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Real name: Susan
Member Since: 04/12/2011
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Reviews by Ebony10
Drabble about spooning. Foofy-ness ahead. Ye be warned. Seems to fit into the Touch series.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Drabble, Foof, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read, Not Spellchecked

Series: Touch
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 380 - Hits: 2456
Complete?: Yes - Published: 12/17/2011 - Last Updated: 12/17/2011
Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 12/17/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awwwwww, that was adorable.

I would love to see a short drabble on Logan's POV regarding Marie being the "big spoon". :D

Sheriff James Logan began his day with a cup of coffee...then killed a man. What he discovers in the back of that man's dilapidated camper will change his life.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 15
Wordcount: 25444 - Hits: 89216
Complete?: Yes - Published: 02/03/2012 - Last Updated: 06/21/2012
Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 02/04/2012 Title: Chapter 1: One of those days

Ooh, what a great start! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks, Ebony! I hope to have it up soon!

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Date: 02/08/2012 Title: Chapter 2: A riddle wrapped in a mystery

Whoa, totally didn't see that coming but I love it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!

Author's Response: I try to keep you on your toes! Thanks, Ebony. :)

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Date: 02/25/2012 Title: Chapter 4: You do know Jack

OMG!!!

I simply love this chapter. The Jack bit was great. :D It gave me a huge grin. Thank you for making my day! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank YOU, Ebony! You made my day!

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Date: 05/01/2012 Title: Chapter 10: Facing the past

"Well, that's one guy I don't want to meet in a dark alley. Or a lighted alley. Or anywhere else on the damn planet."

Truer words have never been spoken. Ugh.

Thank god she got away from that. :( so happy she found Logan. :)

Author's Response: Ain\'t that the truth. Thank you for the review, Ebony!

NOW COMPLETE! Rogue’s discovery that the cure has limitations sends her on a journey. In the process, she’ll find out just what she’s made of and what she’s capable of doing. Starts toward the end of X3. BETA read by the lovely doctorg!

Rated: Adult
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Angst, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 30
Wordcount: 78977 - Hits: 256474
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/02/2012 - Last Updated: 05/14/2012
Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 04/03/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Want it more

I really love those last two sentences. Best lines ever.

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 04/20/2012 Title: Chapter 15: The Power of Persuasion

Dude. I just spent the last hour reading this amazing fic when I should've been sleeping.

Love it!

Author's Response: I\'ve done that too. It\'s a great compliment, THANKS!

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Date: 04/24/2012 Title: Chapter 16: A Great Point of View

That last bit about pillow talk... ROFLMAO!!!

Wonderful chapter!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! I love those parts in stories that make you giggle madly.

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Date: 04/24/2012 Title: Chapter 17: Musings

OMG!!! Loved this one!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I love a little extra smut, don\'t you?

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 04/26/2012 Title: Chapter 18: Voices

The last few chapters of smutty wonderfulness left me worrying that shit was gonna hit the fan. Shit, meeteth fan.

Thanks for the quick update! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Those two should become very good friends here shortly. ; )

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Date: 04/28/2012 Title: Chapter 20: Five

Love this!!! We finally see what makes her a class four. And I love your explanation for the difference between the 2 classes. Genius!!!

This made me giggle:

"He was glad she couldn’t see the pansy-ass grin on his face."

Author's Response: Thanks for the snaps~\r\nThe pansy-ass grin...that\'s a man in love! Teehee

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Date: 05/04/2012 Title: Chapter 21: Exams

What?????

Ah! Must read more!

Author's Response: READ MORE< YES!

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Date: 05/04/2012 Title: Chapter 23: The Whole Point of View: Part II

I love- seriously LOVE- kick ass Rogue. I need the next chapter stat!

Author's Response: Working on it, my dear.

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 05/09/2012 Title: Chapter 25: Labels

Omg, I wish I could leave you a better, more coherent review but I need to go read the next chapter!

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Date: 05/09/2012 Title: Chapter 27: The Worst Point of View

Ok. I'm reviewing. So it's time to save Rogue now. Please and thank you.

These have been such an intense few chapters. I'm so tense and stressed right now. I hope you update soon! I'm also looking forward to seeing Remy instigate a relationship with Jubilee that's more than booty call. :)

Author's Response: Nod. I see the reviews and I\'m thoroughly satisfied the price has been paid. But don\'t be stressed out...Remy and Jubilee...I don\'t knoooow...: )

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Date: 05/20/2012 Title: Chapter 28: The Hunter and The Hunted

That was an amazing chapter!!!! Ew, creepy Creed. ::shudder:: ...although I do feel a bit had that he was stuck in there for 3 years. Still, girl's gotta do what a girl's gotta do. Yay for her having healing now! And little mini-Rogue or mini-Wolvie! Happy day!

Author's Response: A mini-Rogan! : )

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Date: 05/20/2012 Title: Chapter 29: Both Points of View

Sooooooo wonderful!!!!

