oh my goodness, I was giggling like a nutcase all through this. I've not seen marvel kids but I can just picture this scene in my head. thanks for a good laugh!

wow this is an interesting take on what might happen to Marie if she didn't get control of a new personality.

Aww that was so sweet! love it! And poor Marie so still asleep she don't even realize she walked past a room full of guys LOL!

that was powerful, like a kick in the gut. Beautiful as well, you captured the emotions just perfectly. thank you!

phew that was cool to read! def a different take :D good job!

THank you for posting this. I really enjoyed it. The interactions, the emotions of the characters, you portrayed all of it very believably. And in response to the leg injury, Logan's body heals, but his bones wouldn't be strong enough to reshape the metal, so that made perfect sense to me. And the only person capable of hurting him in that way is Magneto since no one else would be strong enough to twist the metal and force his body to heal to a new shape.

anything, thanks again, loved this!

loved it!

New reader here. I'm thoroughly enjoying this fic :) The way you depict the interactions between Marie, Logan, Becca, and Laura are just wonderful. I also like the dynamic you have going on between Jean and Scott and the other teachers in relation to their feelings about the various aspects of what Marie and Logan are dealing with. I'm seriously loving this fic. Thanks so much for sticking with it! And no worries about the "slow pace", it gives you the chance to build multi-dimensional characters, which are my favourite kind. And heck, anyone who has ever dealt with infants and/or toddlers can tell ya, a whoooooole heck of a lot happens from hour to hour with those munchkins! :D

Finished reading this the other day. Really enjoyed this fic. I like your writing style and your characters are very believable, and that's the stuff I really like. Thanks for a great read!

OMFG i luv this! seriously good piece of writing. It was a surprise twist on the standard 'Marie saves Logan', and really appealed to me. But it's the kind of take that is right up my alley lol! I really enjoy your writing, I'm working my way through your list and enjoying every one of them! So much so that I have to endure rude comments from hubby about staying up late to "finish just one more chapter" LOLOL! Keep up the good work, and thanks!

OMO! I'm in love with this fic! I love how you portrayed Marie's vulnerability AND strength, and Logan's before and afters were just yummy! Wonderfully characterized in all aspects, I think you did a marvelous job of bringing all the sides of these two people to live. Thank you for a wonderful story!

ouch that sent shivers up my spine. Can't wait for more :D