Finally!!!!!!
I don't know what your talking about, your gifted. Are you sure you've never written any steam scenes before? Cause this one left me breathless. It was classy, in character, and HOT! I can't tell you how many times I've read a love scence that was too much like porn or not worth the time. Yours was beautiful and just enough without being too much. I truly love this story,hell I got myself an account just so I could review it. You have a charming way of writing and way of drawing things out to the point where even the reader is left waiting for that first kiss. Keep em' coming! I'm offically addictated

Author's Response: thank you so much for the great feedback. i\'m really glad you said what you did because i think a big part of why i was nervous this chapter wouldn\'t have gone over well was because it wasn\'t as... dirty... as some of the other love scenes i\'ve read. but i felt that if i even attempted to go that direction then it would feel out of place in this story considering how light i\'ve tried to keep it. thanks again. I\'m glad you opened up an account so that you could send me this review. :D

NOOOOO! It was all going so good! I feel like curling up into a ball and wailing. I love and hate this chapter.
Poor Logan and Rogue,it was bound to happen, but still...Can't wait for the update, amazing work as usual.

Author's Response: thank you, thank you, thank you. you\'re right-- it was bound to happen. it had to, right? Marie was just pulling far too many stunts for them not to come back and bite her in the rear. But who knows. Maybe she\'ll be able to work things out with the people in her life. :)

oh very cute! I can't wait for the others to find out, that should be very interesting. Great job as always.