Jeepers. That was hot. Loved the little talk between Logan and Scott as well. It's always nice to hear Logan explain to someone, and be in no way ashamed, exactly what he is...and in this particular case, what Rogue is as well. Very well done. Can't wait for more.

Ah, continuation. There's nothing quite like it in storytelling. A truly wonderful start to another beautiful story. I'm looking forward to the rest more than I can say.

Another wonderful chapter! You know, Magneto was always one of my favorite characters. Yes he was the bad guy, but he was a bad guy because a lot of terrible things had happened to him. You illustrate that quite well. I'm once again looking forward to your next chapter.

Wonderful to have you back and to see a new chapter. This was great work. I especially enjoyed Logan's pointing out of Rogue's eye color and her answer. I'm sure I've said it before, but you've created quite the set of unique characters here. I know they exist already, but your spin on them is lovely to read. Keep up the great work.

The longer this story has gone on the more I've liked it. The characters have gotten richer, especially Rogue. I like how you've turned her into Rogue; she's not Marie and she's not Yuriko. She's Rogue. Very well done. I look forward to both the completion of this story and Persistence of Memory.

Author's Response: Thank you. I\'m glad I\'ve managed to get Rogue\'s personality across so well. I appreciate the articulate review.

Jeez. These two can fight with the best of them, can't they? I'm glad Logan gave her a good talking to. All she needs to do now is stop being hardheaded. I think you've done a marvelous job with this story so far! Keep up the great work!

I am really, really liking this AU you've created. It's the perfect environment for Logan, and Marie's character is perfectly uptight enough to make me laugh when Logan pulls his antics. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m so glad you like it! I love making Logan a little bit chauvinistic. I really don\'t think he can be any other way. To me, he\'s a man of action, not a man of words!

You know how I rate a wonderful story? Be it one that's already complete or one in progress, if I get to the end of a chapter and all I'm thinking about are the characters the author has present, that, to me, is a truly wonderful story. That's what you've created here. I made it to the end of this chapter and my only thought was, "She can't leave! She just got there!", and I'm not above admitting that I check this site every day in the hopes that you've updated this story. Thank you so much for sharing and I truly look forward to your next chapter.

Author's Response: Wow! I guess all I can say is thank you! I\'m so glad you look forward to reading this story. It\'s a complete joy for me to write and knowing there are other people looking forward to what I write makes me feel great. I really debated on how soon she should leave but I just couldn\'t see Marie sticking around knowing how embarrassed she was by what had happened. But don\'t worry, they\'ll be seeing each other again very soon! Thank you!!

*sigh* That was lovely. I love conniving mothers. I love stubborn women who make their men work for it. I love men who finally have enough and just kiss the girl. And I absolutely love this story.

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m very very happy that you love it!

This is a truly wonderful story you have here. I very much enjoying your AU. It's rare, in my opinion, to pull off an AU well, and you're doing a great job. I really like how you've painted everyone, especially Jean, Scott and Logan's issues. I also thought it was very real that you had the "grownups" figure out relatively quickly what exactly went on with Logan and Marie in the bedroom. That always bothered me in the movie. I'm looking forward to the rest of this story. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: That\'s part of the fun for me...getting to dig further into stuff I wish someone had fleshed out better. Thank you so much! I\'m so glad you\'re enjoying it!

These poor children have been through far too much crap, and I hate to admit, but it's wonderful watching them dig out of it. I think right now they've found themselves on equal footing and they're not sure how to go about it. I look forward to your next chapter!

Wow. Just when you think it's going to get better for these two, in a quick sort of way, it only gets more complicated and angsty. You know what, though? This way actually makes a lot of sense. The poor kid has spent half her life a parasite and suddenly she finds out she can touch one other human being. You don't just jump on the guy. It scares you to death because in an instant everything is different. Perfectly written. Very well done.

Author's Response: I agree. More complicated, right? Which has nothing to do, of course, with the fact that I like writing the complications. ;) You got exactly where I was going here. Thanks.