I am really, really enjoying this story so far. You're right, it is very dark, but it's realistic and that's what counts in a story like this one. Real but not graphic. I eagerly look forward to your next chapter.

PS: I can answer any html questions you have. Feel free to ask.

Author's Response: Thank you so so much. This story looks like its gonna be much longer than I thought, but Im enjoying it...............are html tags what you use to italic/bold/underscore stuff? Could you email me? luenluvelia@gmail.com

Great work on this chapter. You're writing this version of these two wonderful characters in a way that is truly fascinating to behold. I love how completely Logan takes care of her. I love how she can only tolerate him, and from how you're writing Jean and the Professor I completely understand her point of view. Good grief Jean is a manipulative bitch. Words cannot express how much I enjoyed Logan threatening her. That was perfect. Also, I was so glad you didn't have Logan allow that medical procedure. That's Marie's decision and I'm glad you left it up to her. I'm really looking forward to your next chapter.

Author's Response: Oh, my. Thank you multiplied fifty times! I\'m happy you liked this, it had me worried....I could never have them go through with the procedure. Marie not being able to touch Logan is a sin. :)

Great work. As with the chapters where Logan was bringing Marie out of all the horrible things she'd been through, this had a wonderful pace to it and a sense of time easily passing. I found it only natural that their relationship progress to one of a sexual nature and thought everything terribly sweet. Thank you so much for sharing this story. It was a pleasure to read.

Author's Response: Holy Rogan, Batman. However much you enjoyed this fic, I promise I felt the same way about this review. Thank you.