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Where is Rogue?!
And, Remmy is getting off way to lightly.
Author's Response: As for Remmy I'm not sure I think his part in this story ends, might change my mind! And for Rogue We find out in the next segment which I just posted the first chapter to. I hope you enjoy it!
That is a terrible place to be... knowing that you couldn't save the woman you loved... I hope the epilogue is happier!
Author's Response: I don't know that's it happier, I'll let you be the judge of that but I hope you enjoy it anyways ! next segment will be up soon!
NEED FASTER UPDATES!!!
Your killing me Smalls!
But loving the drama.
Author's Response: thanks glad your enjoying and for your reading pleasure I've added the next chapter and i think it's longer than the rest. one more chapter to go and it's done, enjoy!
When this all started, I never expected Remy to play such a large role, but I like what you're doing with the characters and their relationships. I'm looking forward to when the end of 'The Patient' meets up with the events of this story, when not one, not two, but three men are all competing for Marie's heart.
This image was exceptional: "but the salt in the air was like an albatross on his chest." Very cool. --Wendie
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm so glad to hear that your enjoying this. There's still a lot more surprises in store. Sorry to dissapoint a little but, this series will end at the ending of the second chapter in the Patient. The next series will tie in both stories. Hope you enjoy I still have quite a lot of twist comming into play!
Wow. This story has captured my heart. It really has. Now, I feel for Remy. Its hard knowing that the woman you love isnt yours, but also knowing that you partook in her abduction unknowingly... that's brutal. I'm excited for the next chapter :D
Author's Response: thank you for your review, next chapter up hope you enjoy!
You definitely need a good beta, who can focus on mis-spelled words and punctuation. You have many, many run-on sentences, which make it confusing to read. Your content is damned good! I'm hooked into the story, even if the missing punctuation and typos are distracting.
If a beta doesn't appear, e-mail me - I'll give it a go with you.
Keep up the good work! I really like the way this story is developing.
Author's Response: thank you for your review and I'm glad your enjoying let me know if you can beta the last chapter for me it's almost done.
OOOOH. I really like this one. It gave us a glimpse at how things were. Poor Gambit... And now My heartstrings are pulling a little more for the present Logan.
I AM ALWAYS APPROVING OF SMUT. :D
Author's Response: thanks for the review. Logan's carrying a lot of guilt on his shoulder, we find out why in the next chapter hope you enjoy!
Oooh, love that last line. So, Remy feels more than he lets on and now Logan knows it. That's got tons of potential. Can't wait to see how this figures in all we know has happened so far.
As for the smut--only if it truly serves the story at this point. I love good Rogan smut as much as the next person, but don't put it in until it's really necessary. --Wendie
Author's Response: caught that did you, why do you think he wanted to take off his head. ;)rnrnThanks for the thoughts I for now I've nixed the smut maybe later! Hope you enjoy the next chapter.
I've never seen Scott and Logan portrayed this way before and I have to say I like it. They're both right, each in their own way, but Logan is also wrong to lose control so much that he would threaten a teammate. Very nicely done. I look forward to more. --Wendie
Author's Response: I wanted for Scott to come across as conflicted cause this is his family, but he also has a responsibilty to the team. and Logan's has only one idea in his head to get Marie back at any cost. Hope you enjoy what's to come.
I really like where this story is going. It has massive amounts of potential. But I must say, the chapters are way too short. This is the first time I think I have read short chapters and actually had the urge to continue the story in my own twisted mind before you get the other chapters up. *shrugs* I'm a freak. But I hope you update soon! With longer chapters!
Author's Response: I'm so glad your enjoying it. Sorry about the short chapter but I think I can make them a bit longer we'll see hope you enjoy this next one.
Love the depiction of logan. I can picture his rage and the fact that you made him so stubborn actually reminds me of the comic version more than the movie. Post quickly!
Author's Response: I know that's what I was going for. and I have a few surprises if you follow the comics at all. enjoy!rnrn
"This was definitely hell, there were two Cyke’s and both were lecturing him"
been there...ok not with 2 Cykes but other than that pretty spot on to my worst days!
Author's Response: ;) I way trying for some dark humor!!!