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This is based off of X-1 and 2, but with a twist...On a mission with the team, young Rogue's troubled past is soon revealed. Nothing is ever going to be the same, but can one woman's past tear the X-Men in half and doubt all they ever knew, but most of all; Can Logan take the skeletons in her closet, when in reality they are his own? Journey to what made this fire of a southern belle turn so icy then finally find home in a brute of a man that all thought untameable. DON'T FORGET TO REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!

Rated: Mature
Categories: X1, X2, X3, Comicverse, X-Men Evolution, X-Men Origins Wolverine
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Dark, Drama, Friendship, General
Tags: None
Warnings: Character Death, Cutting

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 11306 - Hits: 23211
Complete?: No - Published: 04/11/2011 - Last Updated: 04/11/2011
Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 04/11/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice beginning! Gonna settle in and rest the rest! :)

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 04/11/2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

You described Rogue's movements very well here. Nice touch with the Russian, very mysterious. :)

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 04/11/2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I feel like reaching in there and smacking Kitty! I like all the interplay you have between everyone, and the description of the lab.
:)

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 04/11/2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Good for Rogue for getting rid of Bobby. I like how confident Logan is with her, and how he showed her she's still desirable despite how horribly scarred she is. Nice chapter!

Logan and Marie get what they most want for Christmas, and it’s not their two front teeth…

Rated: Mature
Categories: X-Men Origins Wolverine, AU, X3
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Holiday, Shipper, Songfic
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: My Big Phat X-Men Wedding
Chapters: 25
Wordcount: 62151 - Hits: 150061
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/20/2011 - Last Updated: 06/24/2011
Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 04/20/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Would it be really greedy of me to want another chapter, ASAP? :)

Author's Response: Hehe, nope. I\'m posting 2 to keep you entertained until tomorrow. If the WiFi gets fixed at my dialysis unit tomorrow, I\'ll send out more chapters. Deal?

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 04/21/2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Interesting take on Logan having some extended family - I look forward to how this is going to play out. :)

Author's Response: I\'m still working on the lineage. It should hopefully come out sometime before the wedding. I hope you\'re ready for my Easter present early. I\'m posting two more chapters, at least until Sat. or Mon.\r\nThank you for reviewing!\r\n

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 04/23/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very sweet chapters, then very hot. Thanks you for the early Easter present !

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. Your welcome. I will have more to post as soon as I get word back from my beta. Is the accent spelling annoying when you read it or do you like it?

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 04/30/2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

It's interesting seeing how you have Marie and Logan interact with each other, and their affection for each other really comes through. Very sweet! I really like your very romantic take on Logan as well. :)

Author's Response: I wanted to show that even though he may be a bad-ass, he\'s a totally different guy when it comes to his girl. We get to see the \'good guy\' come out. It doesn\'t make him any less a bad-ass and we get to see more of his humanity. Almost like he\'s just a guy, but he\'s got an extraordinary side.

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 05/09/2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I didn't even see that you had updated the last chapter! Very, very sweet, the comment about Logan feeling a bit humiliated about her asking him and how quickly it seemed that they were talking marriage was realistic. Nice touch between the chapters by throwing Scott into the mix. Very enjoyable! :)

Author's Response: Yeah, call me The Stealth Poster... LOL! Yeah, you guy\'s will have to stay tooned in to find out just when Logan\'s gonna out do Marie\'s proposal. Yeah, I thought I might throw Scott under the bus. Thank you, thank you. Please stay tooned for more updates, don\'t want ya to get left behind... LOL Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 05/16/2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I find that Logan is very sweet with Marie. That they both find comfort in each other's bodies without resorting to sex illustrated their trust and love for each other (but don't get me wrong - me like-ee the whoopee!) Very sweet chapter but I am getting worried about Logan's flashbacks.

Author's Response: Not too sweet I hope... Don\'t need him turning into Scott. I\'m glad that is what you are reading between the lines... And I know you like the whoopee. I think there might be some coming up. Still trying to form thoughts after this weekend... I\'m glad you like the chapter. Just to give you a hint, the reason why Logan\'s having so many flashbacks is me setting up the part where we find out the big secret of his family... So there is a method to the madness. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 05/20/2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Eep!

***is it hot in here or what?***

Very nice... ;) You surprised me with the clawing action at the end, but yes, that's what he needs, a woman who can keep up with him - lol

Now on to the next chapter....

