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THank you for the translation at the end - or else I'd have been lost! Good job. I like a short story with some texture in it.
Your characterizations are good, conversation is snappy and engaging, and all in all, I loved this piece. I'll look for more of yours. Thanks!
Wow, this is gripping! I'm logged in under 'favorites' so I don't miss a single chapter. Great work!
Gawd! A perfecet short story: clean grammar, believable characters, emotional depth - perfect!
Sap? I think not. There's an almost poetic grace and simplicity about this piece, and I love it. It's perfect.
This whole package is so well done: the slow build-up of the plot, the coalescing of details, the emotion, the pent-up attraction, until Bang! at the end - and even the grammar and punctuation are clean and accurate. I'm giving it a rare 10 in score!
I swear, this story just gets better and better (other than Logan leaving and being a jerk about it!). I'm starting to really like Creed. AUGH!
Author's Response: I know! This Creed grows on you. It\'s scary.
Wow - great set-up for the plot, 'cause I can't wait to find out what happened!
Oh, this is marvelous - hanging on for the next installment!
I'm lovin' this! The catapult scene was hysterical.
Aw, that's so damned cute! Purrfect ending, too.
LOL! I think I see it coming... (pardon the pun).
Nice closing comment - good twist!
Gawd - this is so a chapter from my life in traffic with the Boyfriend, only the lingerie doesn't help, sadly.
Author's Response: Ah ha, but the question is, who is Logan? You or your boyfriend. ;)
Outstanding! Love the ending.
LOL! Perfect ending!
LOL! I love it! Great last line, grabs ya. YAY!
Wow, a totally fresh approach, and that's rare! I loved this story.
LOL! I wasn't expecting that ending. Good!
I was going to write an answer to the challenge on this same topic, but you beat me to it, and did a great job. My hat's off to you!
Lovely - just lovely. And smokin' hot!
Wicked, convoluted twist, made me constantly question who was who - cunning!
LOL! Love this snarky, sniping exchange. Good job!
Oh, holy mother, this is so wicked. lol!
Yowee, this is intense. Can't wait to read more.