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Logan brings home a new recruit for the X-Men. Will she compete with Rogue for Logan?

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X2, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 7
Wordcount: 5936 - Hits: 38511
Complete?: Yes - Published: 02/01/2010 - Last Updated: 02/04/2010
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Date: 05/26/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Logan comes back to the Mansion with some slut (well, I don't know if she's a slut or not, but she's not Rogue, so I automatically hate her!); he's attracted to her, but he doesn't seem to be determined to see Rogue as a "kid", so there's hope this will not end in heartache for her. If this Donella causes problems for our favorite couple, I hope Rogue sucks her dry!

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Date: 05/26/2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

It's worse that I feared; she's a slut that swings both ways! And the last line has me VERY worried! Forget her making Logan hurt Rogue, she might get ROGUE to hurt LOGAN! Which would serve him right for bring her to the Mansion in the first place!

Despite the whole let's-bring-in-another-woman-to-make-problems-for-Logan-and-Marie, I like the fact that this isn't just another Marie/Logan/Jean triangle story. It has good grammar and spelling, too.

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Date: 05/26/2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I have to say that even with the hint from the last chapter, I was still a little surprised by the way this story appears to be unfolding. It seems like Rogue is showing more interest in Donella that Logan!

Well, I'm still impressed with the quality of writing and grammar. I just hope that Logan and Marie get together in the end.

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Date: 05/26/2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

OMG! A threesome with Scott and Jean! I would have LOVED to see the expression on their faces when she dropped THAT into the conversion! Well, since she hasn't been catty or make fun of Rogue and wants to HELP her land Logan, she can't be all bad. I'm not too surprised that Rogue was willing to enter a sexual relationship with another woman; sometimes attraction is based on more that what's between a person's legs. Plus she has all those guys in head! I'm amazed she doesn't hit on more women!

If nothing else, you get high marks for introducing a new character and not following the somewhat overused plot line where Logan sleeps with Jean, Scott and Marie turn to each other for comfort, one or both couples make up, and they all live happily ever after.

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Date: 05/26/2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Why Grandma, what lovely smut you write! *big grin* Well, it's nice to see that Marie has turned the tables on Logan. It's usually her that becomes jealous seeing him with other women. It would be interesting to see if Donella is able to arrange a threesome with our favorite couple.

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Date: 05/26/2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Ahhh, that was so sweet. Donella appears to actually care about Rogue (her plan to have sex with both of them a the same time not withstanding) and wants her to be happy with him. Hopefully this will get Logan off his "grumpy old cuss" but and tell her how he feels about her. This fic just gets better and better!

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Date: 05/26/2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Jumping Jehoshaphat! I did NOT see that coming! Not only was there no threesome *disappointed sigh*, but Donelle is doing the PROFESSOR! Wild!

This is an awesome story! Logan finally takes Marie as his mate and the Professor gets a lover to boot! Nice job!

Logan seen through the eyes of the women in his life, starting with his three favourite: Jubes, Kitty and of course, Marie. Rogan eventually, AU. Mixes the movies with the comics

Rated: PG
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Friendship
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 12529 - Hits: 24057
Complete?: Yes - Published: 02/03/2010 - Last Updated: 05/21/2010
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Date: 01/10/2014 Title: Chapter 5: The Snow Is Gone

This is sooo good! It is so sweet and touching and beautiful. I love the relationship with Logan and little Beccah.

Logan returned to Rogue, not for the first time. But this time Marie behaves odd and she has a little secret, that wouldn’t stay a secret any longer.
Now the two make their first experiences in parenting their baby.
Laura/ X-23 and Origin's Victor/ Sabretooth in here!

Rated: Mature
Categories: X1, X-Men Origins Wolverine
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 48
Wordcount: 104647 - Hits: 585828
Complete?: No - Published: 02/11/2010 - Last Updated: 07/11/2012
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Date: 04/28/2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I really like this chapter! It's so touching to she how badly Rogue feels about ignoring her pregnancy and what affect it has on little Becca. And it's so cute to see Papa Wolverine purr for his cub.

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Date: 03/15/2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

When I first read this chapter and saw Marie's comments on the various names, I couldn't help but laugh a little. I don't know anyone named Rachel or Leonie, I know a couple of people named Jennifer though, and they all are very nice. However, I DID go to school with a girl named Chantal and she had a...certain reputation, shall we say.

I love this story! I always love to see the softer side of our favorite badass. He would be the first to admit that he may not be the most moral or upstanding person, but his love for Marie should never be in question, even from someone as narrow-minded as Scott!

I know there are people who are uncomfortable with Marie's age, but I think the author has shown quite effectively that there is NOTHING pedophilic about Logan's attraction to Marie. If he were a TRUE pedophile, she would not be the only young girl he would be attracted to.

"The war Magneto had promised had come to pass and it arrived with the force of a F5 tornado ripping apart everything in it's path."
** I suck at summaries. Here's a quote from the story**

Rated: R
Categories: X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Dark, Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 15
Wordcount: 20690 - Hits: 77290
Complete?: Yes - Published: 02/19/2010 - Last Updated: 03/08/2010
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Date: 05/27/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh man, this is starting out pretty grimly. War, camps, death. Is this a sequel to "Competition"?

