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Thank God I am sitting outside for this chapter because yowza, that is freaking hot on top of HOT. Oh man. For this chapter, I needed to picture the Hugh Jackman version of Wolverine, LOL!!! You are a little too good at this stuff!!! So sweet still that Marie has accepted Logan back into her life, the end was so very tender. GREAT JOB!
Its been a while, but man oh man, how i have missed reading this! What the heck is going on with the beginning of this, I figured out who the woman who hit the other woman is, but whos the guy? AWWW by the way, I love the way that Logan is accepting his love for Marie and that Nanna is freaking HILARIOUS!! Nice backstory on Anna Marie too.
I. LOVE. KITTY. That's it. That's all I have to say about this amazing chapter!!
Author's Response: Yep. I do too. :)
Wow, Anna has some issues now that sex god has come back in to her life!!! Love, love, love how she still has the hots for the guy but is fighting it. Good for her! I don't want Scott hurt, he's so good for her!!! And whuhs?!? Whose the angel? What does she/he have to do with anything? The baby died?! :((((
Author's Response: Sex god, lol, yes, Logan is that, isn\'t he? The angel will make sense, I promise.
OHHH HOW I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! I can't believe I went so long without reading this story, its stuff like this that make me just melt away. First off, that angel thingee sounds pretty mysterious! Kitty is bang on, I love how you are showing her and how she calls it like she sees it. And man, I almost felt sorry for Logan at the end. ALMOST. I like seeing him suffer after how he treated Rogue. I LOVE IT!!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, I like no nonsense Kitty. Almost feel sorry for him, huh? :)
Holy bananas! You pretty much stuck with X-23's story here, I really like the flashbacks and throwing in the Pinocchio story. Poor Laura, how horrible! Anna really went after Logan, eh? Pretty gruesome, talk about healing factors kicking in LOL!! I appreciate how you kept Laura in character too by how indifferent she was to everything!! Marie is feral alright, no wonder Logan got all turned on!! Another great chapter!
Author's Response: Yeppers, I just love Laura. That Pinnocchio story broke my heart too when I first read it in the comics. And yep again, Anna went crazy on Logan\'s ass. What a woman, lol.
I am dying here. No really, I am. You have done a great job getting across Logan and Marie's attraction to each other, I really loved the way he was so very tender with her withn Laura hurt her and how he told her to leave and how she didn't go. Man, talk about bad timing Bobby!!!?! LOL. Nice how Marie and Laura made up but its the last part of this chapter that's killed me. Logan watching Marie with Scott, and how he's suffering is AWESOME. I love it and I love this story. I should be working!! One more chapter, I have to!!
Author's Response: Logan is having a hard time of it, alright. Kind of deserves it actually. He can\'t just expect Anna to wait around for him, she has her own life now. A taste of his own medicine is good for the sould. Thanks for reviewing! :)
OH NO!!!!! I can't beleive what happened!!! I logged in and usually go to the reviews to find out where I left off and then I see that all my reviews have dissappeared?! Did you delete your story? Did they delete it by accident? Holy crow, that's alot of reviews to lose, I am so, so, sorry that happened to you! I'll try to go back and leave some reviews for you after I finish reading K? For now I'm going to keep going because I have been on pins and needles waiting to read your story again. This chapter I liked because of the jealousy that Scott is feeling and Logan being the typical asshat he is by making it worse for Rogue. LOL, I love the end!! On to the next!!!
Author's Response: I know. :(
I was so upset, I cannot tell you. Somehow, someway, I must have deleted this story when I was in the process of updating the last chapter. I re-loaded the chapters but they are the second to last drafts so I probably need to go back and fix a few things for continuity\'s (and just plain better writing\'s!) sake.
