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Real name: Rou
Member Since: 01/03/2007
Membership Status: Member

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I suck at grammar and all things spelling. We're talking I'm baaaad at it.
More importantly I love feedback so much I sleep with it under my pillow at night. :D

 
Reviews by RouDeVil
"There’s no future for us if we stay here.”

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Angst, Dark, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: WAR
Chapters: 26
Wordcount: 24878 - Hits: 147822
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/15/2007 - Last Updated: 12/28/2008
Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star
Date: 06/15/2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh! I wanna know what it said!!

Author's Response: It said *spoiler* and then there was *spoiler*, and then they had to do *spoiler*. Happy? ;)

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Date: 06/16/2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh, that Logan is a stupid stupid man. Just...grr! Stupid. Marie should wack him a few times while he's down.

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Date: 06/20/2007 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Damn, they're gonna be so tired from fighting each other he's not going to be able to fight in the 'other' war. And he is aware that he's whining again, right? Should change his name to Logan 'woe is me' Wolverine. It's like he can't decide if he is a man or a mouse, a very drama- queen-ish mouse. So she's a little bit scared of him when it comes to a 'special' situation. He's a lot more scared of himself than she ever was. I think he needs Sam. Sam challenges him, makes him flare that big ole chest of his out and prove he's the right man for Marie. He needs the matcho competition otherwise he's in his own head too much.

Author's Response: You know, you may be right about that one. About Logan needing another alpha to challenge him to keep him out of wallowing self-pity and thinking how he\'s no good. He needs that extra kick he gets when he gets to bully around people as big and mean as him.

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Date: 07/04/2007 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Holy shit! Frist, ew to the whole maggot thing. I have a leech phobia and they are only slightly less disgusting. Second, again, HOLY SHIT! I don't suppose Vasquez is seeing things? No. Probably not. UPDATE!

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Date: 07/07/2007 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Okay, well, I'm not hungry anymore, thats for sure. And this Logan has some serious children issues! Damn, and I thought I felt bad for Sam, this kid was just conceived and already he's out for it!

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Date: 11/29/2007 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

...Is it bad that I'm okay with Logan killing here? Like, completely okay with it. Like, Logan-kill-her-now-please okay with it.

(Oh, and Logan giving birth to an alien made me giggle. Just a little bit. :) )

Author's Response: Not bad at all. Vasquez can be annoying bitch. But I\'m oping tat Logan will let her go in peace. I kind of like her.

My contribution to the round robin - Because he asked me!

Rated: G
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Drabble
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 569 - Hits: 1930
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/28/2007 - Last Updated: 06/28/2007
Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star
Date: 06/28/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aw sweet. :)

'Hey, ya ever see a walrus do the funky chicken?’

Rating upped because apparently my mind resides in the gutter!

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Foof, Humor, Shipper, UST
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 5340 - Hits: 10702
Complete?: No - Published: 06/29/2007 - Last Updated: 07/23/2007
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Date: 06/30/2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Three Word Slip

Soo...what your *really* trying to tell us here is that... your going to subject Rogue to more eye-twitchin', 'oh jeez, baby doll' embarassment? Cooly. And can I just say... the water sprinkler also gets a good reaction. :D

Dark!/ Feral Logan here finally admits to hs darker nature through an incident that leaves Marie vulnerable. Which this Logan exploits.

Rated: Adult
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Dark, Drama, PWP
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 5898 - Hits: 10409
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/30/2007 - Last Updated: 06/30/2007
Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star
Date: 06/30/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Blood

Hot story but !!EWWWWWWWWWWW!! :D

Author's Response: It\'s not for everyone but thanks for reading and letting me know what you thought.

She'll make the bitch go away.

