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Real name: Elisa
Member Since: 04/02/2012
Membership Status: Member

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Reviews by Syrin
Complications arise when some of Rogue's college classmates unwittingly involve themselves in the day-to-day lives of the X-Men

Rated: R
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 48
Wordcount: 158374 - Hits: 422257
Complete?: No - Published: 08/30/2008 - Last Updated: 04/21/2013
Reviewer: Syrin Signed star star star star half star
Date: 06/02/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow..hummm. Just started to read this. It's quite lengthy, always a good thing, in my opinion. It's very detailed and you describe things very well. My only complaint is the Harley. I'm a bike lover and I just HATE Harleys. I could never see Logan riding one. Oh, well. In my head, I'll pretend its something better...LOL ; ) Very nice.

Reviewer: Syrin Signed star star star star star
Date: 06/02/2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This just gets more interesting with each chapter. :-)

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Date: 06/02/2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Aww, the witch knows!

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Date: 06/02/2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

A www, poor marie. Logan's gonna flip!

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Date: 06/02/2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

A www,like very much that Marie doesn't let Logan mouth off too far. :-)

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Date: 06/02/2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Interesting...

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Date: 06/04/2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Ok...first off, I started reviewing way back at like chapter 1....and about chapter 5, I got so caught up that I stopped reviewing and just kept flying over to the next chapter. I have to say, I am beyond floored. This is a wonderful world you have created. It's complex and unique and everything fits together so beautifully! I actually squeeled a bit when I realized there were no more chapters....Please please PLEASE keep going. Such a great story!

Takes place well after X3.Rogue leaves the mansion abruptly, Logan is called to find her. The rough road he faces makes him address his own demons, his only way to truely help Rogue.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Dark, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 15
Wordcount: 32396 - Hits: 92562
Complete?: No - Published: 10/19/2010 - Last Updated: 05/01/2012
Reviewer: Syrin Signed
Date: 05/01/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Oh, I just saw this story. It's very interesting. I love MTAR so I'm very psyched to read Logan's POV on this. : )

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Date: 05/01/2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 The Invisible Tie that Binds

I like this. Is this the first time she left or the second?

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Date: 05/01/2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 Getting What I Wanted

This is a great chapter! Loving it!

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Date: 05/01/2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 Finding a Lost Key

Ohhhhh, very nice. I'm anxious to read more more! Soon, please!

Now COMPLETE!!! :-D The X-team, including Rogue, liberate a mutant lab and find our favorite feral...

Okay, that's not much of a summary, so here's an excerpt to give you a feel:

She held out her hand, palm up, and for a second time seemed to stop. The man narrowed his gaze on her hand, and then again on her eyes. He took one shuffling step forward, and she concentrated on keeping her body loose, letting no tension show in her posture. The sudden /snick/ as the claws retracted startled her, but she managed not to jump. He watched her closely, reaching toward her hand. Suddenly he grabbed it, and for a second she thought he was going to bite her palm. But he just took a deep inhale, smelling her scent and then looking back at her eyes, assessing. She thought she saw a slight lessening of the tension in his posture after this strange ritual, but either way they were out of time.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Angst, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 20
Wordcount: 45928 - Hits: 196157
Complete?: Yes - Published: 12/06/2010 - Last Updated: 01/22/2011
Reviewer: Syrin Signed
Date: 05/15/2012 Title: Chapter 2: The Lake House

You know...as I was reading about him being all cautious about the foot, I thought....she's gonna reach over and stab at the food to show him....and TADA...that's exactly what she did! I LOVE THAT!

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Date: 05/15/2012 Title: Chapter 3: The Bath

Soooooo sexy. LOVE IT!

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Date: 05/15/2012 Title: Chapter 4: The Dream

Awwwwww. so sad and sweat at the same time. My heart just twisted in my chest...such a lovely chapter!

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Date: 05/15/2012 Title: Chapter 5: The Fever

OOOOOOH, he's awake and aware! I can't wait to see what happens!

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Date: 05/15/2012 Title: Chapter 6: The Beer

GASP! What happened?????????

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Date: 05/15/2012 Title: Chapter 7: The Escape

Awwww, Marie's too tired and falls asleep before Logan can make his move! Poo! : )

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Date: 05/15/2012 Title: Chapter 8: The Attack

wow....what's the deal with Marie.....so worried....

