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Marie focused on dulling the pull of her skin, dampening her body’s desire to consume anything it came in contact with. That was the thing she hated about her mutation. Take, take, take. It felt selfish. She wished she had a mutation that was more suited to helping than hurting. Like if she could give away her own life force with a touch, rather than just steal others’.

Post-X3. A little angst and a lot fluff. Nothing especially original or well-written here, to be honest, but hopefully a fun little read.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Foof, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 13
Wordcount: 10851 - Hits: 97844
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/04/2011 - Last Updated: 08/07/2011
Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star
Date: 08/06/2011 Title: Chapter 11: Aftermath

Love this. Her thoughts, her fear giving way to anxiety as their relationship is cusping on the romantic...fantastic. Utterly, utterly fantastic. Gran is SO right! :)

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Date: 08/06/2011 Title: Chapter 12: Revelation

I felt that hug.

Love that you brought in the finger swirl on the hand, and his reaction...Did you hear the sigh that escaped me?

This story was like climbing a staircase - each step changes your perspective despite the difference of only a few inches. So wonderfully done. I don't think I would have gotten the same experience if you put it all into one chapter.

Perfectly, perfectly done. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I\'m glad you feel the same way about the chapters. I wasn\'t trying to be a review whore or anything, lol, I just really felt like it worked in that format :). I\'m glad you liked the story, thank you for taking the time to always leave such great feedback, and hope you enjoy the \'lucky chapter 13\' the others have convinced me to tack on :)

Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star
Date: 08/10/2011 Title: Chapter 13: The Smutty Part

When I saw that you added this (love the chapter title, lol!) I got all girlee and grinned like an idiot.

The grin stayed on the whole time I read this.

Hot, sexy, funny, awkward, and so damn SWEET. Exactly what it should have been and you delivered it, flawlessly. I am SO happy you joined in the fun, atmd - you are so very, very talented! :)

Author's Response: Awww shucks. Thanks :). I\'m really glad to have found this site as well. The quality of the writing here is great & i\'m super excited to be a part of it. I think some of the writers here must be professional authors or something 0_o. Heee. Yay for girly grinning. I was doing that as I wrote this as well. So fun to go back in time and remember all the awkwardness and insecurity that comes with growing into your sexuality. I\'m really having fun with this Marie, and the movie version of Logan, who seems a bit more insecure and passionate than the movie/comic version. a lot of the inspiration for this was the scene with Jean from X3, where he\'s struggling to control himself and she has to tell him \"It\'s okay, it\'s okay\". That was just such a sweet, vulnerable moment, and a side of him that doesn\'t get showcased nearly enough :). Blagh sorry for typos; wrote this on my phone and too lazy to go back and fix!

Did you ever wish you could have a mutant around to help you do all those silly things that you just don't have time for? Well, here's your chance.

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 13787 - Hits: 19687
Complete?: No - Published: 08/06/2011 - Last Updated: 01/27/2013
Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 08/25/2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Omigod, LMAO. Supremely handy?!?! I love this!

Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star
Date: 08/25/2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh man, I cannot tell you how hard you had me laughing. My husband thinks I have officially lost it!!! I could see everything, the mom, the kid, the party and poor, poor Hank (and Bobby for that matter). The ending was superb! Well executed, bravo!!! :)

Author's Response: I\'m glad you\'re so amused by this. I laugh at it myself all the time, which feels kind of weird honestly. Let me know if I have to get a hold of your husband and tell him that you\'re not crazy. I take it letting him read over your shoulder wouldn\'t be helpful? Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 08/06/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I would like to place an order for the Wolverine to um...help clear out my...er...well, JUST SEND HIM.

;) Cute and funny. Oh, and if the Wolverine's too busy (I suspect there's already a waiting list for him) I'll take Remy. For now, that is...

Author's Response: I\'ll send Wolverine your way when he\'s done at my place. He\'s been kind of slacking lately, so there might be a little bit of a wait. Hope that\'s okay... Glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing! Both stories at that! You\'re, my dear, are totally awesome.

Is Logan consciously aware of the messages he's sending Rogue?

Rated: G
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: General
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 719 - Hits: 3188
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/10/2011 - Last Updated: 08/10/2011
Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star
Date: 08/11/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I found myself taking notes - not just for the meaning of each type of flower, but for the beautiful story-telling style.

Thank you.

Author's Response: LOL. No, thank you. That was kind.

She respected his privacy enough to leave his memories alone. But tomorrow, she was taking the Cure. Tomorrow, they might be gone.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, UST
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 4
Wordcount: 4895 - Hits: 20712
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/12/2011 - Last Updated: 08/20/2011
Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star
Date: 08/25/2011 Title: Chapter 4: Flying free

I have decided that *this* is the official end to X-Men 3. Great job, as expected whenever your name is attached to a story. :)

Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star
Date: 08/14/2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Memory Room

Me likey. :)

Ready? Holy Moses woman, please tell me that you've got the next chapter almost done.

Author's Response: Writing it as we speak. Sometimes I think I need to cure myself of my fondness for cliffhangers. Then I think .... no. ;)

Logan is having a very good morning. Or is he?

Rated: Adult
Categories: X1, AU, Comicverse
Characters: None
Genres: Foof, Holiday, Humor, PWP, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1194 - Hits: 4599
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/17/2011 - Last Updated: 08/17/2011
Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star
Date: 08/25/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

See what happens when I have the audicity to take off on vacation? I miss reading snippets like this! Hil. Air. Eee. Us. Man, how can you make something so sexy so damn funny?!?!

Author's Response: Yeah! The nerve of you, taking off on vacation. (Heh, hope you enjoyed it ;P). I\'m glad you liked--and glad the \'funny\' didn\'t ruin the \'sexy\'. Nothing like the visual of Hank in a tutu to wreck the mood, eh?

Everything has begun to go back to normal finally after Stryker's raids. Our two favorite people have started to become a little closer. But when Logan starts to suffer from severe headaches, Marie might be the only one who can help him.

Rated: R
Categories: X2, AU, X-Men Origins Wolverine
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Dark, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Character Death, Not Beta Read

Series: A Step in the Right Path
Chapters: 7
Wordcount: 14020 - Hits: 36709
Complete?: No - Published: 08/20/2011 - Last Updated: 04/26/2012
Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 08/25/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Pool Party

Great start. His thought process in regards to the swimsuit was cute but you've got me worried as to why he would get a headache. Please continue this, it's very interesting! :)

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Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to throw some cute humor in. And I will keep posting!

Scott starts noticing the once shy girl and her feminine forms moves in to his dreams. When Jean finds her once loyal suitor has his mind elsewhere she turns to the trusting Logan. But Wolverine does not like it when his property is poached upon and when Cyclops goes to far he realizes just how far he himself is willing to go.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1, X2
Characters: None
Genres: Adult
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 6
Wordcount: 4148 - Hits: 37379
Complete?: No - Published: 08/22/2011 - Last Updated: 09/29/2013
Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 08/25/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very interesting, I hope you continue this. Anything with Scott usually grabs my attention! :)

Author's Response: Me too. I like the whole love square storys. Hope you like the next parts as well

When Rogue leaves to take the cure, Logan finds it hard to stay at the mansion.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 3501 - Hits: 14819
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/28/2011 - Last Updated: 02/27/2012
Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 08/29/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Kiss Today Goodbye

I see you went with the alternate ending for Xmen 3. Where is Marie, I wonder? I'm very interested to see where you take this. :)