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Real name: Kelly
Member Since: 03/28/2006
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Reviews by Aoria
from an exercise- "Pick one adjective to summarize a character." For Logan, I chose "visceral" which got me thinking about the various meanings of the word. Plus, I promised a friend to write a Rogue/Wolverine story without Bobby Drake in it for a change. Here you go.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Dark, Drama, UST, Vignette
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 1101 - Hits: 10250
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/07/2007 - Last Updated: 05/07/2007
Reviewer: Aoria Signed star star star star star
Date: 06/07/2007 Title: Chapter 1: 1. Instinctual

Ohhh, loved this chapter. There were so many interesting phrases and parts.

I loved the use of Logan's sense here: '...and he could taste the flush creeping into her cheeks...'

And just imagining this part made me grin:
'Without realizing it, he held his head up straighter, his chest puffed out slightly, his legs slightly parted on the seat. He was glad McCoy wasn’t there to pick up on Logan’s own rutting scent.'

Great work, can't wait to read the next chapters! :D

Author's Response: Thank you. When I read the comics a long time ago, I feel there was more of an emphasis on the senses, not just the claws. I appreciate all feedback, positive or negative. -Killjoy

Reviewer: Aoria Signed star star star star star
Date: 06/07/2007 Title: Chapter 3: 3. Internal

Woooow that was insane lol. But very, VERY good. I love the intense emotion of your writing and the descriptions are incredible. And those last lines--so bittersweet. Amazing work! :)

Author's Response: I\'m glad you enjoyed the piece. You seem to have grasped exactly the mood I was going for. Thanks for your comments, always. -Killjoy

Rogue’s life spins out of control after taking the cure, but it affects others in even more dramatic ways, especially Logan. Sex, violence, claws, vulgar language, religious issues, medical stuff. Be warned.

Rated: Adult
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Adult
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 41
Wordcount: 86046 - Hits: 363698
Complete?: No - Published: 05/08/2007 - Last Updated: 02/07/2008
Reviewer: Aoria Signed star star star star star
Date: 06/05/2007 Title: Chapter 25: “Open 24 Hours”

Awesome chapters! Love the idea of Logan getting a tattoo and...oh my is his mutation starting to return or is the feral mentality always a part of him, regardless of whether or not he's lost his mutation.
Hee, I'm all excited. Keep up the amazing work! :D

Author's Response: Is it arrogant to quote my own work? Screw it, here we go: \"I was born with you, bub, and I\'m stayin\' to the bloody end.\" In my little Universe, Wolverine is a part of Logan from birth, sort of like a split personality of the semi-lycanthropic variety.

Reviewer: Aoria Signed
Date: 06/06/2007 Title: Chapter 25: “Open 24 Hours”

Ack, sorry! I have a bad habit of reading stories all over the place and I kind of started this story really late. But thanks for the clarification anyways! :D And keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Aoria Signed star star star star star
Date: 06/13/2007 Title: Chapter 35: “Burn Down the Mission”

Yes!!! Loved it! Way to go; can't wait for Logan to regain his powers! :D Yaaaay!

After the "cure" wore off, Marie sought her Logan. Then Rogue found Wolverine. This story comes much later.

Rated: R
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Dark, Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 4
Wordcount: 3518 - Hits: 17122
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/14/2007 - Last Updated: 07/24/2007
Reviewer: Aoria Signed
Date: 04/26/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wooow. I'm very curious about Rogue's new power.

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. Every time I think my work has been forgotten, a new reader will share a comment and make it worthwhile to have written. Best Wishes, M

Date night is here!

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: In Love
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 780 - Hits: 1359
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/31/2004 - Last Updated: 05/31/2004
Reviewer: Aoria Signed
Date: 03/17/2013 Title: Chapter 1: In A Night

Hehe, I can only IMAGINE what those two were up to that kept them from watching the movie. :)

Someone is a little cranky....

Rated: G
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Drabble, Foof, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 420 - Hits: 2205
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/03/2007 - Last Updated: 06/03/2007
Reviewer: Aoria Signed
Date: 12/17/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1/1

Aaaaw, love that last little bit. Hehe. Poor Logan.

A different take on Rogue leaving home.

Rated: G
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1154 - Hits: 1791
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/07/2007 - Last Updated: 06/07/2007
Reviewer: Aoria Signed star star star star star
Date: 06/07/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Iiiinteresting, very, very interesting. Lovely take on the situation :)

Scott's pondering the mansion's relationships.

Rated: G
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Drama, Shipper, Songfic
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1005 - Hits: 2436
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/09/2007 - Last Updated: 06/09/2007
Reviewer: Aoria Signed star star star star star
Date: 06/10/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*sniff, sniff* That was sooo beautiful. I was wondering about those words Logan spoke lol. So eloquent, but even if not his, they still fit. LOVED it! :D

Logan told her...he really did! He can't be blamed if she didn't listen to him.