“Dat’s all kinds of sick, homme.”  

Lol, exactly. Love Remy in this.

And the rest of it was just so heart wrenching and touching. Really lovely reunion.

Author's Response: I loooove happy endings, don\'t you! : )

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Date: 05/20/2012 Title: Chapter 30: A New Point of View

Really amazing story!

Curious to know how his chat with Worthington went. Also curious about the baby stuff. :) perhaps a short sequel someday of the birth or a day with the baby or something? ;)

Anyway, it's been a wild ride and I loved it! Can't wait to read more from you!

Author's Response: Thanks! A sequel? Let me think about it. : ) thanks for the reviews!

Logan gets everything he always thought he wanted, but somehow it’s not what he expected. Different from my usual, but still Roganish at the heart of it. It'll probably be five or six short chapters. If you're not familiar with the song that inspired this one, you should definitely check it out: http://tinyurl.com/strongpersuader

Rated: Mature
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Shipper, Songfic
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 7
Wordcount: 9440 - Hits: 40585
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/27/2012 - Last Updated: 02/13/2013
Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 06/03/2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Axe

Oh man... I don't normally read Jean-Scott-Logan fics. But it is you. Argh, the ambivalence!!!

...but I just can't resist reading one of your fics so here goes nothing...

Author's Response: :-) You know me, it\'s gotta have a Roganish bent to it. :-) Thanks for reading -- and especially for reviewing!

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Date: 06/03/2012 Title: Chapter 2: The Moment

Some Rogan peeked in!!! Woohoo!

I'm sad for both Logan and Jean in this fic. They let the "what ifs" ruin their lives and only in retrospect realized what they had/could have had...

Author's Response: O ye of little faith...like I could ever write something that wasn\'t Roganish! Yes, I think both Logan and Jean in this fic are both slightly detestable and slightly pitiable. And although both may have felt they were driven by lust, what was really driving them each has yet to be revealed.

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Date: 06/04/2012 Title: Chapter 3: The Truth

Wow. She's kinda a bitch. I don't feel as bad for her as I did...

Curious to see what happens next...

Author's Response: She did come off awfully bitchy there, but I think we\'ll see that there are other things driving Jean. Part of what made this idea stick in my head was the compelling sense of both shame and arrogance you get from the narrator (the guy singing the song). He\'s ashamed of what he\'s done, realizes he has wrecked lives, but at the same time...there\'s this sense of unbridled ego. The refrain over and over is \"It\'s because of me\" and then of course all the talk about how he was \"such a strong persuader.\" That\'s a lot of what I wanted this fic to be about...Logan\'s slow discovery that something happened between him and Jean that actually had very little to do with him. It wasn\'t that he was just so sexy and manly that he overwhelmed her morals. In contrast, if anyone was used here, it was him -- he\'s just a little slow on the uptake realizing it.

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 06/16/2012 Title: Chapter 4: The Secret

Omg. Awesome. You are so good at writing us through emotions. And you don't shy away when something is hard, which makes your stories all the better. And even in upsetting/touching moments you can make me laugh. Lol, the hand comment (because I was thinking that when she first hit him) and this:

She shrugged and peeked back up at him, a mischievous twinkle in her eyes now. “An' you also deserve every bit of humiliation you’re gonna get when you finally find Scott and beg him to get his ass back here where it belongs.”

He stopped in his tracks, hoping against all hope that she was kidding. “Aw, hell. C’mon, darlin’...really?”

Author's Response: So glad you liked it! I was a little worried that Logan might go too suddenly from callous to broken to amused, but I think that\'s kind of the way the two of them are. The callousness is a facade, Rogue is able to break right through it, but because they understand each other so well they can be vulnerable with each other and there\'s still this solid friendship underneath it all that allows them to get their equilibrium back quickly. Thanks so much for your review!

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Date: 06/16/2012 Title: Chapter 5: The Demon

What???? Omg, he's turned into Logan! Crazy. Aw man, are they gonna have a throw down? I kinda feel like they might, but I don't want them to. Sigh. So curious to see what they'll talk about...

Author's Response: Yeah, I thought the idea of Scott turning Loganesque was kind of funny. And, it kind of made sense -- he\'s off on his own, away from the mansion, he has a lot of aggression to get out of his system, and on some level he might have to wonder if he can be the kind of guy Jean apparently prefers. And we know he has the fighting skills, so cage fighting for him just made a lot of sense. Just for you I posted the next chapter early...hope you like how it worked out with the two of them. :-D

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 06/18/2012 Title: Chapter 6: The Talk

Wow. Just...wow.

Thanks for updating (just for me!!)! That was an excellent chapter. You know, I usually forcibly stop myself from trying to guess what will happen next in your stories because what you come up with is just so perfect that nothing I could imagine compares. This was no exception. I loved it!

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Date: 03/12/2013 Title: Chapter 7: The Kiss

Wonderful ending!!!! :D