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Admin Note: This story was plagiarized from the book “Project Date” by Kate Perry. You can read the first chapter of “Project Date” here:

http://www.kateperry.com/books/pd2/


AU events in which Marie finds love in an unexpected person and an unusual situation.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 22
Wordcount: 80361 - Hits: 158368
Complete?: No - Published: 02/05/2009 - Last Updated: 04/04/2009
Reviewer: rhiannon_avon Signed
Date: 02/17/2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love your story so far...I'm waiting for Marie to realize that she's missing a good thing to try and make it through this scheme of hers. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: thank you. i\'m working on the next chapter now. i\'m glad you like the story.

Reviewer: rhiannon_avon Signed
Date: 02/23/2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I loved the way you had Logan 'tell' Marie how he felt about her with the art museum. I liked the a/n which said it was au so you could do what you wanted anyway...those are some of the best stories I think.
Look forward to reading the next chapter right away

Author's Response: thanks, rhiannon. :) i\'m still on the fence about the museum scene myself, but mostly i feel like it came out okay. i hope the next chapter doesn\'t disappoint you.

Reviewer: rhiannon_avon Signed
Date: 02/23/2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Lightbulb moments! -click- Those are fun. About time Marie figured out she was being a complete and total idiot trying to get Bobby back. I'm going to love reading the next chapter when it comes up.

Author's Response: haha, yeah, marie has been a bit slow in this story hasn\'t she? I mean, come on. There\'s Logan. And then there\'s Bobby. ..... is that really such a hard decision?? :P

Reviewer: rhiannon_avon Signed
Date: 02/23/2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

You win a gold star...don't worry, it all turned out fine.

I'm glad you've gotten these chapters out as quick as you have...now go and take your well deserved break =)

Author's Response: thank you for the gold star. the last gold star i was ever given was in the first grade when i spelled \'uniform\' correctly. and now i\'m getting a gold star for writing smut. ha!

Reviewer: rhiannon_avon Signed
Date: 03/04/2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

It's about time that Marie figured out her feelings for Logan. I hope that she tells him sometime, maybe even take him to Jean's party. That'd be fun.

I hope you feel better soon, I was excited to see a new chapter. Looking forward to the next one.

Author's Response: thanks so much for the review and for the well wishes. i\'m feeling much better and have plans to write the next couple of chapters soon.

Reviewer: rhiannon_avon Signed
Date: 03/09/2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I can't wait to see what Logan decides to do for revenge...Probably not too happy that he had to remind Marie to uncuff him (or maybe happy, meant he was good ;)

That image of him waiting for her at the beginning of the chapter is well done, described just the way Logan would act.

Can't wait to see the next chapter.

Author's Response: thanks so much. i wish i had a barefooted logan waiting for me. It\'s not fair that Rogue gets to have all the fun!

Reviewer: rhiannon_avon Signed
Date: 03/09/2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Poor Marie!! All she wants is a night with Logan and has to deal with the revolving door at her house. Too bad. I like how Logan and Scott get along though, I always like those stories better. And I love Logan's line about generals and training, it fits great.

Looking forward to the next chapter. =)

Author's Response: thank you for the review. i like it when Scott and Logan get along, too (even grudgingly). I\'ll have the next chapter up and out soon. :)

Reviewer: rhiannon_avon Signed
Date: 03/11/2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Murphy's Law strikes just when everything seems to be going right: comes out that Marie tried to break up Bobby and Kitty, Logan finds out that Marie was using him (at least at first), and Jean goes off the deep end.
Marie should have just found a way to stay home, although everything would end up coming out anyway.

I don't know if I've mentioned it in previous reviews, but I love this take on an AU story. I've only read one other story on this site with no powers that I really enjoyed, so I was surprised to find another one. You still have all the characteristics that make the characters the characters, so the story works well.

Sorry to see that you had a bad evening, hope that things start going your way today. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: the last couple of days have gone much, much better. :) and thank you for the compliment on the story. what other AU story did you read that you liked? if i haven\'t read it before I\'d like to. hope to have the next chapter out soon...

Reviewer: rhiannon_avon Signed
Date: 03/23/2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I read this early Friday morning before I left to go to Canada for the weekend, so I didn't get a chance to review after I first read it, but it just meant I got to come back and read it again. =)

I love how Marie finally lets it all out. Things aren't going to get fixed unless you say something. But Mom, sisters and Scott all are working things out, so thats good. Now they just have to go out and face all the party guests. Sounds like fun. Maybe Logan will show up and make life very interesting. ;-)

Looking forward to the next chapter.



Oh....the AU story I mentioned in my last review was Unconditional by sharonmjl47. It's pretty good, I think you'd enjoy it.

Author's Response: thanks for the review and ooh, am i jealous that you\'re in canada right now. business or pleasure? i\'ve been \'planning\' a trip to canada for the last 9 months. meaning, i want to go but the opportunity to get away hasn\'t presented itself yet. stupid work.
unconditional was an interesting one and i haven\'t read that one in a great while. probably since it was first posted. kudos to you for reminding me about it!

Reviewer: rhiannon_avon Signed
Date: 03/25/2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Quick plans coming together, although I would have hung up on her at 6 am on Sunday, friend or no.

Those are crappy work hours, I wouldn't want to have them -shakes head vigorously-. I enjoy my sleep too much to get up that early. But kudos to you for being able to do that and still have time to write. Gold star for you.

I was in Canada for the weekend for both buisness and pleasure I guess you can say. I play underwater hockey and there was a tournament I went to in Ontario to play at. Then my group went to Niagara Falls for a few hours. I hope you get your chance to go to Canada soon!

Looking forward to your next chapter. =)

Author's Response: underwater hockey? i\'ve never heard of such a thing but you can bet your top hat that i\'ll be looking into now! and a tournament to boot? very impressive. i\'m itching to read all about this interesting sport!
and the next chapter will be up soon. as for sleeping? yeah, i\'ve forgotten what that is. grrr.

Reviewer: rhiannon_avon Signed
Date: 04/05/2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Simple and to the point...a good way to end the story. Looking forward to the epilogue.

Loosely based on the prompt 'I think I love you... // chewing gum'. Slightly AU. Set after X1, Logan's return to the mansion.

Rated: Mature
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 12
Wordcount: 26052 - Hits: 65668
Complete?: No - Published: 02/21/2009 - Last Updated: 09/16/2009
Reviewer: rhiannon_avon Signed
Date: 03/06/2009 Title: Chapter 8: Dangerous Weapons in Pint-Sized Packages

Scary thought that a seven year old is able to blend reality and fantasy. A cool gift, but scary that a 7 year old has it. Raise her up and treat her nicely otherwise one thought and bye bye world.

Author's Response: Yep. That is definitely one kid that you want to bring up well. \r\n\r\nThanks for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: rhiannon_avon Signed
Date: 03/09/2009 Title: Chapter 9: A Question They Wish They Hadn't Asked

I hope they tear apart the Brotherhood for how they caused Leyna's manifestation. That's a reason to run, good thing that they brought her to Xavier.

Looking forward to the next chapter to see what happens next, hope it's up soon.

Author's Response: *nods* Yes, sorry for the dark turn. A happier twist is coming, I promise! Thank you for taking the time to review!