Rated: G
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 822 - Hits: 2737
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/23/2007 - Last Updated: 06/23/2007
Reviewer: Aoria Signed star star star star star
Date: 06/24/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Haha oh my, was he going back to check each of the used condoms? Haha, too funny.

Rogue gets hit on. Logan kicks some ass. They have sex. (Based on a Nickelback song)

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Songfic
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1427 - Hits: 2503
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/06/2007 - Last Updated: 07/06/2007
Reviewer: Aoria Signed
Date: 03/27/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Haha, poor Logan! Great fic!

Reviewer: Aoria Signed
Date: 04/21/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

NICE! Loved the longer story. You're a fantastic talent. :D

“She flipped it open, only five words were scrawled inside, nearly illegible.”


Rated: PG
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 277 - Hits: 1809
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/07/2007 - Last Updated: 07/07/2007
Reviewer: Aoria Signed
Date: 04/15/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

GAH. That was SO good. I could envision it all so clearly, and that line from the generator is just so damned striking. Amazing. Fantastic. LOVED IT. :D

“Any time, anywhere Marie…”

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 14
Wordcount: 14675 - Hits: 122732
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/18/2007 - Last Updated: 06/22/2010
Reviewer: Aoria Signed
Date: 01/25/2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hehehe--this part made me giggle lol.

>>>“He really is gay?” Marie asked.
“Found him from the bathroom. Drunk as a skunk, gobbling up another man’s wiener. So, yeah. I think he’s gay.”

Author's Response: This was a fun part to write, but I was a little hesitant to post it. After all, it portrayed gay people quite... Non-flattering way. But I\'m glad you found it humorous instead of insulting.

Uh... Rogue enjoys her self-defense class more than the other students do?

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X1, X2
Characters: None
Genres: Foof, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: Poetic Inspiration
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2838 - Hits: 3692
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/01/2007 - Last Updated: 08/01/2007
Reviewer: Aoria Signed
Date: 03/25/2013 Title: Chapter 1: The Shirt

>>>You think you stand a chance, Ice Pop?!”

Jean and Logan have a chat while a silent witness listens in.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 829 - Hits: 2970
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/15/2007 - Last Updated: 08/15/2007
Reviewer: Aoria Signed
Date: 12/04/2012 Title: Chapter 1: What are friends for?

Aaaaaaaaw. That was GREAT! GREAT! And who knew Logan could be so eloquent? Well said. :)

Reviewer: Aoria Signed
Date: 04/30/2013 Title: Chapter 1: What are friends for?

Great story! I wonder if there's a follow-up to this... Hmmm :)

"And what is it that you teach Mr....Logan?"

"Art."


Rated: PG
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Drabble, Humor
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 850 - Hits: 2702
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/19/2007 - Last Updated: 08/19/2007
Reviewer: Aoria Signed
Date: 06/01/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Haha, that's so cuuute. I wish I was in Logan's class. :D

Reviewer: Aoria Signed
Date: 04/05/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hahaha, AWESOME!

Jessie wonders at her parents' relationship as her world comes crashing down. Nineteen years after "Cold, Shiny Claws."

Rated: PG
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: The Wild One
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 670 - Hits: 1696
Complete?: Yes - Published: 09/07/2000 - Last Updated: 09/07/2000
Reviewer: Aoria Signed
Date: 04/24/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Wild One

Love it! A very unique idea, I think. Can't wait to read the other stories in the series. :)

Logan goes into a bar....and comes out with a surprise.

Rated: PG
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: General
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: The Gemini Series
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 6772 - Hits: 1894
Complete?: Yes - Published: 10/14/2000 - Last Updated: 10/14/2000
Reviewer: Aoria Signed
Date: 03/28/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Mirror Image

Cool idea! :)

Bobby adjusts to seeing double.

Rated: PG
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: General
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: The Gemini Series
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 653 - Hits: 1648
Complete?: Yes - Published: 10/14/2000 - Last Updated: 10/14/2000
Reviewer: Aoria Signed
Date: 03/28/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Differences

This reminds me of an episode of the show Sister, Sister, where the twins' neighbour, Roger, who had always liked the twin he knew, suddenly shifted his attentions to the other, "nicer" twin.
Hehe, very cute. I really like this story. :)

Sarah goes out, leaving Rogue behind.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: General
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: The Gemini Series
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2857 - Hits: 1935
Complete?: Yes - Published: 10/14/2000 - Last Updated: 10/14/2000
Reviewer: Aoria Signed
Date: 03/28/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Never Part

Aaaw, so sweet. :D
But, unfortunately, the required proximity will make being intimate a taaad uncomfortable. :P

Once again Logan must save Rogue...only this time its from a threat a little closer to home.

Rated: R
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1536 - Hits: 4186
Complete?: Yes - Published: 09/09/2007 - Last Updated: 09/09/2007
Reviewer: Aoria Signed star star star star star
Date: 09/10/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oooh great one-shot! I really liked this line:

"“No,” I snarl as I grab him by the throat, anger racing through me. “I’m saving her from the death you had planned for her. She’s not cut out to be little miss homebody. Rogue is freedom.”"