This chapter was absolutely beautiful. The love between Logan and Marie was so evident during their passionate scene together. I loved all the vivid descriptions and could see them playing out in my mind. I especially love this line, 'A sobbing moan was ripped through her throat as pleasure shot through her system, overwhelming her mind and senses as Logan made love to her.' That really shows the beauty of this scene as they have fallen in love. Of course, there are those that are willing to make trouble if they find out about Logan and Marie's romantic yet forbidden relationship. I hope that doesn't happen. Update soon.

Great chapter. Stallworth needs to shut his face. I hope Logan gives him a tongue lashing so painful that he'll be seeing stars. Poor Marie. I hope she'll be okay, but Logan will take care of her. Update soon.

I love Logan and Marie's attraction to one another. Their chemistry is astounding, like it was in the movies. I even saw an echo from the first movie when she asked him if his claws hurt when they came out and got an answer of every time. I'm glad Marie has healed from her wounds. The idea of Charles being her adoptive father is great. He cares deeply for all people, though he can be a little uncertain about the future at times. Unfortunately, Max could cause a lot of trouble if he finds out about what's happening between Logan and Marie. I hope that doesn't happen, though. Update soon.

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Max being a mutant was definitely something I didn't expect. At least I can understand why he treated Marie so horribly. It was expected of him. For him, it has to suck that he had to hide that he was a mutant. If someone does find out about him being Charles's grandnephew, he'll be screwed big time. If Magneto found out, he'd probably use him to get to the X-Men. Anyway, the scene between Logan and Marie was a nice touch. They're going to have to rely on their love for one another to get through the war that is rapidly approaching. Update soon.

This sequel was absolutely wonderful. I loved the beginning so much. It's rare to see Logan cry, and you did it very well here. The explanation as to why Marie survived and how her absorbing of Jean's power helped bring her skin under control was great, and the speech from Buffy the Vampire Slayer was neat, though I've never seen that show. The ending was very sweet with the love scene between Logan and Marie, despite it being brief. You are truly a talented author. I hope to see more from you soon.