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Real name: Susan
Member Since: 04/12/2011
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Now COMPLETE!: A black-market ring dealing in mutants, and Logan and Marie. AU. My usual promises -- good grammar, smut, angst, action, drama, and a happy ending.

Rated: Mature
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Angst, Drama, PWP, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 31
Wordcount: 56517 - Hits: 241995
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/25/2011 - Last Updated: 05/24/2012
Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 12/08/2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Merchandise

P.S. Feel free to consult me about any Japanese if you ever want Logan to speak some. I'm happy to use my powers for good (rather than the evil homework ;P ).

Author's Response: I have no plans for them to go jetting off to Tokyo, but I\'ll definitely call on you if I do!

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Date: 12/11/2011 Title: Chapter 7: The Lead

Wow. You wrote that amazingly (not surprised). I wish I could leave a more coherent review but it's been a rough couple of days. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter- it's getting me through horrible school stuff. :) Thanks!

Author's Response: Aw, I\'m sorry you\'ve had a bad couple of days. Hope you\'re past that now. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, despite all your massive amounts of homework!

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Date: 12/16/2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Bitch

“Don’t you ever try to hurt what’s mine again.”

Okay. There was squeeing when I read that. A lot of it. :D Like an overexcited fangirl.

LOVE this chapter. I have to admit that Jean's character is this unique person that I can really like in fics or I can really hate. There are very few characters that I feel can go both ways, but I totally buy a Bitch!Jean as well as a Jean who more like a sister and friend...odd.

Again..."mine" ::melts:: OMG. I really can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Tee hee. I\'m so glad I could make you squee. And aren\'t we all overexcited fangirls, really? I\'m so glad you liked this chapter. I\'ve always fallen on the side of barely mentioning Jean at all or having her be some vague nice person in the background, just because having major Jean/Marie tension doesn\'t seem helpful for the ultimate cohesion of the mansion. Lately, though, I\'ve been reading some fantastic Mean!Jeans, between Romeo is Bleeding, a re-read of The Girl, The Private Dance, etc. I just couldn\'t help jumping on the Jean-haters bandwagon, at least for one chapter.

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Date: 12/17/2011 Title: Chapter 9: The Offer

AAAAAHHHH! What happened???

I'm so curious! I hope we don't have to wait long for an update. ::hopeful face:: ...but of course, if we do, I'll live. :)

Loved tough Marie, even if something weird is going on...and, I admit, I like that Logan is more of the pursuer, wanting her to trust him and rely on him. And she is the runner. Oh, just satisfation. :D

Author's Response: Was that update quick enough for ya? ;-) Glad you\'re liking tough Marie. And yes, it\'s a nice change to see Logan asking Marie to stay, huh? Okay, that happens in the next chapter, but you get the idea. ;-)

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Date: 12/17/2011 Title: Chapter 10: The Secret

WOW!!!

Excellent chapter! And so quick- thanks so much! :D You made my day. I can't wait for more...the plot thickens. ;)

Author's Response: :-D Glad you liked it...and that I could cheer you up. Hope your difficult days are behind you! And yes, the plot is definitely thickening...I better figure it out, huh?

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Date: 01/01/2012 Title: Chapter 11: The Call

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!

And I thought your other cliffhangers were harsh. lol. Wonderful chapter. Slow? Not at all. Nerve-wracking? You betcha!

I really like how Xavier really thinks of them all as family. "My children..."

Dammit. Logan's gonna go. I can't wait for more!! Thanks for this post! Happy New Year!

Author's Response: Aw...maybe it\'s mean to say, but I\'m so glad you found this to be cliff-hangery! It really struck me as a chapter in which not much happens -- sometimes I really get frustrated with having to get characters fed and that kind of thing! Yeah, it\'s interesting, my husband got me into the X-Men comics, and I had never realized that Xavier had a child of his own. I had always thought that he was childless and had taken on the X-Men as his surrogate children. And of course Logan\'s gonna go -- what fun would it be otherwise! Happy 2012 to you too!

