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Rogue could almost taste his presence. Feel his hands as he guided her through the postures, see the bead of sweat making its way down the planes of his back as he turned away from her. She had to blink to chase away the fantasy: he wasn’t here yet. He might not want to come with them. With her. She had left him for dead, after all.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 30
Wordcount: 81308 - Hits: 276450
Complete?: Yes - Published: 02/23/2011 - Last Updated: 07/01/2013
Reviewer: silverthorne Signed
Date: 10/31/2018 Title: Chapter 30: Then let them lie

What a convoluted story! But, I'm glad you stuck with it and gave it a great ending.

Post X3. Professor Xavier returns to the mansion. Tries to help, and be helped by, two people. About bodies, and how to live in them.

Rated: R
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: None
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 2
Wordcount: 7085 - Hits: 5765
Complete?: No - Published: 05/07/2011 - Last Updated: 06/18/2011
Reviewer: silverthorne Signed star star star star star
Date: 12/07/2011 Title: Chapter 2: TWO

I had neglected these boards for some time out of constant disappointment with so much of the material. How fortunate for me to revisit your list of stories and find that you had posted a new one! I am so pleased to see you here again, and with another diamond-bright set of character studies and, as per your style, an oblique look at Logan and Rogue's relationship, such that it is! Some favorite moments:

"Logan nods without comment, and Xavier remembers that he has never really liked taciturn people. People suspicious of or inhibited by speech. Xavier has never known the luxury of being one of those who could trust the body and its gestures, more than words. More than thoughts. Everything Xavier has ever been able to hold onto, has never been something he could hold with his hands." Never felt that Xavier whas ever entirely trusting of or comfortable around Logan...

"The swiftness with which she looks away reminds Xavier of how twitchy she is, has always been. How when she had arrived Xavier had always considered Rogue the feral one, not Logan." As another admirer commented, in all the fanfic based on X1 I've read over the years, I don't think I've ever read anyone's take on Rogue's state of mind when she first came to the mansion...

"Xavier sees Logan lower his head, lean ever-so-lightly out into Kurt’s path. His nose twitching, his entire body still and taut as a hunter’s. Detecting. Inhaling.

Smelling, Xavier realizes. Smelling.

Then Kurt passes, and the moment does, too. Xavier looks at Logan. It isn’t quite jealousy, or anger on the man’s face. Just this serious, grave determination. This frank instinct, or need. Need to take what he can. Need to feel what he can. Where he can find it." One of the things about Logan that has always been at the heart of my fascination with the character is in the way he uses this part of his mutation - his enhanced senses and his inate abilities to "read" what he's sensing - to gather information about a situation or a person. I love how you use that in your descriptions of him. He's a lot more than the adamantium skeleton, the claws, and the berzerker rage - thank you for tapping into that about him.

Now, I see that it's been some time since you've updated. I will be checking back more often in hopes of seeing more of this new story. Welcome back and thank you, Acse!

My first challenge fic. The challenge was for a oneshot, where 1. Logan loses a bet to Marie, 2. Rated M, 3. Involves a chainsaw. Yup, you heard me, a chainsaw. Don't worry, nothing too kinky. ;-) Rated M for dirty thoughts, but otherwise it's my usual -- angst, a dab of smut, and a happy ending. Enjoy!

Rated: Mature
Categories: X1, X2
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Angst, Friendship, PWP, Shipper, UST
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3816 - Hits: 4844
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/12/2011 - Last Updated: 06/12/2011
Reviewer: silverthorne Signed
Date: 08/07/2021 Title: Chapter 1: The Bet

So, she won the bet and he still found out what happened with her that day...which results in 'how' she won that bet. She kept Logan off balance, sure, but he certainly regained his footing at the end! Great handling of these characters!

Is Logan consciously aware of the messages he's sending Rogue?

Rated: G
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: General
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 719 - Hits: 3172
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/10/2011 - Last Updated: 08/10/2011
Reviewer: silverthorne Signed
Date: 08/10/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I recently reread this lovely story in my specially printed-out and bound edition of "The Collected Logan/Marie Saga" by the incomparable tinhutlady. Her writing always entertains and makes me happy. She's a gem that I recommend to anyone looking for a good story and good characterization. This story is just a small example. I'm glad to see she's continuing to be archived here.

Author's Response: Had to laugh. Logan visited me one last time, in a drabble for a friend a few days ago on lj. Considering how many years it\'s been since I\'ve written fanfic, I was floored. Can\'t post here, though, as it\'s House/Logan crossover material, even though Rogue was mentioned.

