Well done. Barbed Wire seems to be a little to dangerous for a school. Maybe they'll think about it after the incident.

I can say you haven't failed. That's really, really sad.

I really enjoy your story.
Your writing style and your ideas are quite good.
Seems to me I have another favorite story.

Quite melancholic. Their positions are easy to understand. Poor Rogue.

Yes! A new Chapter. Now my day is good. ^^
That's a risk they have to take. I think it's more likely for Marie to bring him back than for anyone else.
19th century... Boys had to grow up fast this time. Besides, most of today's 14 years-old boys wouldn't want to play with their 7 years-old brother, too.
Well, this "conversation" looked like there was still something going between Creed and James' mother. And I'm not sure whether Elizabeth wanted this or not.
That have to be indications for his mutation. Wikipedia says that ferals have not only enhanced senses but also higher strenght. The latter isn't often mentioned. Nice detail.
The typical little-brother-problem. He'll get over it. Okay, maybe not... Was that the first sign of the Wolverine?
Seems to me that James spent more time with Victor than with his father or brother. Significant.
Ough. Poor family. How will they deal with the death of John jr.?

SPOILER for everyone who doesn't know the Origings movie:
Sorry to disappoint you guys, but that was just the first horrible event in Logan's life.

So you still have this in your mind, nice.
Hopefully the destroyed lab sent a godd message. Seeing Wolverine slice any persecutors would disturb the children even more.
On the other hand, maybe Rogue would trust him more when she gets the proof that Logan's a man of his word.
If they are lucky, they get home without any problems. Unlickly, but hope dies last.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing. You right, the kids seeing the Wolverine let loose would have been to much for the kids right now. We\'ll just have to wait and see what happens on their journey to the mansion. ;)

They've known each other only for some hours and it's already obvious to her? That's fast.
I'm not sure whether Logan believes in fate... probably not. Maybe she should tell him something else when they talk about their first meeting again (what is, in my opinion, bound to happen).
I don't think Rogue did the girls a favour. :D THe next time, he'll probably ask how the breaking happened, and when he smells a lie, he'll scare the girls. On the other hand, it could boost the crushes even more.
Well, usually he hasn't someone who drives with him.

Author's Response: Well it\'s the kind of fate where she knows meeting Logan has made a deep impression on her and in her life. Like I said she really doesn\'t know what their meeting and his role in her life will be yet. Logan may not believe in fate maybe, but he does live by his instincts to a certain degree, so I\'m sure it won\'t be to hard for him to accept that Rogue has impacted his life as well and has become important to him. As for Rogue helping the girls along, maybe or maybe not. ;) \r\nThe male ego is a unique thing, and can be stroked easily. Especially if Logan fines out the girls think him better looking that Scotty boy. I hope you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for reviewing.

It seems like all my favorite stories are updated these days...
Okay, Marie has quiet grown-up thoughts about Logan. ^^ It's fascinating how much trust she puts into him. And Logan continues to be friendlier than I expected him to be.
Wolverine can problably smell her arousal and that's not helpful for his self restraint.
Now it starts to get interesting. Are you going to let Sabretooth kick Logan's ass like he did in the movie?

Author's Response: I hated how in the movie Sabretooth took Wolverine out so quickly so probably not...I too was surprised at how friendly Logan was being...tried to write it diffferent but like I mentioned wasn\'t exactly satisfied with that chapter but I figured you guys deserved an update...So just going to mention that sooner rather than later this story will live up to its NC-17 rating...and I\'m pretty sure the X-men will be making their entrance in the next chapter...thanks for the review. I love the input, it really helps me...(^_^)

Nice Oneshot, well done.

Author's Response: Thank you!