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Date: 01/05/2012 Title: Chapter 12: The Connection

Whoa. Intense. Poor Rogue. :(
Great chapter. Little nervous about Logan going to see magneto on his own, but oh so interested in what's gonna happen next.

Author's Response: Yeah, Magneto and Wolverine never sounds like a good idea, does it? It\'ll take a few chapters before I get there, but hopefully it\'ll be worth it!

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Date: 01/08/2012 Title: Chapter 13: The Retrieval

That was a great chapter. I'm really, really glad it doesn't seem like this guy was a creepy molester man. So anxious for the next chapter and find Kit and Jubilee!

Author's Response: Yeah, I am probably flinching away a bit from some of the grimmer aspects of human trafficking, but my rationale is that this black-market ring specializes in mutants, and so the individuals are generally being bought for their mutations rather than other nefarious purposes. Thanks for your review...glad you\'re still with the story, there have been some slow chapters!

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Date: 01/15/2012 Title: Chapter 14: The Wall

Ahhhhhhh! How does this just get better and better????

Loved this chapter! Ooh, is Marie gonna do something a little more hands on to hurt those who hurt her? Can't wait for more! This was my treat for getting about halfway thru a chapter of my thesis. :)

Author's Response: I\'m so glad you\'re liking it! Marie is definitely going to get more hands-on, but it may not go the way she expected. ;-) And congrats on your thesis chapter!

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Date: 01/23/2012 Title: Chapter 15: The Revelation

Whoa! Talk about action packed!!!!! Amazing chapter- can't wait for next weekend! ;)

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reviewing!

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Date: 01/30/2012 Title: Chapter 16: The Instinct

I know!!! Where is atmd??

But anyway, damn this was good. If this is what comes out then the weekly deadline is wonderful. I always think it must be so hard to write a person so animalistic. Harder still in Logan's case where he's balancing both aspects up there on the edge of his consciousness.

Can't wait to see more- especially how Marie will be when she surfaces (assuming she does). Love this story!

Author's Response: I know, right? First atmd taunts us by telling us \"The Private Dance\" is all written, and then she disappears! We need some kind of Rogan bat-signal to call people back when things get grim around here. At least Jaq came back, though. :-) I\'m glad you liked this chapter despite the rush-job. I was having a hard time finding a balance between making Feral!Rogue\'s thoughts animal-like (e.g., not knowing all the words for things) without making it too confusing. I\'m also interested to see how she reacts once she surfaces -- she manages to surprise me sometimes. :-D Glad you\'re liking the story, and thanks so much for being such a faithful reviewer!

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Date: 02/08/2012 Title: Chapter 17: The Aftermath

Damn, these just keep getting better and better. How the hell do you do it??? Well, however you do it, I'm grateful. Loved this chap!!!!

Author's Response: So glad you liked it, and thanks again for being such an amazing reviewer!

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Date: 02/12/2012 Title: Chapter 18: The Encounter

Oh man, I love this.

Fics where Logan knows before Marie. Where Logan is more open and aware with feelings than she is. It's so refreshing to see his honesty. Must be the part of him that is more accepting of his feral part. He just *knows*. And he knows nothing will change the way he feels about her.

"I'll wait."

I melted. Really. Marie has got some crazy control not to melt and throw herself at him then. I certainly would. lol, no self-control when it comes to a Logan who has decided he knows what he wants. ;P

Can't wait to see how this plays out!

Author's Response: Aw, so glad you\'re liking it. I\'m having a really tough time getting these guys toward something romantic. I\'m glad you liked the decision to move Logan forward even if Marie is still lagging a bit! And I agree, he would have had me long before now. ;-) Thanks so much for reviewing!

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Date: 02/12/2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Merchandise

Sorry about the rambly-ness of my last review, btw. My brain feels a bit like mush. Thesis-ing for 4.5 hours so far and still plan to do a lot more today...sigh. Thanks for the lovely break!

Author's Response: Are you kidding? I LOOOOOVE your reviews. The ramblier the better. :-D Good luck with your thesis!

