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Damn, that is dark! And sad. Poor rogue :( definitely excited for more!
Author's Response: Yeah. I wanted to warn people of that. I try not to write dark because I can get too deep into the dark mindset. LOL. Eventually the story will turn out better. I am a sucker for happy endings. Thanks for the review!!!!
I love how Marie is calm in the face of her anguish. She tries so hard to do everything in her power not to let them get to her. This is my favorite section:
It angered Marie that they were nothing more than creatures to them and she set her jaw. She didn’t even see it coming, suddenly her head was slammed down into the table and the cigarette was being extinguished on her cheek.
Author's Response: Yeah. This Marie is strong.
Hmmm, right next door? This'll be interesting! Great job with this second chapter, eagerly anticipating more! :)
Author's Response: LOL. I wasn't planning on that happening originally but it just sort of happened. Thanks for the review! I will try to update the story again tonight!
Love Love Love the whole "Take them down with me" attitude that Logan's got going on here.
Logan obeyed, knowing that if he resisted, he wouldn’t even have the satisfaction of hurting one of them before going down.
Author's Response: Thanks. I wanted it to seem that way. But I kinda noticed that my Logan is very... Creed like in this story
She felt her chest start to tighten, there wasn’t enough air, that slot couldn’t possibly provide enough air. Her head started to swim. The walls began to close. She couldn’t take it.
You can just feel how scared and in pain she is!
Author's Response: Good. I wanted to convey her sheer terror. I am enjoying writing the darkness.