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Sequel to Class Four. “You’re a Class Four,” Logan had told her. “Not a Five. A Five wouldn’t be able to see the difference. Wouldn’t be able to see the cost. And even if they could, they’d probably think they could win without losin’ control.” Logan and Marie make a home at the mansion, but their happiness is threatened by a new force.

Rated: Adult
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 9711 - Hits: 24938
Complete?: No - Published: 05/30/2012 - Last Updated: 12/12/2012
Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 05/31/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Bridge

Oh man, I can't resist, but I'm already stressed thinking about the shit that I just know is gonna go down in this fic. Eek!

Author's Response: Don\'t be stressed! Be excited! But you\'re right...shit\'s gonna go down.....bwahahaa

Now complete! Rogue believes that isolation is the key to her mutation, but is she really as alone as she thinks? AU.

Rated: Mature
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 35
Wordcount: 80407 - Hits: 281497
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/05/2012 - Last Updated: 01/01/2013
Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 07/10/2012 Title: Chapter 3: The Axe

This might be my favorite story of yours so far. I love Marie's character. So many points in here made me smile/laugh/giggle.

holy hell! Were all axes this heavy?

Lol. Basically the rest of the scene commenced like a scene from my life...how are Logan and Marie gonna cross paths??? Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: I\'m so glad you\'re liking it. Thanks for reviewing, as always!

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Date: 07/10/2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Test

Eeek! You started a new story!!!! Even though I'm waiting for the next Strong Persuader (it doesn't say finished so I'm assuming there's more) I am super happy to see another one of your stories. I hope you have an endless supply of ideas!!

Author's Response: Sorry about not finishing up the other story yet...I figured I\'d just pop back and do that, but now that I\'m all into these characters I feel like it\'s going to mess me up to try to switch back to the totally different ones in Strong Persuader (well, same characters but different characterizations, if you know what I mean). I promise to finish it off as soon as this one is finished. :-) Hope this story is compensation for the suspense on the other one. Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: 07/10/2012 Title: Chapter 2: The Gamble

Omg, how in the world do you manage to make your stories so different and yet so wonderful? This was excellent. I'm very curious about how this is gonna go.

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Date: 07/14/2012 Title: Chapter 4: The Spoon

This is wonderful. Thanks for the update!!!! I was so happy to see it!

Author's Response: So glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: 07/16/2012 Title: Chapter 5: The Swim

Holy fuckin hell, indeed.

Wow. Great chapter. Thank you soooooo much for the update! I really love this story!

Author's Response: Ha. I\'m so glad you are liking it. Thanks for being such a wonderful reviewer!

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 07/27/2012 Title: Chapter 6: The Plan

OMG! You have no idea how excited I was to see an update!!!! Lol, I should be preparing to photograph a client's wedding, but just had to read this first. I love this story!!!! Can't wait for the next part!

Author's Response: :-D Hope the bride had lovely weather. Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: 07/28/2012 Title: Chapter 7: The Idea

Lmao! Okay, that was truly inspired. Loved this chapter!!! And such a quick update! I hope the next one is fast, too!! Thanks!

Author's Response: Yes, beer is a great motivator. Or bait when you are hunting the wild Wolverine. Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: 08/01/2012 Title: Chapter 8: The Beer

Omg, best update ever!!!!

They are so awesome together. *melts*

On a side note, I'm so glad that annoying stuff is off the top of the screen now.

Author's Response: Aw, so glad you liked it. And yes -- mad props to springbok for fixing the error messages! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 08/03/2012 Title: Chapter 9: The Words

Their interaction makes me melt in happiness a little.

Okay. A lot. ;)

Loved this chapter. I'm ready for him to move in!

Author's Response: Ha, I got you there...what, five chapters later? ;-) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 08/03/2012 Title: Chapter 10: The Poem

Awww, these two are so heartbreakingly wounded. Both wanting to be accepted by the other so so badly. I really love this story. And the pace is perfect.

And I really like Frost. Wonderful poem choice. Every time I see woods with freshly fallen snow I think: the woods are lovely, dark and deep. And I have promises to keep. And miles to go before I sleep. (or something like that)

Author's Response: Yes, you have perfectly described the delicious angst that is Rogan. I\'m so glad you like the pace, I was worried that people would get impatient. Yes, the Robert Frost thing was a total coincidence. I thought of the \"mortal stakes\" stanza when she was wood-chopping...I just wanted some kind of stream-of-consciousness for Marie\'s thoughts. And then, when she was taking a book to read, it made sense since she thought about looking for it. Then I wanted to show Logan mooning over something of hers, and decided I\'d look online to figure out what other poems were in the first edition of that collection. It was really hard to find the info, but I found a brief description, and that one sounded just perfect. It really fit the whole \"winter is coming\" creepy theme I was trying to set in motion, for reasons that are already probably obvious if you\'re caught up.

