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How would the story have changed if Rogue decided not to take the cure?

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 16
Wordcount: 33037 - Hits: 118926
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/30/2008 - Last Updated: 07/07/2008
Reviewer: CocoLover Signed
Date: 06/13/2008 Title: Chapter 11: Black Is The Colour Of My True Love's Heart

I'm a fan of scott too, especially when he is with somebody other than Marie and when him and Logan are buddies:)

good job on this chapter! can't wait for more:)

Marie's father dies in a tragic car accident and find out that in his will that her new legal guardian is Logan, a complete stranger to her. How will these two clash?

Rated: Adult
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 32
Wordcount: 44672 - Hits: 203507
Complete?: No - Published: 07/13/2008 - Last Updated: 08/13/2008
Reviewer: CocoLover Signed star star star star star
Date: 07/15/2008 Title: Chapter 11: If You Need To Talk

I am so in love with this story:) To be honest, I check every chance I get to see if you have updated.hehehe:) and the highlight of my day is to see that you have updated more than once.LOL:) Keep up the good work!!

Author's Response: Aaah!! Your just like me!! I check like every ten minutes to see if I get a new review and it\'s the highlight of MY day to see that I got a new good review! Oh, your great! Thank you for loving this story!!

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Date: 07/22/2008 Title: Chapter 13: Masturbation

Um...thank god i didn't read this while i was in the office checking my email and nonchalantly checking here for updates:) Cuz i almost suffocated myself with my own pillow trying not to wake up my upstairs neighbor because i was literally Laughing Out Loud:) hahahahaha I Love it!!! next chapter please

Author's Response: Awww, really!? Oh, thank you soooo much! I thought people were goon dislike this chapter! But I\'m glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: CocoLover Signed
Date: 07/22/2008 Title: Chapter 14: Two-Dollar Whore

"Did she name her son Logan or is she saying that I need a father?" hahahaha, But I'm curious to see where you are going to takes this now that supposedly Logan has a kid. hmmmm? *maybe it's really Owen's hahaha then marie has a little brother* IDK!!! AHHHH:) please hurry! P.s. I was in the office when I read this chapter hahaha thank god my boss had stepped out:)

Reviewer: CocoLover Signed
Date: 07/23/2008 Title: Chapter 17: In The Closet

I don't think this chapter was crappy at all, you just keep doing what your are doing because it's coming along great:)...P.S. I know that marie and logan need to develop their relationship a little more but please please let something HOTT happen between those two hehehehe:)(I'm all for having to up the rating *wink *wink:)

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Date: 07/24/2008 Title: Chapter 18: Ripped From Her Arms

Well... that was exciting!:) It didn't feel rushed, i just hope she doesn't turn him in for kidnapping or something. What's Aimee's deal anyway? But I must say, that the last little paragraph tugged on the heart strings a little:) I'm so excited to see some of Logan's emotions. I also feel with the short amount of time that she has been taking care of baby Logan, Marie seems more mature due to taking responsibility. Keep up the good work:)

Reviewer: CocoLover Signed
Date: 07/24/2008 Title: Chapter 18: Ripped From Her Arms

P.S. when I say "I hope she doesn't turn him in for kidnapping or something" I'm talking about Aimee. Plus I'm hoping to see some "lovey dovey" between Logan and marie as Cookie put it, soon i hope:)

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Date: 07/24/2008 Title: Chapter 19: What Could've Happened

AAAAAHHHHHH!!!!! Oh my god:) i'm so excited! Please hurry I need another chapter:) That was great!

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Date: 07/28/2008 Title: Chapter 21: My Name

great chapter! I was starting to go through withdraws:) next chapter please:)

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Date: 07/29/2008 Title: Chapter 22: One More Thing I Wanted

YAY!!!!!!!!!! ohmygodohmygodohmygod:) I need more! please hurry:)

it wasn't rushed at all i thought it flowed nicely. Keep up the good work!

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Date: 08/01/2008 Title: Chapter 24: Early Morning Visit

oh man! If I wasn't excited before (which I was very)about where this was headed I sure in the hell am now! can't wait for the next chapter:) Mwuhahahahahaha

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Date: 08/10/2008 Title: Chapter 29: Beach Trip

Oh my god!!!!! Cliffhanger aaaaahhhhhh!! oh no. :) good twist but please update soon!

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Date: 08/10/2008 Title: Chapter 30: Losing Aimee Fairchild's Sanity

Damn, she had to f**k up the hair. hahaha I know that is like least of the worries but damn:) Since she sucked logan in he needs to hurry up and help her inside and outside her head... Keep up the good work! but hurry I need another update:)