Rated: R
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 4
Wordcount: 4683 - Hits: 15793
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/02/2007 - Last Updated: 07/03/2007
Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star
Date: 07/04/2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

As a member of the 'Yeah, Iceman is kinda cool' *ducks* O.O erm.. group. I would like to say this is a refreshing take on him, he is very much the hero of this story. Marie is one lucky little lady, aside from her husband dying of cancer, of course. Two men are comppletely love her and all but whorship her, two men who shouldn't be! (By that I mean Bobby being gay and Logan being loner/emotional unstable) But I feel so bad for Logan. He's just five minutes late for each bus stop, isn't he? The ending also feels, that, well, things will not be going well for those two in the future. Like they'll be together but just because they feel like they should. Anywho! It was depressing but very good and different.

Look forward to more War! *cough*AlteredVision*coughcough* O:)

Author's Response: War is on my to-do list right now. Altered Vision is... Eh... Erm... Is... Let\'s just forget it for now... :) And thanks for the fb. Hmm... I have been toying with the idea of the epilogue. I don\'t see their future as grim as you do, so if I write it, you may be in for a surprise.

Guys do it all the time.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Humor, Songfic
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: Female Of The Species
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1973 - Hits: 2891
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/04/2007 - Last Updated: 07/04/2007
Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star
Date: 07/04/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

“It’s a side affect of the alcohol,” Jean stated, surveying the men, “and that’s my medical opinion.”


My favorite line! Loved how you spred the blame out over all five couples and not just making Logan the fallout. Great story.

Author's Response: Thanks. I thought it was nice of the ladies to spread the blame.

It's kinda self-explanatory.

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: The Insane Adventures of Two X-couples
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 469 - Hits: 1945
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/04/2007 - Last Updated: 07/04/2007
Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star
Date: 07/04/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Two X-Couples Celebrate the 4th of July

Heh, what you don't see later is Logan aiming firecrackers at Scott!! >D

“Any time, anywhere Marie…”

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 14
Wordcount: 14675 - Hits: 122931
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/18/2007 - Last Updated: 06/22/2010
Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star
Date: 07/19/2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

A day or two ago and I read a simple little smut story about big boy breast feeding that had a snark little ending. Now all of a sudden I come back to find a whole little soap opera? Hmm.. Okay. Bobby is my favorite in this one *ducks* O.O, Logan is sweet and all but the whole immediately marrying Marie and slight mood swings irk me just a bit, he seems kinda flaky. And Marie, well. She's just reacting to her situation, whatever situation pops up. Poor Camille. :(

These chapters follow from 'Talking Sense', Marie and Logan have a few points in life to go through and it isn't always easy.

Rated: R
Categories: X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Friendship, General, Holiday, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: Sense Series
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2368 - Hits: 2314
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/22/2007 - Last Updated: 07/22/2007
Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star
Date: 07/22/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Making Sense

perfect and beautiful. I love this series!

When Logan and Marie get a new place, they need a few things... Jean and Scott are there to help.


Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: The Insane Adventures of Two X-couples
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 431 - Hits: 2234
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/22/2007 - Last Updated: 07/22/2007
Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star
Date: 07/23/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Two X-couples Experience the Institution of Bed, Bath & Beyond

I love how she didn't code bodysuits. And yet Scott still didn't get it. :)

Prime example of their skills and knowledge.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Angst, Dark, Humor
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 14
Wordcount: 15650 - Hits: 82484
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/25/2007 - Last Updated: 07/25/2007
Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed
Date: 07/26/2007 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Interesting story. I've never seen Resident Evil so maybe that has something to do with my confusion but-- I have no clue what happened in the end. Okay, they got out (I think) and there was a really big undead dog? That did or did not eat them? And then what? They turned everyone else into zombie-thingys? Or was the whole world already zombie-thingys?

Author's Response: Along with their mutations and other enhanchments those people had infected W&R with a virus that turned everybody insane cannibals. Dog didn\'t kill W&R, but they were carrying and spreading infection. And this wasn\'t a crossover with RE per say, one could say that the movie inspired me, and I took random elements from it, threw them in to a closet with W&R and watched what happened. Thanks for the fb. :)

Alone in the darkness, dancing, dancing and twirling endlessly.