Author's Response: LOL, I had to freshen it up a bit. We are almost to the end of Santa Baby. I wanted to show that they were so wild that his orgasm triggered the female feral response in Marie, showing him that she could take it a bit rough. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 05/20/2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Very funny chapter (love the bathroom in the bus and porn romm charges, lol) - hopefully Logan won't let his insecurities about Marie's parents not liking him stop him from proposing to her (yes, I think he should do it too!) Thanks for the double chapter surprise! :)

Author's Response: Oh no they won\'t stop him or I wouldn\'t have a story. Yeah, Logan has big plans for the proposal.\r\n\r\n

Author's Response: Oh no they won\'t stop him or I wouldn\'t have a story. Yeah, Logan has big plans for the proposal.\r\n\r\nThe proposal is in the sequel.\r\n\r\nThank you for your review!

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I like the interaction you have going on with everyone...can't wait for the rest...:)

Author's Response: I\'m glad you like it. I just wish I was better at description. There\'s more in the oven.

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

You had me going when Marie was frozen, lol, but man, what a way to wake up! Love it. :)

Author's Response: Hehe, I had a dream the night before I wrote that, that I was Marie...

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Aunt Maybelle’s whore house, you poke it, you bought it.

Too funny! Another great chapter - you have me thinking in over-drive ! :)

Author's Response: LOL, I know! It came from, you break it, you bought it. Hehe, does that mean that you\'re adding more to Nowhere soon? I love it! Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I like the relationship that Marie had going on with Chloe - you really get across how young adolescents think - little kid one moment, sass mouthed adult the next. :)

Author's Response: Haha, yeah she can be a little witch sometimes. She reminded me so much of Marie as a teenager before she left home. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 06/15/2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Oh boy, what a decision! Hopefully his love for Marie will keep the feral in him under control (that is, if they decide to watch the movie)

Like how you pulled in X-Men First Class - :) Good job!

Author's Response: Hehe, I hope so too. I didn\'t want to give away too much of the movie... Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 06/24/2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Another fantastic update - pins and needles here! :)

Author's Response: Hehe, well the last chapter is going up today as well as the first chapter of the sequel to give you a lively weekend update. Thanks for your review and sorry for the wait!

Marie finds out about a secret....

Rated: G
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Foof, Friendship, General
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read, Not Spellchecked

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 902 - Hits: 2876
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/21/2011 - Last Updated: 04/21/2011
Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 04/21/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Relaxation?

That was a lot of fun! :) Good job!

Dark Rogan. Rogue's possesive side takes over and she begins to unravel.

Rated: R
Categories: AU, X1
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Dark, Drama, Songfic
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 5017 - Hits: 3081
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/27/2011 - Last Updated: 04/27/2011
Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 04/27/2011 Title: Chapter 1: "Try and touch me so I can scream at you not to touch me..."

You know, when I read the parts where he said, not to call her a whore, and to please not hurt her, I think my heart just about broke into two solidly separate parts. When it ended up being evil Jean forcing him, I think I just about squealed in relief! Thanks for the emotional ride! :)

“Slapped my face and he shook me like a rag doll
Don't that sound like a real man
I'm gonna show him what a little girl's made of
Gunpowder and gunpowder and lead
Gunpowder and lead, yeah, yeah, ha.”

Rated: Mature
Categories: X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Dark, Shipper, Songfic
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: The Miranda Rules
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 17952 - Hits: 20552
Complete?: No - Published: 05/02/2011 - Last Updated: 12/30/2011
Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 05/23/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Talk about mysterious - what the hell happened between Marie and Logan? On to the next chapter... (I really like this by the way....)

Author's Response: Hehe, I\'m so glad you do. I don\'t think many people would. Just keep reading! Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 05/23/2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

EEP!

What a place to end the chapter! And I like dark - so I am SO in...great work!

Author's Response: Hahaha, I told ya, I was known as the Evil Queen of Cliffhangers... I\'ve got one more chapter to send and then I have to get back to work on chapter 4. I\'m glad you like dark stuff, because I have another story in the works that is so dark that it sends me into a tailspin of emotion when I\'m writing it. I will have to get that first chapter done and send. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

oh SNAP. I think my favorite part was her leaving him outside all night - it was the least he deserved, but then again, he couldn't really remember what happened. Here's to hoping they figure things out.

Author's Response: LOL! Yeah, I think she was sort of feeling like she should leave the animal outside on the porch like a dog. I hope so too.

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

There is some hope after all. Very sweet, I like how Wolverine raced to her room at the sound of her screams but had left her alone earlier when she was crying. Can't wait for your next chapter. :)

Author's Response: I\'m 2 pages into the 5. It\'s much harder than I thought it was gonna be to write it. LOL. Thanks for your review!

Short drabble between our favorite two people.

Rated: PG
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drabble
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 164 - Hits: 1723
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/03/2011 - Last Updated: 05/03/2011
Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 05/03/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You're going to add to this...right? Pretty please? :)

Author's Response: i will try to. thanks for the review. o it\'s you! aha. just noticed. hehe