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Logan comes back after a few years ready to accept his claim to Marie only to have a tendency of walking in on the wrong end of things. Misunderstandings arise that cause him to question whether he and Marie belong together.

Rated: R
Categories: X2, AU
Characters: None
Genres: PWP
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 6
Wordcount: 14136 - Hits: 29578
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/19/2011 - Last Updated: 08/08/2011
Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 07/07/2011 Title: Chapter 4: That was one hell of a mind-gasm

Wheels of Misfortune.

Love. It.

Wolverines never run away. They deal, gut, and then take off.

Have I told you yet that your story just makes my day? If only you could hear my laughter from where you are - much better than this boring review from me! :)

Author's Response: Wheels of Misfortune was my favorite! Not a boring review...knowing that there is someone out there who\'s laughing at my particular brand of humor makes me happy!

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 07/26/2011 Title: Chapter 5: Down, down baby....

***Drops coffee mug*** Talk about leaving things hanging...

:)

Good job! :)

Author's Response: hopefully not hanging for too long :D \r\n\r\nThanks!

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 08/10/2011 Title: Chapter 6: This is how you do it....

APPLAUSE - APPLAUSE

Yummy smuttiness and grin-making funniness, all wrapped up into one hell of a hilarious, sexy story. Loved it! :)

Little girl, little girl, soft and sweet little girl. Wear the Spring Maid's green and a wolf will come for you...

A story about little girls who like big, bad wolves.

Rated: Mature
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Dark
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 33
Wordcount: 75469 - Hits: 229767
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/22/2011 - Last Updated: 02/20/2013
Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 06/24/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Skin

OOOOoooo.

Like it so far. :)

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Date: 06/24/2011 Title: Chapter 2: The Spring Maid's Green

I was totally immersed in the world you created - such fantastic imagery - and you had my heart pumping right along with Stray when she encountered the wolves. I can see who they are - man, you are just a wizard. I don't want you to get too distracted from F&R, but I really want you to update this one fast. :)

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Date: 06/29/2011 Title: Chapter 3: The Company of Miracles

Oh my.

You are weaving such a beautiful story. I'm just stunned actually with the visuals here.

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Date: 06/29/2011 Title: Chapter 4: Silk

Utterly perfect. I have never wanted to be a cigarette more in my life - lol!

And yet, you continue to maintain the beautiful tapestry here with this chapter. I am so happy you are popping these out so quickly. You are a master.

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Date: 07/07/2011 Title: Chapter 5: And Around His Heart A Strangling Golden Hair

What Jaq said.

You are on fire with this - you must be. I'm going to run out of things to say about your writing, your imagination, your incredible talent...everything. Red-gold strand of hair? Man, that is just so...so...perfect. I could feel the cold, the night, the TIGHTNESS of the damn thing!

Then there's lines like this that open the door of the world you've created and give me a front row seat:


...the trees spider-boned with winter, the snow falling over her hair like damp, wet kisses against her skin...

Now, I shall go read it again. :)

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 07/13/2011 Title: Chapter 6: The Moonlight Key

So many things, so many nuances revealed here so expertly by you, I am just overwhelmed!

I can barely function, waiting for the next installment of this beautifully crafted story.

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Date: 07/21/2011 Title: Chapter 7: Meeting the Wolf

The terror of everyone - the bravery of Ororo (I wish she hadn't hurt him, though I understand she had no choice) and the woman scorned in your witchy Mistress Gold.

How much fun is this?!

“And blood?” The eyes moved nearer from the shadows. “You take no fright at the notion of being decked in that too?”

Scary and yet so freakin' sexy. Little girl, little girl, the time to flee is right now. But then again, maybe that warning applies to Logan, hmm? Love. This. I am such a sucker for fairy tales, especially dark interpretations of them. This is so wonderful, seriously.

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Date: 07/28/2011 Title: Chapter 8: Safe Places

Another fantastic snippet of the world you've created, the snow, the wind, the landscape:

Branches a thick lattice overhead, roots snaking and treacherous underfoot.

And the connection between the two on a physical level is just ramping up:

The need to have it filled with a man’s moan or a wolf’s howl too intoxicating to resist.

Wow. Words to you are like shades of paint on an artist's tablet. I love your decription of Kurt and I think he would too - Errol Flynn incarnate!

Yet again, you amaze. :)

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Date: 08/06/2011 Title: Chapter 9: The Man In The Wolf, The Wolf In The Girl

Another fantastic installment!

...the loss of his nearness tugging at her insides as if something precious were spilling out of her- Wow. Can't get a more emptier feeling than that.

"You think the stench of what you want from me is strong enough to protect you from what I am?” What a bastard thing to say and yet so thrillingly sexy. I could just HEAR Logan's voice there...

