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Now COMPLETE! Logan goes undercover to investigate Sebastian Shaw after Jean disappears. He finds Rogue there, but what is her connection to Shaw, and can the two of them form an unlikely alliance? Of course they can, it's me! Pure Rogan, don't worry, Jean is just a plot device. ;-)

My usual, which means AU, with drama, action, angst, hot Rogan sex, and a happy ending. And I promise never to leave a story unfinished.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Animal Death

Series: None
Chapters: 22
Wordcount: 49458 - Hits: 157015
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/29/2011 - Last Updated: 11/14/2011
Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 11/20/2011 Title: Chapter 19: The Message

Okay, once again I immediately clicked "Next". But then I saw your admonition and felt guilty (thanks, Mom, for raising me with Catholic guilt...) and had to return. Ugh, Shaw. What an ass. I really hope that Rogue is the one who takes him out.

Author's Response: Thanks, Ebony\'s mom! I\'ll take guilt-fueled reviews. ;-) Yeah, Shaw is quite a jerk. Hope you found his demise satisfying. I expected to have Rogue kill him with glee, but when it came down to it it just didn\'t seem in character for her to do so. Oh well, he still bit it.

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Date: 11/20/2011 Title: Chapter 20: The Standoff

Whoa. Intense.

And it almost made me cry...that scene with Logan. ::sniffle::

Author's Response: I\'m glad you thought that scene was intense. I was hoping to convey their emotion without making it too melodramatic, but seriously, how sad to face losing your relationship when you\'ve *just* found it? Sigh. Thank goodness for my happy ending guarantee, huh?

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Date: 11/20/2011 Title: Chapter 21: The Showdown

Wow, these two just can't catch a break, can they? But,actually, I was just thinking a chapter or two ago that there wasn't the him stabbing her element...knew it had to make its way in here.

Also:

It’s pretty festive, actually.

LMAO!

Author's Response: Yeah, I wasn\'t sure if I would stick to him stabbing her, but I definitely feel that every AU has to have Rogue absorbing Logan at some point. It\'s just so central to her character to have Inner!Logan. In the end, Azazel being such a jerk seemed like a logical way to achieve both ends. Yeah, the Christmas carol joke was a little off-tone for the rest of the chapter, but I couldn\'t resist. I tried hard to kill off Emma, but in the end I settled for humiliating her.

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Date: 11/20/2011 Title: Chapter 22: The Happy Ending

Awwwwww, lovely ending to an absolutely amazing story that took me through a ton of emotions! Excellent! Can't wait for your next one!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much for all your lovely reviews! I\'m so glad you liked it!

Marie focused on dulling the pull of her skin, dampening her body’s desire to consume anything it came in contact with. That was the thing she hated about her mutation. Take, take, take. It felt selfish. She wished she had a mutation that was more suited to helping than hurting. Like if she could give away her own life force with a touch, rather than just steal others’.

Post-X3. A little angst and a lot fluff. Nothing especially original or well-written here, to be honest, but hopefully a fun little read.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Foof, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 13
Wordcount: 10851 - Hits: 97502
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/04/2011 - Last Updated: 08/07/2011
Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 02/19/2012 Title: Chapter 13: The Smutty Part

Just reread this to take a break from school work. Wow, it's wonderful. Love it!

Did you ever wish you could have a mutant around to help you do all those silly things that you just don't have time for? Well, here's your chance.

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 13787 - Hits: 19545
Complete?: No - Published: 08/06/2011 - Last Updated: 01/27/2013
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Date: 08/25/2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

ROFL!!! Oh man...that was amazing. *You* are amazing...hehe, Hank as the Cookie Monster...

Poor Hank and Bobby. Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I love knowing that I can make people laugh.

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Date: 08/14/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

rofl!

hehe, that's great. A nice counter to Measure for Measure if I say so myself. ;)

Author's Response: Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I thought so myself.

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Date: 09/06/2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Whoa. Prof is using his powers for evil. lol...

OMG. This is really hilarious!!!

Storm and her Titanic "episodes"...Celine Dion's spell-singing mutant powers...

This:

Hotties for Hire. Maybe she could get Logan a job? No, stupid idea. Xavier had already had it.

ROFL!!! And this was probably the best:

So you need to steal energy and top-layer thoughts from around one hundred people without getting overwhelmed and confused, while wearing heals and a slinky dress which offers up a lot of skin for people to come in contact with."

And the entire part following. lmao...notecards...hehe, I'll be giggling for days. Can't wait for more!

When Rogue leaves to take the cure, Logan finds it hard to stay at the mansion.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 3501 - Hits: 14736
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/28/2011 - Last Updated: 02/27/2012
Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 11/25/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Kiss Today Goodbye

Wow, great two chapters. I hope you add more!

AU story. X-men Evolution with a little X-men the movie mixed in.
Professor X makes a personal request of Logan while he's away from the school, to find and bring home a former stundent of his by the name of Rogue. However, Rogue isn't alone when Logan finds her and he gets more than he bargains for.

Rated: R
Categories: AU, X-Men Evolution, X1
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 10
Wordcount: 19131 - Hits: 62801
Complete?: No - Published: 09/16/2011 - Last Updated: 05/27/2012
Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 01/06/2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This was a great chapter! I'm so glad you posted a new one. Really loved it.

I like how you're not suddenly making them all a family, but that they're all learning how to cope with one another, that they're all trying to find trust. Really great story!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I\'m so glad you\'re enjoying it.

