

Logan didn’t want to leave Marie in the Jet, every part of him fought against the idea of leaving her alone, but what kind of man would he be if he stayed behind while the rest of his team raided the lab? ***Yay. Logan is a honorable man!***

“Drop the shit, fear reeks whether it’s thick with that damn cologne you wear or not. ***Ooohh. Scary Logan***


I still feel like Remy was up to something and he knows something.

Author's Response: I don\'t remember. I\'m going to have to read it again. Loved Logan in this one though.

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Date: 10/11/2015 Title: Chapter 21: Wonder

Why did you ever stop writing this?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

Author's Response: I don\'t know!!

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Date: 10/11/2015 Title: Chapter 22: A Mean and Hungry Look

Holy... OMG. There are no words. Write more!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I did! I\'m glad you\'re liking it! Now go and read the next one!

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Date: 10/11/2015 Title: Chapter 23: Bad Blood

What the fuck was Remy going to do with her? Thank goodness Logan got there in time.

Favorite line : "Marie spit into the dirt at the thought of his taste. Worse that the Uglies she’d bet. She waited for Logan, longed for him. He would make her feel better"

Author's Response: Remy is in for a world of hurt. Just you wait. Loved comparing him to an Ugly.