This was lovely. Just what I needed - thank you :o)

I loved Logan's gruff awkwardness, his internal conflict, and the whole thing was wonderfully true to character.

Heart meltingly perfect *g*. I feel all warm and glow-y now *g*

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m glad you thought Logan was in character; I didn\'t want to make him too mushy. ;) Thanks again for the feedback!

"This is more Logan/Scott than it is the four of them"
...Really???.... Oh...you didn't mean in *that* way...*grins* ahh well...LoL!

"Scott: It’s not rocket science Logan, how hard could it be? Look, fuck, look, fuck…"

Oh man, you made me SNORT out loud with that one. It wasn't pretty LMAO!!

For some horrible reason, the whole thing reminded me of my driving test...yeah, don't read into that - I didn't pass *that* way Lol! Just that before I took it, my instructor was going on about defogger, then he said 'remember to use your mirror all the time. Look, drive, look, drive'...and yeah. Cue the snorting laughter.

Ok. Well, I'm sure you wanted to know that...I'll try and stop telling my life story in fb from now on *g*. This fic was so much fun though :o)

Author's Response: i thought about that logan/scott, but then i just left it. peeked some people\'s interest i see;) i really made you snort? hehe... i\'m getting better at these then;) \'look, drive, look, drive\' don\'t you just hate how instructors of anything are always rambling on? i thought your little fb story was funny... i don\'t mind you sharing at all.

Awww - that was so *cute*! Hugs totalgonnerLogan!muse - he doesn't stand a chance... bless 'im. *g*

Author's Response: I know! poor ol\' chap. But maybe I\'ll give him a chance in the next chapter - if there is a next chapter.... It\'s been so long.

"Logan tried to envision that. An ice cream smeared Marie. And as her knight in shining armor he surely would help her to get rid of it... slowly..."

Hee heee! I LOVE where these ficlets are going *g*

*goes off to find some ice cream* :o)

Author's Response: Did you expect them to go into another direction? ;P And I hear you there. All that talking and writing and reading about ice cream makes me want to eat some too...

Woo the saga continues *g*. Love the ending - like slapstick...only in fic form! Much fun! :o)

Catching up on my fic reading - just read this and the laundry one - LMAO!! I love your Jean and Scott...I mean, I love your Logan and Rogue too, but your Jean and Scott...and Logan's reaction to them, they make these fics. They're brilliant *g*!

"Jean: God, I love it when you break the rules! *kisses Scott madly*

Logan and Marie: … *crickets chirp in the distance*"

LMAO! I could just see their expression! So much fun!

Author's Response: i had to do the cricket thing... i just kept hearing it ;)

“All this pansy-ass fruit shit in the fridge and not a single fuckin’ jar of cherries!”

Ahhhhahahahahaaaaaaaaaa!!! OMG that line makes this ficlet!

Author's Response: i laughed when i wrote that line too, heh.

But I’d wager a bundle that Butch never did this to Sundance
Oh that just made me snort with laughter. It wasn't a pretty sight lmao!!

I'm so glad you wrote the final part. It was light and deep and emotional and warm and fuzzy all at once. A perfect way to end *g*

Author's Response: That line just popped in my head while I was hammering away. I wanted some kind of Butch & Sundance reference in here to tie up the ending, and that one just blindsided me. I was laughing while I wrote it! Thanks, September.

“Has he kissed you since you took the cure?”

Oh good god update!!!! Like NOW!!!!


Author's Response: I guess I\'m some of that \'twisty evil\' that was mentioned below. *mwahaha!*

Wolf, you write damn fine smut *g* Wonderfully in character, sexy by being realistic, not too mushy, not to detailed. Very well written. And hot! :o) *sends you a naked soapy Logan in thanks*



Author's Response: *prostrate on floor at the thought* guh..... hairy man good.

I know I'm appallingly lazy at commenting at the moment, but I just wanted to say that you rock at plot!This story has me totally hooked. I keep checking for updates, even at work. Hee!

*sneaks down to hold Logan’s hand in the med bay*


Author's Response: September, you just bought a double-chapter posting today. I posted on earlier, but I\'ll poke on another, just for you! Thanks!

I'm gonna miss this fic! - it's been my treat when I get home from work everyday - now I'm gonna have to do something hideous, like housework or something *shudder*

I absolutely loved your proposal scene. Logan's wry comment when he had to get to his knees to get the fallen ring, the whole thing was just gentle and natural and perfect.

And “you know me: what doesn’t kill me, pisses me off.” - Lol! Yep, that's Logan alright.

I look forward to the epilogue :o)

Author's Response: Of the entire roller-coaster ride, that proposal/wedding scene was the only one I was really unsure of - but then I don\'t consider myself a schmaltzy romatnic, nor a hard-bitten sort either, so I was working in strange turf. Knowing that a few people were eagerly awaiting their daily \"Poison\" fix makes the whole thing worth while. It took months and months to write the whole thing, and I was doing brief edits right up to the daily postings, so I invested way too much into it. You make that all fell better, and I thank you.

You write very well in a language that's not your native language. There were a few typos, but it was beautifully written, it just flowed.

And it was so sad! Realistically so as well, and so in tune with the characters at the end of X2. Fantastic first fic :o)