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Date: 04/12/2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Yay! New chapter!! :) love it- can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I\'m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much! :D

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Date: 05/28/2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh, it's been so long! I was just thinking about this story. Great update! Lol, poor clueless Logan.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I\'m glad you enjoyed the new chapter. :D I know, poor Logan. I just couldn\'t help myself picking on Logan a little. He\'s always to serious in most stories. LOL

Typical how they met story. Typical for Wolverine and Rogue anyway. The rating is pretty much a precaution at this point.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: None
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read, Not Spellchecked

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 7751 - Hits: 31431
Complete?: No - Published: 10/28/2011 - Last Updated: 06/01/2012
Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 01/09/2012 Title: Chapter 3: Marie

I love this!! I can't believe you typed all that on your cell. That would suck. Hope you were able to get your laptop back. This is excellent. Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: still waiting for my laptop to be sent back to me!!! and still writing on my cellphone so its challenging but writing this has been fun!!!

Roped into attending a conference in Alaska with the X-Geeks, Logan meets up with Marie under very different circumstances. They don't quite live up to each other's fantasies. But maybe that's a good thing.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Angst, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 51
Wordcount: 25812 - Hits: 427053
Complete?: No - Published: 11/07/2011 - Last Updated: 12/13/2011
Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 11/21/2011 Title: Chapter 16: The Names

Wow, this story is so touching.

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Date: 11/21/2011 Title: Chapter 21: The Green

Okay, this is great. I really love the way you portray Logan here. He wants so badly to be the good guy for her, but he just wants her so badly that he can't help himself.

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Date: 11/21/2011 Title: Chapter 26: The Compliment

OMG. I totally love this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Yay. Thanks so much for the reviews! I\'m really glad you\'re liking the story so far :)

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 11/22/2011 Title: Chapter 27: The Secret

Oh, poor Marie. Afraid she can't control it in her sleep and not wanting to hurt Logan. Both so scared the other will be anti-mutant. ::sniffle:: Thanks for the quick update! I really love this story and can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Yeah, this Marie\'s had it pretty rough, and it\'s about to get even worse, actually. But there\'s a happy ending, I promise! Gah, first I let the poor girl get eaten alive by wolves and now this. I seriously need to write a fic where she gets a mani-pedi and eats a box of chocolates or something. Sorry Marie, LOL!

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Date: 11/22/2011 Title: Chapter 28: The Bright Spot

I love that she knows him better than he knows himself. That she realizes he's damaged, broken, but still sees the good in him that he doesn't see. And, may I say that I'm so happy there was another chapter I hadn't noticed at first? ::happy dance:: THANK YOU!

Author's Response: Haha you are most welcome. That\'s been my favorite part of this story as I initially wrote it and as I go back and edit/polish--the fact that they are both damaged people, but they make each other a little bit better by being together. *swoon*

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed
Date: 11/22/2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Convention

I love this story so much I just re-read it all over again. :) The vulnerability Logan has in it is touching and sweet. And you somehow pull it off while keeping him his manly self. Kudos to you.

Author's Response: Aw. That\'s definitely the highest compliment. So glad this story merited a re-read for you! I hope you enjoy the rest of it as well =)

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Date: 11/25/2011 Title: Chapter 29: The Morning After

Awwww, I just love this story! And I can't tell you how excited I was to see how many chapters are now posted!!!!! :D Even though I should be doing homework or editing some of my client's photos, I'm totally going to put that to the side now and read. hehe...

Author's Response: Photo editing, huh? Cool. Well sorry to distract you from your responsibilities! But thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)

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Date: 11/25/2011 Title: Chapter 30: The Intruder

NOOOO! I hate when computers do weird shit and cause you to have to redo stuff. Ugh.

Ooh, protective Logan- WTH, Scott?? Barging your way into to Logan's room. Annoying!

Off to read the next!

Author's Response: Yeah, I think Scott just wasn\'t even thinking about how rude that was. Poor guy, and Jean too. I kind of made their characters oblivious, spoiled brats. Sort of like the X-Men: Evolution Jean and Scott. Haha!

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Date: 11/25/2011 Title: Chapter 31: The Fear

Aw, that's heart-wrenching. Logan's so vulnerable with her. He just wants to be good for her... makes me sniffle.

Sooooo happy there's another chapter...

Author's Response: Yeah, he is such a good guy. He just doesn\'t know it yet. I think Marie will help him with that =)

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Date: 11/25/2011 Title: Chapter 32: The Breakfast

He is good for her. As soon as she gets used to him and knows he'd never hurt her intentionally. I love that he just wants to take care of her and will take whatever she'll give. His infatuation with her is adorable.

Author's Response: Isn\'t it though? I just love slightly damaged Logan. He\'s got this vulnerability, and this desire to be good, but he just isn\'t quite sure if he can. Guh.

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Date: 11/25/2011 Title: Chapter 33: The Talk

Uh oh, here comes trouble...

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Date: 11/25/2011 Title: Chapter 34: The Yes

That’s the best thing I ever felt in my life, darlin’.

::melts::

I say it all the time, but I really do love this story. And I'm sad there's only one more chapter for me to read after this. lol. You've captured it so well. The way they both just *feel* something for the other, but there's still the awkwardness, fear (of rejection, of being hurt, etc), nervousness, and vulnerability because they just don't *know* each other yet. Great, great story.

Author's Response: It\'s okay, you can say it as many times as you like ;). So glad you\'re enjoying the story. And I definitely agree with your analysis of Logan and Marie. They may not \'know\' each other yet, but they know how they feel, and Logan at least is one to trust those instincts.