No worries about re-reviewing again, I\'m just glad you\'ve decided to continue reading this. :)
Yeppers, Scott\'s a jealous guy. Who knew, right? ;)
I. read. this. three. times. over. Here I am thinking that the last chapter had me all twisted inside and then this one comes along and kills me. YES KILLS ME!!!! Beautiful, sweet, awesome, perfect, EVERYTHING!!!! I love how Rogue fell into his arms, I love how he wanted to do what she wanted, I love how he was willing to accept not having her love for the rest of his life just so he could stay in hers and I love how he realized that he belonged to her. I. am. dying. That has to be, the most beautiful scene I have ever read. Very, very, hot but so very, very beautiful. From how he kissed her tears away to how he told her he loved her??!?! oh man. And of course the ending was so Rogue. I was surprised, shocked, happy and achy, all in one. What an imagination you have and even better, what a way of putting it all in words. I LOVE THIS STORY. I cannot tell you how happy I am knowing there is so much more to go in this. I still see its not completed and that makes me happy (which is strange because I only read completed stories.) Breaks over now. Keep it up!!
Author's Response: WOw. How to respond to this? You are embarressing me now, your praise is high indeed! I am so happy that you enjoyed this chapter, it was one of the most difficult for me to write by far considering how it was a major turning point for Logan and Marie. Logan might be a little OOC in here, but considering what was at stake, he had nothing to lose. You love my story? Well, I love your reviews! This story only has an epilogue left which I am in the process of getting completed, but please, I hope you are branching out into all the other stories on this site because seriously, my story pales in comparison to most of them.
Thank you so much, again, for taking the time to read my story, let alone reviewing it. You are very, very kind! :)
OKAY. Now what I am so supposed to think now? I feel like strangling you, LOL!! I couldn't believe that you had Anna all over Scott (that was so HOTTTT by the way)and I like the twist with her telling him how he promised to never hurt her and he did. And it was true that he let Jean make a choice, didn't he? So many things are going on now. But the end? Awesome on top of awesome. Good for Nanna too for not letting them scrap it out but Logan's line at the end made me melt like butter. SIGH!!!! Its like a movie, it really is!
Author's Response: A movie? What a compliment! As for Scott, poor guy needed some action, although he just doesn\'t know when to keep his mouth shut, does he? So glad you are enjoying this! :)
WOOHOO! Can I scream and yell and cheer Anna on? YEAH! Take that Logan, take THAT! Damn right, you can't be thinking you can waltz right in and think everything is going to be okay!!! Good for Anna for letting him have it, he deserves to hear how he devastated her. And that line about being deep in her? LOL!!! This story is SOOOO good! oh, and the part where she was remembering everything was nicely done.
Author's Response: Lol, I really enjoy your enthusiasm Garman, you are hilarious! And yep. I liked that line as well. :)
Oh My God. I think I am just too stunned to write anything. I don't know what to say. Did I love this chapter? Hell, yeah!! If there was any time I felt I was inside your story, it was this one!! Gah. SO beautiful, I could sooo see Logan watching her sing, and getting closer and closer and closer and as for Anna finally letting it all out? LOVE IT AS ALWAYS. Nice backstory too with Oliver. WHat a way you have in describing what everyone is feeling and everything. Excellent!
Author's Response: Thank you. This chapter is what the whole story was based on actually, so glad you enjoyed it! :)
You really broke my heart here!! Oh man, good for Scott for knowing that there was something there between Anna and Logan but at the same time, he should have given her a chance. WOw.
Author's Response: I know. Scott is such a good guy, but he still should have given her a chance, right? :)
WOW. You must be getting sick of me writing this, but really, really, I think you are just such an amazing writer. You got across alot of information in this chapter but without making me zone out, LOL, could because you did with the two of them being intimate but hey, it worked out good! But seriously, poor, poor Marie, can I just let you know that I am beyond happy that you kept Mystique and Destiny in there? Because to me, they are both such a big part of her life/past and really should be part of any story that Rogue is in. And I am so happy that there is so much more to this story, I am just only over half so I can't even imagine where you are taking this! And you write smut so well, I mean, its hot and all that, but you somehow manage to make it so romantic and tender and it always adds to their relationship, you know? Anyway, fantastic stuff as always, break's over!