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Awesome story. Very well done. Loved it. Wish there was just a bit more romance, but I don't see how it would fit...
Awesome.
The title of this chapter is Chapter 2... maybe change that? Because it kind of threw me off and I didn't know if this was a sequel or what... :-)
This look's like a really good storyline, but I really think you should get someone to beta this for you.
Really great story. You could probably flesh it out more, add a few chapters here and there, give us a better understanding of exactly how they got to the point the med-lab... and then how they actually get together.
But still a great story :-)
Awesome story!!!!
Maybe a sequel? With more Roganness?
You had to end it there?! Omg! Awesome story by the way :-)... but come on! Give me a little bit more! :-D
Fantastic! More please! Definitely needs a follow up. did they make up? did he leave? Did she walk away?
More please!!!!
There should be a sequel :-)
Well done. Loved it.
Such a good story!
Too short... add more, lol :-)
This looks like a good story... and I would LOVE to read it... except it's in GIANT paragraph form...
It would probably be easier for your readers if you divided the bigger paragraphs into smaller ones... makes our eyes work less... maybe a beta person can help, or if you want, I can.
Nice story! There were a few parts that were confusing, like first Logan is sitting on the bed and next he's laying down, but there was nothing to say that had changed... and first Marie was taking a step backwards, but then she was turning back around to face Logan (I thought she was already facing him??)... Just some small things to fix to make your story flow better!!!
Good job!
More please. :-) nice pausing point, but Rogue and Logan's relationship is still not "finished"...
More please :-)
Author's Response:
There\'s more to the series, but apparently what else I have never made it to this archive. Everything I have is up at the AO3, though: http://archiveofourown.org/users/FyrDrakken/works?fandom_id=226658
SEQUEL!!!!
Awesome song choice, btw
I agree with black widow... too many loose ends for it to be complete... a bit more, please :-)
TWO AWESOME STORIES!!! LOVED THEM!!!
Just one issue: A "Prologue" goes at the beginning of a story, to kind of give background information for it. An "Epilogue" goes at the end of the story to tie up any loose ends or add extra fluff and what not...
I think you want EPILOGUE instead :-)
Awesome story! I love how you wrote it and the way things turned around. I do think a sequel is possible, and would be very nice :-)
You can't leave it there!!! More please!!!! :-)
Awesome story. Well done. I wonder if maybe Logan would like to tell his side of the story? :-)
Nice job.
Omg this was awesome! I loved it! Too funny!
Very clever and VERY well done.
I must agree with the others: awesome series, but I feel like there could be more. :-)
Awesome little series! I would love to be able to read some more, if you ever get inspired again.
I think there is room for a sequel and it would be greatly appreciated :-) But i can see why you wouldn't have one...
Great story, by the way. You did a wonderful job portraying Marie's character. I like the twist on how she's not anywhere near 16 years of age, and how she went about that.
I am so interested in a sequel, if you haven't made one yet. very funny and well written!
I like this series! Would like it even more if it were finished :-)