A very cool way to handle that question of 'what happens to people Rogue absorbs?' Love that Logan just knows by instinct that she's still in there; hate how the telepaths just take the word of who ever is talking (I was just as pissed as Logan was!!); so pleased when everyone in her head finally comes together to work as one.
The idea of reversing her 'gift' was very original and the positive open endedness of the last chapter was perfect! A nice read, fast paced and very well done!

This so captures that moment of "do I dare?".....that split second of "what if....?" Wonderfully done, Lady T.... wonderfully done.

I had no words for this....I read everyone else's reviews and realized they'd used all the best ones already.

"There are limits to how clueless any one man’s allowed to be." THIS should be carved on a ROCK and put on display for all to see!!!!

Very cool! Never gave much thought to the mental ramblings that must go on inside Rogue's head, but this read so smooth, I think you nailed it!

WOW. Just, wow. I love happy endings, but you really had me going in this fic.

I usually yell, scream and holler about how things could be so much easier if people just talked to each other! But, wow, I have to say, I really, really liked how you handled this. The non-communication, the misunderstandings, the 'it's really not what it looked like' and the 'you didn't hear the whole thing' moments.

And then, at the end, when it's finally forced on them: the talking, the explanations, the who saw what-when-and what did they think of it, who heard what-when-and what did it make them think?! GADS, I'm just so glad that you got them together; and not in a "ride off into the sunset" "happily ever after" kind of way, because you didn't write this for one of those endings. You wrote it to reflect the real life we live and deal with everyday. Somehow, that makes it an even stronger fic! Beautiful, Aretmis, just beautiful!

Author's Response: You made me very happy with this FB. Thank you so much for reading!

Whoa.

~and Marie… She was kind of trapped under me.~

All and all, not such a bad place to be, now is it?

But PLEASE!! let's get on to chapter 5 and get the poor girl out from under that adamantium enhanced body!!



Author's Response: Uh... The fact that this is PWP doesn\'t of course have anything to do with your eagerness to read yet another chapter, right? Don\'t expect part 5 to take off where they left. This is kind of therapy for me. A way to get back in the mood to write something else. Only thing tying these chappies together is that mirror.

"She became very aware of all the places her body pressed against his. Her breasts, her thighs, his hand on the small of her back, moving lower, pressing her closer against the hardness of his chest, against the hardness of his...Oh god..."Oh god is right!!!  Very nice place to leave things and just let our little shipper imaginations run wild, September!! Great story, well written and leaves us wanting more!

You say 'overactive, Logan obsessed, sleep deprived imagination' like it's a bad thing?!?! If I had that imagination rattlin' around my noggin, I'd let it out to play all the time!!


Author's Response: Oh it does play all the time - believe me *g*

"What the hell do you think I've been tryin to do for the last hour," he growled. "Singin to it?"

Best ending line EVER!!

Of course, he'd be really screwed if Scott didn't call out with more than enough time to get organized and looking like he'd been working!!

For some crazy reason...even with ALLL the great one liners and jabs, the ONE mental picture that really made me lose it...."He picked Scott up by his shirt, roared at him, and deposited him roughly in the sink."Bwa ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!!!

HEARTWRENCHING!!!  Right up until you made it right...well done as always, September.