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 08/04/2012 Title: Chapter 11: The Gift

Awwwwww.

Best. Ever.

Love the fast update also! Thank you!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: 08/12/2012 Title: Chapter 12: The Dinner

Wow. Wonderful as always. I've been so busy and even now I'm driving across the country. I'm glad I got a chance to read one of the chapters. I love it and can't wait to get to he next one!

Author's Response: So glad you liked it. Enjoy your trip, and thanks so much for reviewing! Hopefully you\'ll have a few chapters lined up waiting for your return. ;-)

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Date: 08/14/2012 Title: Chapter 13: The Haircut

Eek, that was fantastic!!! Loved it! They are the cutest thing ever.

Author's Response: Aw, so glad you liked it. I\'ll admit, there\'s a little bit of cuteness going on up in here. Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: 08/14/2012 Title: Chapter 14: The Conversation

Omg. That was soooooo well done. I desperately need the next chapter now....

Author's Response: So glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: 08/17/2012 Title: Chapter 15: The Snow

Oh poor Logan! Thank god Marie went out and found him!

This was an excellent chapter- quick moving, terrifyingly exciting, and moving. Part of me wonders if Marie might get the flu or something though. Then Logan could nurse her...hehe.

Anyway, loved it and can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Yeah, poor little...I mean big...guy. I\'m glad you found it quick-moving...I was trying to create a sense of urgency without Marie totally freaking out. Funny, a few people have requested a sick Marie with Logan as caretaker. No plans for it so far, but then again aside from a few major plot points I never know quite what\'s going to happen next! Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: 08/23/2012 Title: Chapter 16: The Agreement

Awww, Logan makes me all teary the way he expects her to change her mind or something to happen. And your sneaky WWII memory that you snuck in there was ingenious!

Anyway, loved this chapter!!! This story is definitively a fave!

Author's Response: Yeah, poor Logan. He\'s gotta always be looking for the catch, right? Hopefully Marie can convince him that he deserves good things. Glad you liked the WWII memory! I know absolutely nothing about military history, so I had to search a little to find a battle in the snow. Canadian snipers were actually there too, but I went ahead and hooked Logan up with the Americans, in line with a little of the Origins backstory.

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 08/25/2012 Title: Chapter 17: The Touch

I woke up, grabbed my phone and checked for an update. :D Sooooo happy to see that there was one! And it was great!

I really love this Logan with his sense of vulnerability and his implacable commitment to Marie. Can't wait for another chapter!

Author's Response: Glad to oblige. You can thank my toddler for his usual 6:30 wake-up. He doesn\'t know the meaning of Saturday. ;-) So glad you\'re liking this Logan. I worried that making him very laconic would make him hard to connect with as a character, but in the end he has so many inner monologues it hardly matters that he rarely says stuff out loud. :-D

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Date: 09/05/2012 Title: Chapter 18: The Tradition

Awwwww, that was awesome! Love it. And the end? Perfect. :) How he's still waiting for it to end and she's thinking in the long term- so poignant.

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Date: 09/05/2012 Title: Chapter 19: The Nightmare

That was lovely. She handled that so well. I love how you just have them so in tune with one another.

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Date: 09/15/2012 Title: Chapter 20: The Bed

How did I miss this update?????

Loved it! Finally, I feel as if they're on the same page. The same adorable, wonderful page. ;) Can't wait for more!!!

Rogue changes her mind about taking the cure but does not return to the mansion. Somewhere in Canada, she finds a lost friend, and encounters a former foe tempting her with an offer she can't refuse.

Rated: Mature
Categories: X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Foof, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 18
Wordcount: 45398 - Hits: 112556
Complete?: No - Published: 08/23/2012 - Last Updated: 09/22/2012
Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 08/26/2012 Title: Chapter 3: Linger

Love the Cranberries! One of my fav groups!

Great chapter. Interested in seeing what happens next; really hope Scott and Rogue don't start something up...

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 08/26/2012 Title: Chapter 4: Arrival

Ooh, interesting twist! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you!!! Glad you like it!! xD

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 09/07/2012 Title: Chapter 13: Pacing

Eek!!!! I need more! What's happening????

So sorry I haven't reviewed more, but to be honest I just had to get to the next chapter every time. What can I say? I'm impatient. Looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 09/15/2012 Title: Chapter 16: Transition

Awwwwwwww....

Okay, I've melted into a puddle of Rogan fangirl.

Thanks for a great story!