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Date: 02/21/2012 Title: Chapter 19: The Pickup

I like this Stacy (or Miranda, whatever she goes by). Love her attitude!

Oh man, how are you gonna end it there??? But maybe that's good. Keeps me from taking too long a break from my thesis work. lol. This was a good chapter. Short, but excellent. Can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: Yeah, Stacy has moxie. ;-) Hope your thesis is going well! Thanks for reviewing.

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Date: 02/27/2012 Title: Chapter 20: The Boat

Noooooooooooo!!!!! Ugh, she really can't catch a break, can she?

We completely understand about having to study- though any update will be greatly appreciated. Good luck preparing!!!!!!

Author's Response: Yeah, poor Marie. She\'s really gotten kicked around this story. Thanks for the words of encouragement!

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Date: 03/07/2012 Title: Chapter 21: The Symphony

Okay, this was probably my favorite chapter so far. My stomach's doing somersaults, wondering what will happen. Love it!! Can't wait to read more!

Hope the studying is going well!!

Author's Response: So glad you liked it! Thanks for your review. THe studying is...going. ;-)

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Date: 04/18/2012 Title: Chapter 23: The Present

Wow, that's just a cruel chapter!!

But excellently written as usual. And bringing up so many intriguing questions. Looking forward to more!!!!

Author's Response: Aw, I\'d never want to be cruel to you, Dear Reader! Glad you liked it, hope you like the more!

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Date: 04/23/2012 Title: Chapter 24: The Apology

Rescue mission!!!!

Eek, can't wait for more!!!!!

Author's Response: Yup yup! :-D Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: 04/30/2012 Title: Chapter 25: The Plan

Oh man, that was good. I love how you incorporated the stabbing (and yet not stabbing). I'm soooooo looking forward to reading the next chapter!!! It would be a lovely break from all the silly formatting I have to do to my image list, glossary, and bibliography... ;)

Author's Response: So glad you liked it...is this your thesis you\'re formatting? If so, good luck! Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: 05/01/2012 Title: Chapter 26: The Proposal

Sooooo happy to see such a quick update!!! Love it!!!!! :)

Author's Response: Hopefully I\'ll be back on a more or less weekly schedule now. Thanks so much for reviewing!

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Date: 05/13/2012 Title: Chapter 28: The Scarf

Hot. And somehow adorably wonderful at the same time. Glad he knew just what he needed. *snicker* ...in more ways than one...

Author's Response: Aw. Thanks so much for the review! Yep, Logan is quite the good Samaritan here, isn\'t he?

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Date: 05/19/2012 Title: Chapter 29: The Visitor

Oh no!!!! These two just cannot cath a break, can they????

Great update! Looking forward to more after that cliffhanger!

Author's Response: Yeah, it\'s one damn thing after another for these two, isn\'t it? I have to write a story some day when they both just lie on the beach all day, sipping margaritas, to make it up to them. ;-) THanks for reviewing!

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Date: 05/20/2012 Title: Chapter 30: The Fight

Omg, that was gripping!!!!

I seriously worried for a minute there bout you killing off Marie. But you presented a surprising (yet believable) twist. Excellent chapter!!! Really, truly loved it!!!!

Author's Response: So glad you liked it! And that you found the twist believable. Yeah, I knew some readers would be very concerned, but I felt like she had to really seem dead for it to hit Logan in full force. Thanks so much for reviewing!

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Date: 05/26/2012 Title: Chapter 31: The Gambit

Ingenious! Lol, going out with a bang..

I really love what she did for Xavier. Poor Charles. And of course Logan and Marie have the beautiful connection and trust even in this brief final chapter. Lovely.

Great story! I look forward to your next! ;)

Author's Response: Yeah, when Marie and Logan put their heads together, they can be pretty darn devious. :-) Yeah, Xavier is such a closed book, I like that she got that glimpse into his feelings via Eric\'s memories and then acted to spare him. Thanks so much for reviewing!