Loved it! :D

This line made my heart melt: "
Sitting up he took the sheet of paper and read it slowly, a warm smile crossing his face before he met her eyes. “I never wanted out, baby..."

So sad and anger-inducing and sweet, all at once. Excellent job! :D

Loooving this so far. A fantastic story, although I'm sad that Marie is gone. :(

What a sweet reunion. They all must have been so, so happy. I can only imagine that joy. Now, onto Logan!

Excellent! I suppose, in the end, it doesn't matter whether Logan knows why he is staying, so long as he does. :)

Great story! Usually, it's difficult to portray Marie growing up and having Logan just accept it without it turning into a sexual relationship. It's almost as though he only sees her as a grown up once he realizes she's old enough to sleep with. I liked that it took him a while to see her as an adult, and even when he finally did, he was still conflicted with wanting to protect her -- a very interesting dynamic. Really, really great story. :)

Oooh lovely. This line was SO cute, it made me giggle lol.

Damn. The beating on his pride.

Feeling a smile suddenly form on his face, Logan grinned, leaning his head gently on her shoulder. "Marieeeeee," he began in a whiny voice.

>> He watched carefully, knew the voice so unlike him that he made her smile, and her eyes met his for a minute before her head jerked back to the screen.

SO amazing. Loved everything about this story (wish it was part of a series! ;p)

Oh, wow. Thar was intense. I'd love to read the same story, but from Logan and Marie's perspective.

The ending just piqued my interest ten-fold. I wonder what Logan did, and what's going to happen next. Darn these one-shots--always leave you wanting more! :p

D'aaaaw. That was precious and priceless. I could totally see something exactly like this happening to our dear Logan and Marie. Loved it :D

Wow! Totally unexpected, eh? I hope that driver's been charged...damned crazy people. Lord, I hope you're doing a bit better; glad you're alright. Geez... No rush on those updates, ok? Just relax and concentrate on getting better! :)

Author's Response: i\'d actually planned on having stallworth being a mutant from the very beginning, so i guess to you all it IS unexpected haha. i wanted to have someone who was just so prejudiced against mutants that they had to have a past of their own with the mutation, and stallworth fit the bill! thank you so much for your review!

Wow. I can totally sympathize with Marie. You've written this beautifully.

Oooh ho ho ho! Things are about to get veeery interesting. :D