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Date: 05/15/2012 Title: Chapter 9: The Stranger

He DOES deserve a medal.......a big shiny smuty one!

"...home of lost causes, and forsaken beliefs, and unpopular names, and impossible loyalties!" -Matthew Arnold

A Brotherhood Rogue is betrayed and finds herself in the middle of a very fractured team of X-Men after she kills one of their own. Now she has to figure out what Carol was & still is up to while juggling a tentative friendship with Jubilee, a growing resentment for the Professor, and a distracting attraction to the growling feral mutant who was sleeping with the woman she killed.

Rated: R
Categories: X1, AU, Comicverse
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Dark, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 12
Wordcount: 42049 - Hits: 85645
Complete?: No - Published: 12/28/2010 - Last Updated: 08/18/2011
Reviewer: Syrin Signed
Date: 05/02/2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow! Just wow! I just finished reading this great story and I'm tripping over myself trying to get to the next chapter...Please update soon. I'm looking at the progress and I'm a little scared I started reading a story that is being updated painfully slow. :( Update soon and put me and I'm sure EVERYONE else out of our misery. : )

Rogue could almost taste his presence. Feel his hands as he guided her through the postures, see the bead of sweat making its way down the planes of his back as he turned away from her. She had to blink to chase away the fantasy: he wasn’t here yet. He might not want to come with them. With her. She had left him for dead, after all.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 30
Wordcount: 81308 - Hits: 274408
Complete?: Yes - Published: 02/23/2011 - Last Updated: 07/01/2013
Reviewer: Syrin Signed
Date: 05/09/2012 Title: Chapter 22: Shatter

This was a great chapter. I'm so anxious to find out what the hell is going on. Everyone's gone Craaaazy!

Author's Response: Fairly big slice of \"what the hell\'s going on\" should be served up in the next chapter, I hope! I need to finish this story in May, so stay tuned!

Now COMPLETE!

Yes, another AU. :-D Logan is on a mission to contact a powerful mutant and convince her to join the X-Men. Things go awry, of course. ;-) Here's an excerpt: “You’ve been shot before,” she said, and he could practically see her mind piecing it together. “And you don’t want to go to the authorities.” He saw that icy calmness creep back into her demeanor as her scent changed sharply. She was no longer afraid for him, now she was afraid of him. “Who do you work for? Did he send you to find me?”

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Angst, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 13
Wordcount: 34127 - Hits: 89108
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/27/2011 - Last Updated: 05/07/2011
Reviewer: Syrin Signed
Date: 05/02/2012 Title: Chapter 13: The Choice

Just finished reading this story and I'm very impressed! Love what you've done with it! : )

AU story. X-men Evolution with a little X-men the movie mixed in.
Professor X makes a personal request of Logan while he's away from the school, to find and bring home a former stundent of his by the name of Rogue. However, Rogue isn't alone when Logan finds her and he gets more than he bargains for.

Rated: R
Categories: AU, X-Men Evolution, X1
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 10
Wordcount: 19131 - Hits: 60778
Complete?: No - Published: 09/16/2011 - Last Updated: 05/27/2012
Reviewer: Syrin Signed
Date: 05/29/2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Why haven't I read this story before? Oh, my. But's it's quite good! I really hope you continue with it. I would be bumed if you didn't. : ) Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I have all plans to continue, it just might take me longer than most would like. Real life doesn\'t let me update as often as I would like. I\'m so pleased to know that you have enjoyed the story so far. I hope you continue to in the future. I was a really big fan of your own story.

Now COMPLETE!: A black-market ring dealing in mutants, and Logan and Marie. AU. My usual promises -- good grammar, smut, angst, action, drama, and a happy ending.

Rated: Mature
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Angst, Drama, PWP, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 31
Wordcount: 56517 - Hits: 239045
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/25/2011 - Last Updated: 05/24/2012
Reviewer: Syrin Signed
Date: 04/15/2012 Title: Chapter 23: The Present

Eeeeek! So good, so creepy! I'm in love with it! Very excited to read more! See ya around!

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks so much!

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Date: 04/22/2012 Title: Chapter 24: The Apology

As always, magnificent! I'm so excited to read what happens next! Did Logan hear all that? What she said? : ) And hey! Thanks for the shout out! You rock!

Author's Response: Doh! I just saw I spelled your screen name wrong. Sorry! It\'s fixed now. :-D