I've read this probably a dozen times and I STILL cannot bring myself to to anything but laugh my fool head off at it!! It's just too damn funny!! The screen is so blurry from the tears! Nice job!!

BWAH HA hahahahahahah!!! *wipes tears from cheeks* Oh man!! That was SOOOOOO good!!! *contented sigh* *snicker*

DAMN!!  that came outta left field, Sept!! Just rip out our hearts with a dirty Taco Bell spork why dontcha??

Can we *please* get on with the /other/ stories?? Looking forward to similiar detailed writing; mention of the little things like the sizzle of snowflakes hitting the burning end of a cigar. The normal, human, awkwardness of the first kiss between two new lovers. Those small details that make a regular story come alive!!

Author's Response: This one was only ever planned as a oneshot... but y\'know, now you\'ve put the idea in my head... maybe... I\'m kinda stuck in a rut at the moment with what I\'m writing, so I might play with the concept a little... Hmmmm. Thanks :o) And I love the human awkwardness of those moments. That\'s what makes them so special... *gets happy faraway look in eyes and sighs...*

Not so much dark, ara, as a story closer to what might be the actual truth to the way L & M's mutations interact with each other. Don't confuse what might be the cold hard facts with "distasteful", just because that's how others might choose to see/interpret it.

Were humans really making a jump in evolution, and mutations such as these were a reality, I think you've got it pegged quite acurately. Not everything can be wine, roses and sunny days.

Great read!!

I *live* for stories with no worthwhile redeeming qualities what-so-ever!! They're the ones that're the most fun! Keep 'em comin'!!

Author's Response: That\'s kind of the story of my life. :-)

THIS...needs to be expanded on! LOL, loved Scott raising his hand...*such* a boy scout!

My only complaint... the words "Logan" and "prance" should NEVER appear in a fic, EVER!!!

Other than that...hilarious as all get out!!!

OOHHHH...he WAS a right bastard when he left, but hero worship is a hard thing to get rid of. "Deceiving piece of shit?" Definitely only one way to go from there.

Having been in that place myself, so damn mad you just wanna break things ("using the door of his room as her personal sparring partner") then the calm does eventually set in and you remember the love and the longing. So glad this didn't drag out, her accepting of him, wanting the answer to his question.

When they finally let go, it was beautiful.

OH GODS!!  STILL, after all these years...."Please, Get laid."  STILL cracks me up!!

Sweet ending... all soft and sleepy with "no higher brain function"! Loved it!

Author's Response: Huh? I had already forgotten this story. *blushes* Thanks for your words, it\'s nice to see that somebody still finds this stuff entertaining. :)

Phew!!  That was HOT!!  Loved the exchange at the end, even the mightly Wolverine needs some down time I guess!

I think at some point or other, every man thinks the same thing when faced with the awesome-ness of parenthood. It's nice to see that even the big, bad Wolverine has such human reservations, and cares so deeply about those around him. It truly speaks to his human side!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m glad that you liked to see that. So many fans only want to see his bad ass side. Thanks for the review.