Rated: PG-13
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: Vagabond's Valse
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1165 - Hits: 1853
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/27/2007 - Last Updated: 07/27/2007
Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star
Date: 07/28/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Did you know vagabond is a synonym for Rogue? :) So it was destiny! (Even though she actually never went by Rogue in this fic.) I have to say, you had me worried with Xavier's eagerness for her to come. So I was relieved it wasn't some 'twisted old man needs a new toy against Magneto what the hell did Logan sign her up for' kinda thing. And say no to Logan AND have to grow old? Uh--tough choice. :)~

Author's Response: A synonym? Funny. Hadn\'t even thought about that. And Xavier really was one of the good guys in this one. He was just confused since he hadn\'t heard about Logan in such a long time. Confused, worried, and maybe even missing him a bit. And the choice at the end was tough for Marie. She didn\'t really even know Logan as a person that well. She only knew his motivations, why he kept rather wandering around than settled down. So it was more of \'do you leave your whole family and go with this complete stranger\' -kind of situation for her.

Marie hits eighteen, and hits a strip club. I'm blaming Jubilee.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Foof, Humor, PWP, Songfic
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 4
Wordcount: 14094 - Hits: 20103
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/31/2007 - Last Updated: 08/18/2007
Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star
Date: 08/08/2007 Title: Chapter 2: The Barman And Part-Time Crash Test Dummy

This is great. I love how Marie's 'lack of skills' just deflates the entire overly sexual vip of the stripping. Now, Poison might be out. But I find Alice Cooper's "Feed my Frankenstein" to be a marvelous song to 'dance' to. At least, I'm *guessing* it would be. *cough* :P

Author's Response: Jus\' *guessing* huh, yeah right, come on what are ya hidin\' in that closet o\' yours? :)

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star
Date: 08/14/2007 Title: Chapter 3: Little Asian Girls Are All Pep And No Talk

ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo :D

Author's Response: *g*

Dead dogs of Desperation Welcome You, Stranger!

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Angst, Crossover, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 12
Wordcount: 15989 - Hits: 44677
Complete?: No - Published: 08/01/2007 - Last Updated: 08/04/2007
Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star
Date: 08/01/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oooooo....this can not be good. It's like watching a horror movie and they never hear you when you yell, "Don't go in there!"

Author's Response: They never hear. They just keep going and then BOO!

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star
Date: 08/02/2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh my gawd! The bad guy is a sadistic Snow White?! lol! That's great. Well, not for them, I guess. Can't wait to see how Logan's gonna fight this one, without that handy healing he's so use to. And your Rogue is so mysterious! It's fabulous.


...Does he do it by whistling to them? Or does he go for the high pitched opera singing? Sorry. I'll stop. :)

Author's Response: \"...Does he do it by whistling to them? Or does he go for the high pitched opera singing? Sorry. I\'ll stop. :\" Heh. All in due time. You\'ll see it eventually. Can\'t go spoiling the story.

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star
Date: 08/02/2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE. Please. :)

(ps. I'm lovin' the scraemin' Wolverine!Wooo!)

Author's Response: You\'re in for a real treat with the upcoming chapters, then. :)

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Date: 08/03/2007 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Uh oh... Gah, stop ending the chapter! I end more! Oh, and I love how there in a worse then life or death situation and they're cracking jokes. :)

Author's Response: Would you rather that I wrote all of this in to one, long as a heck chapter? I could of course do that, but I have a feeling that it would be a b**ch to read... :)

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Date: 08/03/2007 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Aw, now he's all alone. :( And... what exactly is inside of them? I'm just guessing but that could cause problem's later.

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Date: 08/04/2007 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

He killed Xavier?! What the HELL! Damn, Logan, lets take that rage down to a mild 9.3. I wanna know what Marie's doing. Just sort of standing there being a drone? Heh, okay, that a little funny...drooling..."Ugh..."

"Tak had made it possible for miners to dig this deep. Tak had fortified unsteady tunnels. Tak had allowed them to open the Ini. " ---Tak is getting on my nerves. I'm with Logan, arrogant gods piss me off. K, maybe a 9.7 is acceptable...


Author's Response: *Nobody bosses me around. Nobody.* Logie, Marie called and asked you to pick her up from the mall! *Okay.*