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Date: 05/27/2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Well, I must say that I didn't guess who the antagonist was. I was thinking along the lines of Cassandra Nova or Greydon Creed. I certainly wasn't thinking of Derek Gordan because I'd never heard of him! ;) I guess I shouldn't be surprised that the you would introduce a totally new character to be the bad guy!

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Date: 05/27/2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Jean is being a bitch. I'm shocked, SHOCKED, I tell ya! Logan's going to be a papa! Awesome! That's great news, but when is the Professor going to get off his lazy but and wake up?

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Date: 05/27/2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Okay, this is my favorite chapter so far! That bitch Jean getting her comeuppance is ALWAYS entertaining! But I must say that for a story on a Rogan website has very little actual Rogan action in it. It's a mark of how great the writing of this is because I do NOT care! This is an engaging and well thought out story with interesting characters. Good work!

P.S. I have to say I'm wondering where Magneto and the Brotherhood are. I would be interested to know how they make out in the war.

Typical morning in the life of a superhero

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Drabble, Foof, Humor
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1061 - Hits: 2547
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/11/2010 - Last Updated: 03/11/2010
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Date: 09/27/2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, I would have sooooooo touched him! Great fic!

"It wasn't about doing the right thing. He just couldn't bring himself to do anything else, with her." Logan stumbles upon Marie in a mutant experimentation lab.

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Rape/Non-Con

Series: None
Chapters: 8
Wordcount: 23377 - Hits: 73940
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/31/2010 - Last Updated: 04/24/2010
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Date: 01/03/2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This is the sweetest and yet painful stories I've ever read! I love seeing this wild yet tender side of Wolverine. I wish that there was one scene added, though. I would love to see a scene where Logan calls Magneto and informs him of what his former best friend has been up to.

Our favorite pair are being a little dense. Someone from their past is going to help them get it right but they don't know that. New OC and our old favs!
** Hey everyone. I'm writing Victor and Rhiannon's back story on the XMMFF site. Please go give it a read and tell me how you like it!**

Rated: R
Categories: X1, X2, X3, AU, X-Men Origins Wolverine
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Angst, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read, Not Spellchecked

Series: None
Chapters: 10
Wordcount: 13716 - Hits: 53375
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/12/2010 - Last Updated: 04/15/2010
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Date: 05/26/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Uhm...this is...interesting. SABERTOOTH and his mate are working as little mutant matchmakers for Logan and Marie? To say that this is unexpected is like saying that Bill Gates is a little well-to-do. I don't know where this is going, but is sounds very...interesting.

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Date: 05/23/2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I've read this before, and I have the same reaction to this chapter as I did the first time. I really can't see even the uber-accepting Xavier hiring a mutant who's mind he can't read who just waltzed into the mansion.

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Date: 05/23/2021 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

That was WONDERFUL! Every bit as good as the first time I read it! I know it's been years, but I'd love a little sequel where we see Logan and Marie's cubs!

"Ya know, Scott. Just cause you're holding it that way doesn't make it bigger."

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Foof
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 480 - Hits: 3082
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/18/2010 - Last Updated: 04/18/2010
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Date: 01/07/2016 Title: Chapter 1: In which things get measured...

TOO funny!!!!

Take one Marie. One Logan. One tropical island. Simmer for thirty days...need I say more? A little bit silly, a little bit serious, but a lot of romance...eventually!

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 7
Wordcount: 18236 - Hits: 34255
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/21/2010 - Last Updated: 04/21/2010
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Date: 01/18/2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This is a great story! And I love how sneaky the professor was! Awesome!

Marie wants her Logan for the first time. There's just one catch - she wants his feral side!

Rated: Adult
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: PWP
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 4952 - Hits: 4670
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/27/2010 - Last Updated: 04/27/2010
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Date: 06/21/2014 Title: Chapter 1: The Feral in his Eyes

Wolverette, you should be ashamed of yourself! How could you write such...such...*loud giggles*. Oops! Guess I couldn't pull off the whole outraged-at-smutty-story line *sigh*.

Girl, this was hot stuff! And Feral!Logan gets me every time. Write more! A lot more, like everyday!

Someone loses their memory, the other is going through hell without it.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 11880 - Hits: 3107
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/16/2010 - Last Updated: 05/16/2010
Reviewer: Jahunta4974 Signed star star star star half star
Date: 03/22/2015 Title: Chapter 1: Outside Looking In

Wow! Such an awesome story! I just love the whole role reversal, with MARIE losing her memories and Logan trying to help her recover. It's intense and emotional and Logan's pain at failing to protect Marie shines through, even without his POV. It's such a beautiful story.

Rogue gets a visit from Jean

Rated: R
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 586 - Hits: 2647
Complete?: No - Published: 06/02/2010 - Last Updated: 06/02/2010
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Date: 05/26/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love the story. Logan is the tenderest, most loving badass I've ever seen! I just wish you'd continued the fic so that we could see Logan and/or Marie kick Jean's ass!

Life is like a tango... sad, sensual, sexy, violent and quiet.

Rated: Adult
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Songfic
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read, Not Spellchecked

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 5533 - Hits: 2766
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/15/2010 - Last Updated: 06/15/2010
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Date: 01/19/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was just FABULOUS! It's so sad and beautiful and honest and heartbreaking! I love the character of Simona; I hope you use her again in other stories.