This was a very interesting turn of events. The imagery was horrific in places (as you probably intended) and it stayed with me a long time. Very original. The story felt somewhat disconnected in places but it was still very well written. What I don't understand is why did the Professor or any other telepath leave Logan and Marie in such a state? Could they not hear their pain? Why not put them out of their misery? Did they not deserve better? All in all great work but these questions kept bugging me.

Now this was really funny! Especially Logan's narrative :-) I could imagine him reading just about anything - you really can learn a lot from romance novels :-) smart man.

Wow I really loved this one. Rogue coming from the Brotherhood, the animosity of Storm and Kitty (the latter I wanted to smack on the head), Xavier keeping them in line but not being able to help Rogue. Scott.. Wonderful progess from mistrust to liking Rogue (I love it when his character shines that way and Jean nowhere in sight - I mean he is much more than mere boyfriend). And Logan - such a fantastic portrayal of him and his budding relationship with Rogue. Their going out for a beer - phenomenal!!! Great work!

Oooh I like this turn of events. Brilliantly done :-)

Wow! I can't believe this one has so few reviews. The question-answer part was AMAZING! I could feel their mutual assumptions going down the drain and their connection solidifying. Phenomenal work

Brilliant story!

Wow, what a lovely scene! Great job!

This was simply lovely - especially the final act. You have managed to portray Logan's kindness and left me with such a great feeling! Thank you!

I read Marguerite's story and you have added some truly memorable moments that I felt were missing from Logan's POW. I can't believe this story doesn't have the reviews it deserves.

I have really enjoyed the parts of this story. You've done a marvelous job in portraying the complexity of the situation, and their dialogue was a stroke of genius. It all felt so real! I could feel their pain and I could walk in Marie's shoes without effort. Great work!

I really have no words to describe how powerful your writing is in this one. It was sometimesvery difficult to read (in terms of emotional response). You even managed to show that Jean was always treated better than Rogue - (just like in the comics) - she was revered for her choice while Rogue was at best only misunderstood. Thank you for this one

I read this one a long time ago and was truly happy when I found it again! It is one of my favourites and your first fic I have read. I love how you showed their mutual misunderstandings and Rogue's painful trying to be someone she was not in order to be more adult. Since we started their story from the end of the relationship I was shocked by their fight at first - I kept thinking what had gone wrong between them? Then you slowly unravelled the story - wow! It was really beliavable. Thank you!

Wow. This one packed quite a punch. It must be agony for Rogue, living like this. You managed to convey her feelings perfectly. And Logan is a mystery here...