Roped into attending a conference in Alaska with the X-Geeks, Logan meets up with Marie under very different circumstances. They don't quite live up to each other's fantasies. But maybe that's a good thing.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Angst, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 51
Wordcount: 25812 - Hits: 427066
Complete?: No - Published: 11/07/2011 - Last Updated: 12/13/2011
Reviewer: silverthorne Signed
Date: 12/16/2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Convention

Good job! As a major fan of hot, sexy, savvy, feral Logan stories, I can definitely say that this has been an entertaining read and a keeper. I'm looking forward to more chapters - this one's not over yet, is it??!! I hope you do take the time to finish it off nicely and settle them in at last, before tackling your other pressing projects. I'll have to go check out your other stories, right now! Many thanks!

House has to go to a conference and Logan is roped into going with him, but the trip may be more than either can handle.

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Crossover
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 25908 - Hits: 2770
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/22/2011 - Last Updated: 11/22/2011
Reviewer: silverthorne Signed
Date: 10/08/2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I wish I could find the other House/Logan crossovers in your series. Your handling of both characters is so spot-on, so true, and this is the only such crossover in any genre that truly works for me. Your writing is amazingly adept and your stories always work in a logical way...this is an ordinary world in which extraordinary people exist with their own problems they must face everyday. I miss you, tinhutlady.

Author's Response: I know I am incredibly late with my response, but thank you. Your words are incredibly kind. I rarely check this site, but did today and am overwhelmed by your generous evaluation. I believe the other House/Logan crossovers are on my LJ, at https://tinhutlady.livejournal.com/. Just click on the houselogan tag. Or maybe it's house/logan. I think either will work. But again, thank you.

Some things have to be believed to be seen.

Title taken from Beckett.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3491 - Hits: 1938
Complete?: No - Published: 05/12/2012 - Last Updated: 05/12/2012
Reviewer: silverthorne Signed
Date: 06/10/2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"I wonder what will change when I come back.

I know I'll be back to find out."

Damn...I guess we never will, after all this time! What a great premise from one of the all-time great writers on this site! I just wish you hadn't left this behind to torture us with "what nexts".

She lies. She cheats. She fucks another man, and marks her skin to remember.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: Comicverse
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1502 - Hits: 2987
Complete?: Yes - Published: 09/22/2012 - Last Updated: 09/22/2012
Reviewer: silverthorne Signed
Date: 11/01/2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"But his body pulled her in like gravity...." Ohh...guh...

featured story A look at life at the mansion sans rose-colored glasses. Marie and Logan perfect the art of not noticing. Bad things happen. Scott and Charles deal.

Rated: Adult
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Angst, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 5641 - Hits: 3188
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/09/2013 - Last Updated: 03/09/2013
Reviewer: silverthorne Signed
Date: 04/12/2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Beautifully written, tone-true character portrayals. Logan is deeper than anyone at the mansion knows...except Marie, and perhaps, Hank. And now, with journals in hand, so does Scott, finally.

Hank hasn't made heads or tails of what the program's final objectives for me were, but it's obvious they were trying to break me.

Rated: Mature
Categories: Days of the Future Past
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: Wait for Me
Chapters: 11
Wordcount: 7834 - Hits: 49843
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/04/2016 - Last Updated: 07/05/2016
Reviewer: silverthorne Signed
Date: 07/04/2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, God, what did they do to Logan? I'm a sucker for tortured, lab-rat, recovering-his-mind Logan. Good work!

Author's Response: Thanks!
There is a compounded problem with his lab time here. Whatever went on with Logan it was decided to drop him in this cavernous hole for sensory deprivation to really break him. Then somewhere during that time traveling Logan wakes up to this sensory deprivation and I'm thinking is there for a couple of weeks, one of which the lab has been shut down to minimal operations. So he went from some kind of torture to break him, to the sensory deprivation which went even worse with no real meals or sounds from about for the last week or so. This led him to not necessarily being broken but he was hallucinating and talking to the Rogue he left in the other timeline.

Darlin' it's cold outside. Can Logan convince Marie to stay? A little holiday PWP songfic featuring Logan and Marie.

Rated: Adult
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Holiday, Humor, PWP, Songfic
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2021 - Hits: 2459
Complete?: Yes - Published: 12/09/2016 - Last Updated: 12/09/2016
Reviewer: silverthorne Signed
Date: 11/11/2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Absolutely love your Logan/Marie rewrite of the lyrics...and the smut's pretty damn good, too!

Now complete! Over the course of several months, three very different nights will define Rogue's future.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1, X2, X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Dark, PWP, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 22151 - Hits: 11813
Complete?: Yes - Published: 09/03/2017 - Last Updated: 11/28/2017
Reviewer: silverthorne Signed
Date: 11/14/2018 Title: Chapter 3: Flame

Rough, feral Logan...love that dark, wild creature. All senses and sensation. Great writing!

Logan is leaving.

Rated: Adult
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Angst, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3493 - Hits: 1481
Complete?: Yes - Published: 10/19/2018 - Last Updated: 10/19/2018
Reviewer: silverthorne Signed
Date: 11/04/2018 Title: Chapter 1: It Was the Lark

I'm torn between wanting more and just leaving it exactly as it is. Beautifully written, and un-beta'd! I'm impressed!

