This is so damned good. I love that Logan thought through the conflicts with Marie's age and decided it didn't matter, and the conflict with her skin, and found a potential way around it that would benefit both of them. And it wasn't a 'for the good of all' type of ethical decision - he just found a logical way to get what he wanted. Your characters were very real and believable. The only part I found a little hard to get past was the mixture of British and American slang, especially given that Logan is Canadian. Once I got past that, it was one hell of a good read. Thank you!

if this is a first attempt, then well done! I'm a Stevie fan, too.

*frown* Okay, now I'm thoroughly confused, but damn, it's entertaining.

You fooled me! I thought this was starting out as a tacky piece, but ended up making me smile really wide. Thanks!

Marvelous - simply marvelous! Love the tone of this story.

I was struggling with the 'telling a tale' sens of this, but then it started flowing, and the last line just sealed it perfectly. Well done.

I've been thinking lately that there should be more fics where they take the obvious kids out into public, and voile! Here it is. Well-handled, too. Thanks!

LOL!

I hate those talking automatic things, too! But Scooter's little zinger at the end? Priceless!

Author's Response: it was my favorite part as well;)

ROFLMAO! Oh, this is marvelous! Thanks for the hearty laugh (and lust-fit as well).

Author's Response: Hee! Glad it made you laugh! Thanks :o)

Oh, I like this. Please carry on with it.

Wonderful story, with bits of witty dialogue and commentary. Marvelous! I may have rated and reviewed this before, but hey - it's worth waxing redundant.