The Wolverine & Rogue Fanfiction Archive
Barely Legal Since 2000
Really good. I would love to read an epiloge.
I feel like I'm missing something - is this part of a series?
It's kinda confusing, I think a beta reader might help clean up some of the grammar and awkward sentences.
The general idea behind the story is good, though. =)
Nothing like a bit of explicitly described pain, torture and death as an evenings light reading! I love it ;);) and you rounded it all off with a really touching ending.
Damn good fic Jo I really enjoyed it, well done x
Author's Response: Thanks honey, this one was clamouring to come out glad you enjoyed it.