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Okay. There was a lot going on in the chapter and you know what made the biggest impression to me. The school has its own freakin' slushi machine??!!! That's not even close to being fair! You wanna know what we had at my school?! Huh?! Water and milk! That's it! Slushi machine; mutants just get all the cool stuff... *grumbles*
Again, SO funny. I'm loving this story. Although when I was a bad lil' teenager the McDonald's parking lot is where you got rowdy. ESPECIALLY if there was cops near by.
AW, so sweet.
Author's Response: Why thank you.
Aw. The little mouses were so cute with lil claws n' everything.
See, now, I thought AC/DC was Scottish..hmm... Anywho! You should have fever more often, this story was extremely high on the 'damn that shit it funny' scale.
Author's Response: I don\'t think my body could take it any longer. Last night I crawled on all fours around the apartment until dear hubby practically locked me in to the bedroom and forced me to sleep. But I\'m glad this fic worked out. :)
Author's Response: Uh, and that song has always reminded me of Logan. To me \"dirty and mean\", \"lock up your daughter, lock up your wife\" doesn\'t sound very Scott-ish. But hey, it\'s a matter of opinion. ;)
Author's Response: Duh. Sorry for being so dense. You meant Scottish, not German, right? I\'ll fix it up. They\'re Brittish-Australian.
That wasn't as bad as a cliffhanger. I'll let you live for this one. *g* That Logan is do dedicated, sweet man. But are we gonna find out WHY the military wants her? I have my ideas.... :)
Author's Response: Phew, I\'m tired of running from all you cliffie haters haha LOL :)
Poor Marie she\'d popular with all the wrong sort of people, and the military wanting her can never be a good thing. But she\'s Marie, gun-toting, kick-ass Southern gal, she ain\'t gonna make it easy for them to take her that\'s for damn sure!
Oh man is this good. Very intense. I don't suppose the 'dark figure' is Logan with a bottle of advil? *sigh* Can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response: Nope, think all the military conversations, *cue ominous music*...
*sighes( I hate cliffhangers, you know? And this is a REALLY big cliff. I don't need this kind of stress during finals....UPDATE SOON!! :D
Author's Response: Sorry didn\'t mean to cause any stress, am definitely working on the next part, tomorrow or the day after maybe *promise*...*g*
..this does not make me feel better. :P
Author's Response: Ahh...I\'m sorry, *hugs?*
I actually like this cliffhanger...am I weird? But it keeps the drama and the anticipation high but it also leaves plenty of hope. I'm TRUSTING that you won't kill Marie or Logan....get that? 'trusting'. *hinthint* :D
Author's Response: Killing Marie or Logan, now honestly would I do that to you after all the tension and angst I\'ve put you reader through?
Well alright yeah I would....but I\'m not going to...maybe, probably...
Damn, it is just so hard to make a decision with a bunch of bickering voices in your head! Good chapter, action, suspense, and a happy/ slighty leaning towards naughty ending. Good job. :)
Author's Response: Yup, with Arrington and Charles up there, it\'s a bit like havin\' a three pronged Jekyll and Hyde, as well as throwing in a reckless Marie! :)
"And I have a really big flashlight.” Oh, I bet he does. *g*
This is just a openner right? There's more? Please?
Author's Response: Maybe I have a lot of other fics that need to be finished also. Thanks for the review
Aw. Big bad Wolvie needs rescue from a little girl. I'll rescue him. ^.~ *g*
Author's Response: Go ahead! ;)
I love when pesky jam jars bring people together. *g* Loved the contrast of the dream and reality, very good.
'Pink' is about oral sex? I did not know that. I just thought it was banging virgins. P.S. "oh-what-nice-tonsils-you-have kisses." great line.
Heh. Does he really think he needs a million dollars for that? I doubt it. I need to be Jubes friend, though, I like the way she thinkgs!
Damn that girl is good. Funny as hell.
Heh, that was funny. Good job.
The word penetration makes me giggle... :D
I love how the chapters are sort of following the movies, really cool. Marie's a stubborn little babydoll ain't she?
Okay now...um...uh... I have nothing to say.
Author's Response: Is that good or bad? - Hoping it\'s good!
Aw your so mean. Great sex then a "Jean"! :( You know she's mentally screwed forever now, right? Poor baby...