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How is the next chapter coming? I realy enjoy this one and would love to see what's next with these two.
I really like this, I would love to know what 5 kids Logan gets, I would bet it is the hardest 5 to hide.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, you will just have to wait and see who Logan gets. :D
I went back and reread this story. Honestly when you first posted it, I thought 'the Kid' was going to be Rogue. I am glad she isn't. What her mutation is and what other mutations Rogue may have interests me quite a bit at this point. I would love to know why Charles banished her. Nice to see you back!
I can't wait to read the rest. I really an enjoying this.
Really interesting opening. I expected the typical he is secretly in love with her plot, but the idea he would just be a donor and they would go from there is really interest. Hurrah!
This story is like candy - it is sweet and delightful and fresh. You are doing great with keeping things different from other stories ( I don't know if that is your goal here or not, but you are doing great.)
I really am starting to wonder if Rogue's a closet lesiban or maybe Andy was such a crummy lover she has no idea how good it can be, but I have a feeling she has issued a challenge to the Wolverine and the response is just going to blow her away. I still love it.
I can't figure out if Rogue is completely naive or the ultimate tease. I kind of like how you are playing her as a bit dense about the entire subject other than nothing until marriage.
he won't, he'll want to but won't and in the shower it will be all Marie, but she she needs a clue by four in a big way. What did she and Andy do? Nothing but kiss???
I like the fact Jubes got as close as anyone has gotten to giving Marie a clue by four she sure needs one. Still loving it.
I can see lots of time in the danger room for Logan over the next six weeks. I don't see how Marie can say she isn't attrached to him now.
More please, love it too much to wait!
OH please tell me Marie isn't going to be stupid enough to tell Jubliee and Storm it is an arranged marriage. She really can't be that naive, can she? She obviously has no idea what Jubliee really feels for Logan either. Oh this could be all kinds of bad.
Absolutely first rate chapter, I am really really glad you took the story in this direction. Excellent!
I am glad you have continued this. It is an interesting take on things. I would delete and repost this chapter and see if it updates the dates.
I like that you don't exactly know where you are going. It's fun.
I like it, I think this is one of the few that really talks about Rogue being more than one person all of the time - not people fighting in her head but a blend.
This is AWESOME. I am loving this. Logan and Marie are so complex. I love that Amalia just described Marie to a T in this chapter.
MORE MORE MORE
Author's Response: thanks alesia. glad to hear that you\'re liking this one so far! more will be coming very soon.
He has to know he is doing, he has to. Just wait until she gets to the works he is supposed to see. I really like this story. I hope you get inspired.
Author's Response: inspiration is slowly trickling in. i\'ll have more to post soon, i hope.
LOVE IT!!!
I haven't ever been skydiving either but I think the section did what you wanted it to do which is give us insight as to who Logan is in his professional environment.
The fact the girls were after him just amuses the heck out of me, does this mean that Marie will have to give him a private seminar? Somehow I can completely see his Grandmother setting that up.
Author's Response: great feedback. thanks so much! I wanted to paint a little picture of his work experience, so i\'m glad it came over well. and sweety? stop guessing outloud what happens next. you may ruin it for somebody else. =P lol
Gotta love Miss Amelia. Just gotta!!! Wait until Logan finds out. I can't wait.
Author's Response: thanks for the feedback. i think Logan needs to hear the news soon. Why draw it out? ;)
I really like what you are doing with this story.
Author's Response: thanks! i hope you\'ll like the future chapters too :)
I think the motorcycle scene worked great. You allowed us to discover what he wanted her to do just like she did. I liked the dinner scene as well
Author's Response: that\'s great to hear, thank you! =)
yep weird. Wondering if she is actually looking to get pregnant for a news story or something.
Author's Response: next chapter will do a little explaining. promise. :)
Okay I am in love with it, I admit it.
Ohh great opening.
Author's Response: Thank you :)