Somehow... this story got deleted. :( Chapters 1-18 are posted as chapter "one," and the rest follow as they're updated. There will be 30 chapters now in total.

Rated: Adult
Categories: X1, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Dark
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 95767 - Hits: 11465
Complete?: No - Published: 01/06/2019 - Last Updated: 01/07/2019
Reviewer: silverthorne Signed
Date: 01/20/2019 Title: Chapter 4: Twenty One

The name of the city in Pennsylvania is Erie, NOT eerie ... which is just weird and/or creepy. Ha!

Logan clings to a memory of a day at the lake to get through another night.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: Logan, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Dark, Shipper, UST
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2869 - Hits: 1379
Complete?: Yes - Published: 02/26/2019 - Last Updated: 02/26/2019
Reviewer: silverthorne Signed
Date: 03/03/2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is such a depressingly sad, crushingly brutal story of Logan's bleak final days . . . pretty much like the movie, "Logan", itself. Love/hate just about sums it all up perfectly. But what a lovely memory to bring him some shread of comfort in his current horrible, mundane reality.

You and englishmajor226 have a real lock on wringing riveting Logan/Marie stories that are original and gut-true from Jackman's final movie turn as my beloved Wolverine.

It was one of those nights.

Rated: Adult
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: PWP, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2940 - Hits: 1612
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/03/2019 - Last Updated: 04/03/2019
Reviewer: silverthorne Signed
Date: 04/19/2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

One of those despair-to-hotdamn!nights! Logan's senses are really off if he can't smell the difference between some hooker and his Marie, and he doesn't immediately recognize a ring he bought for her himself. Great, hot story, though!

Moving on.

Rated: Mature
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Adult
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 2
Wordcount: 7953 - Hits: 9487
Complete?: Yes - Published: 09/03/2019 - Last Updated: 09/10/2019
Reviewer: silverthorne Signed
Date: 09/05/2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

The pacing and emotional interaction with these two is slow and steady...like the sex. I would ask for more to this story, but whether you continue it or not, you've left it in a good place. Comfortable with where they are.

One question - when Marie was tending to the body of Jean Grey, why no observation from her on the three distinctive wounds that killed the doctor? I would think that Marie would have had some reaction to that. Just a thought.

Author's Response: First, thank you for the comment. Second, the site ate my first longwinded comment. Anyway, there is another chapter in the works, I guess I wasn't quite done with this one. Great question. Looking at my notes, in trying to keep with the novelization, I focused on Rogue moving forward and glossed over the past. In retrospect her observations could have been drawn out more.

Rogue needs to take control of her life.

Rated: Mature
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 8
Wordcount: 6981 - Hits: 26658
Complete?: No - Published: 10/08/2019 - Last Updated: 05/07/2020
Reviewer: silverthorne Signed
Date: 10/10/2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Intriguing start. Run with it!

Author's Response: Thanks, it's done through ch 7. Still working on the rest.

“My knight in leather jacket,” she said, getting out of Logan’s way so he could get into the apartment. 

Rated: Mature
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3427 - Hits: 989
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/21/2020 - Last Updated: 04/21/2020
Reviewer: silverthorne Signed
Date: 08/08/2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good to see we're up with current events! 😘 Sheltering in place with Logan sounds like a great idea.

Author's Response: Couldn't leave them out of all the pandemic fun. There are worse ideas than having to stay with Logan. Thanks for the comment.

Logan. Rogue. Road trip.

Rated: Mature
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2859 - Hits: 1212
Complete?: Yes - Published: 10/06/2020 - Last Updated: 10/06/2020
Reviewer: silverthorne Signed
Date: 08/07/2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You have set the scene so well that I can easily picture this wooded glade, the grass, the boulders, the waterfall, the rain shower. And them, finally resolving a few issues. Think you'll melt, Sugar?" "Nope, but you might."

"Though Rogue wasn't thinking of wanting things perfect anymore, she only wanted him."

Ah, I do love me a great road trip story. Thank you for this one.

Author's Response: Thank you! It puts a smile on my face to know that the descriptions worked. You're welcome, road trips are always fun.

After Days of the Future Past Logan finds Rogue but is it as simple as that.

Rated: Mature
Categories: Days of the Future Past
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, PWP, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: Wait for Me
Chapters: 4
Wordcount: 11940 - Hits: 6599
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/14/2021 - Last Updated: 08/03/2021
Reviewer: silverthorne Signed
Date: 08/13/2021 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Good story with lots of action...both plot-wise and sex-wise. Love Logan's persistence and Rogue finally coming around. And we fade out on a northern road trip. Good stuff.

Author's Response: Thank you! When Logan makes a promise he likes to keep it, even if time travel is involved. :)