oh.......no......
He can't love her? God that Xavier is a bastard. GAAAAAA#*&£W$*&£(£*H()###*&£$!!!!!!!!!

This livened up my Tuesday - thanks! Made me giggle. Poor Logan...or not *g*. Loved the image of Scott and Logan commiserating over shots :o)

So funny! Sniggered my way through the whole thing *g*. Though my fave bit has to be
"“Darlin’, it tickles a lot more than my nose.” Oh. My. God. Okay, ten points for the Wolverine. ‘Cuz damn if his one liner wasn’t a HELL of a lot better than mine." LMAO!

Don't suppose we could tempt you to a sequal??

Author's Response: An unintentional comments sequeal? I don\'t know. Maybe, but I\'m glad it was consistantly silly. Consistancy is important!

Oooh I'm liking this - it's something a bit different *g*. And I'm hooked!

Author's Response: It\'s different, alright. I know there\'s been very little L/R so far, but its coming, I promise.

I love your Rogue in this - she's so kick ass that I think Logan's gonna be screwed. Hopefully in every sense of the word *sniggers*

Looking forward to the next part.

Oh the image of Hank sitting quietly chatting to the professor over a nice cup of tea - seeing Logan catapulting past the window into the lake... it's still making me laugh. So hard.
LMAO!

Woah - dark! But good! And this bit?

"The best thing next to gettin’ off is sinkin’ another part of my anatomy inta’ somethin’ livin’. The first second, when the claws slide in like a hot knife goin’ through butter and the blood spills over my hands… everything gets quiet. Next thing I know, I got the metal taste of blood stuck to the back of my throat and I’m tryna’ fuckin’ swallow… but I can’t. Fuckin’ tease."

This was fantastic! I love that bit! So dark. Knife going through butter, and blood spilling. OMG that's so vivid I can almost feel it! Eeak! ...And that's scary!

And that bit's your subtle Rogue reference as well isn't it...am I right...?

"I hadn't realized how much she'd become part of my every day, just studying on the floor while I watched tv, snuggling up to me in the middle of the night, bringing me coffee in the morning. Every little mis step I took now, hurt."

*heart breaks for Logan* That bit's so sad. I was thinking, there's no way this is gonna have a happy ending... meep...

Then...

"Is.. is that what you think this is? You think Ah want another *MAN*?"

I have to admit, my first thought was – huh? she's breaking up with him for Jubilee??!

"Nose nuzzled at the inside of her wrist, her scent warmer there, as I inhaled it deeply. So warm, richer than I remembered, a hint of hormones.... My eyes had started to close, but now they jerked back up to hers."

Hormones...? AhHA! YAY! Love that ending *g*!


Author's Response: Angsty with happy ending? You know me, lovely. I love that.

"Not that I’d be unethical enough to take a peek, but do you think that they fight so much because deep down they actually like each other?"

....heh heh heh....a little TOO much i think *g*... You know what they say...
LMAO!

I have to admit I was just skimming through the wrfa updates - not really planning on reading anything (*is BIG time lazy today* *g*) - but this one totally caught me *g*.

"He’s done things to her because of those eyes he ought to and probably will burn in hell for."

Loved that bit. And this...

"The sort of love that can be deadly, it’d only take a second for either of them to lose control, for his claws to appear at the wrong moment, for her to slip and the poison of her skin to bleed him dry.

And secretly it’s what they both want."

...is my favourite. The pure angstiness. The craving they have for each other and something much darker.

And, heh, love the last line too. Rogue's not quite so pure and innocent as he thinks *g*
:o)

Author's Response: Love a dark Marie, in control, totally domineering Marie. Figured since he gave her all those nightmares, he really shouldn\'t be allowed to walk away. *Scary Marie* LOL ;) thanks for the review.

I hardly ever give ratings - but you are getting a 10 for this *g*. I really loved it. It totally touched me. It's one of those that's going to stay with me for a long time. It unfolds beautifully, and leaves a lingering sense of... I don't know...longing maybe. See? You've made me all sigh-y & unable to think up words *g*.

I love the pov – and I even like Jean in this.

"Leather and Silk baby girl. Leather and silk"

...*is content*


Author's Response: Thank you, its great to get a rating from you. I\'m really glad that you got something out of this story.

Ok, I liked this from the moment you said Scott and Logan were cops *g*. Jubes amd the waitress - yeah I can see that. Then Hank as the chef... *sniggers*. Who's Jean?? Please tell me she's the woman that comes in to clean out the diner's toilets twice a week?? Heh heh heh... *g*

"Some lights don’t shine bright enough, can never shine bright enough, but together, together maybe they can be something extraordinary."

That? Is a fantastic last line!

Loved this fic. Went all gooey and soppy when Logan was at her door at the end...Yay! :o)

Author's Response: It\'s what we shippers have always known, Logan and Marie together are fantastic! LOL ;-)