“There, there,” she murmured, “Poor beast, sweet beast. Don’t be angry my darling, don’t be sad, I’ll not leave you alone in the snow…”

So beautiful. How could he not fall in love with her? So magical. :)

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Date: 08/10/2011 Title: Chapter 10: Sunlight

:(

Now this chapter made me all kinds of sad. Poor, poor Ororo. You brought in T'Challa (the first time I have ever read it in fanfic, Roganwise) and the comic-fan in me just about melted in contentment. What a phenomenal job. You still made him so very powerful, despite the outcome, so major kudos to you for that.

I especially like the connection Stray now has with Logan. What an extra-ordinary story you have going here, did I already tell you how addicted I am to it? :)

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Date: 08/25/2011 Title: Chapter 11: In The Body, As In A Secret

Bastardy is right:

His voice was harsh. “So you just crawled into a cave with a savage beast of your own volition?”

And there is this:

“You think me an interesting pet fer a rich man’s daughter, you think me a wonder or a marvel perhaps.” He pushed his hips aggressively into hers, the movement feeling like a taunt, an insult. His grip on her was starting to hurt. “I don’t want a woman who’s only taking me because my fur allows her touch,” he hissed. “I don’t want a woman who looks on her own injury as if it were a game. I don’t want a child dressed up in her mother’s clothing, now matter how much she throws herself at me-”

But he still is so heartbreaking in response to her declaring being cursed as well:

Hazel eyes met hers. “But not enough to deserve a monster like me.”

Can you just stop functioning in your real life and just focus on writing? Really. Because that is what you have been created to do. Simple as that. I will feed you, house you as long as you continuously write. K? :)

Father Time is going to give our love birds a gift...

This is the sequel to Santa Baby.

Rated: Mature
Categories: X-Men Origins Wolverine, X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Holiday, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: My Big Phat X-Men Wedding
Chapters: 25
Wordcount: 63555 - Hits: 149238
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/24/2011 - Last Updated: 10/12/2011
Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 08/25/2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Keep it going! :)

Author's Response: You better betcha! Good things come to those who wait. LOL!

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 06/25/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was hot...*ahem*

Dman, but those strawberries sound so delicious! (not to mention a certain feral....) Great job. :)

Author's Response: Glad you think so... I hope you like the floor, you better stay down there while you read the next chapter...\r\n\r\nI\'ve got pics if you wanna see \'em. Email me and I\'ll send \'em. There\'s more deliciousness to behold, now go and eat up... Enjoy...\r\n\r\n

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 06/29/2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

THUD.

That was me, falling off my chair.
Steamy stuff, my dear. ;)

Author's Response: Hehehe, did you make sure you had a pillow on the floor or should I send my Logan Muse to kiss and make it better? LOL! \r\n\r\nI\'m glad you liked it and thank you for your review!

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 07/09/2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

So much depth to Logan's history here, you've done a lot of back-story. Great stuff. :)

Author's Response: I had to make it plausible... And there\'s more so read on... Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 07/12/2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Too funny - I love frisky Xavier! Now you have me all worried about Rogue not being able to have kids. :( But you'll make me happy, I'm sure!

Author's Response: Well, today was officially my worst day here at dialysis. Bad news for me, good news for ya\'ll. I will be back tomorrow with 2 more chapters to post.\r\n\r\nAs for children... I won\'t lie, it will be a rough road... But when has anything been easy for Logan and Marie. Even their love and relationship has been work. Thanks for you review!

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 07/28/2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Very steamy! :)

Author's Response: Good good, I was afraid it might be too boring, LOL!

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 08/03/2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I wanted to tell you that I really enjoy the scenes with Marie and Logan. Very sweet, but still, very sexy.

Logan is in for shock when he finally gets to meet his family.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I will pass on your comment to the muses... You never know what may come out of them next!\r\n\r\nYeah, I haven\'t told him yet either... Hehe. Thank you for your continued support!

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 08/03/2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh no. Sabretooth? I hope Logan kick his @ss. :)

Author's Response: As the movie title says, THERE WILL BE BLOOD!

Before she could reach that fight bar in Canada, Rogue was taken in and raised by Mystique. Years later, she and Wolverine meet for the first time as fellow X-Men. Fate draws them together after a very unusual attack leaves Wolverine in a unique position to help. AU with movie/comicverse elements.

Rated: Adult
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Animal Death, Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 20
Wordcount: 68600 - Hits: 160415
Complete?: No - Published: 07/01/2011 - Last Updated: 10/23/2011
Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 07/01/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh wow, this is really fantastic. The time and care you put into the woods and lake, plus Rogue's inner thinking was so good.

I look forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you :). This is my first time writing Rogue, so I\'m glad her thoughts came across well.

Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star
Date: 07/03/2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow.

Talk about exciting and heart-stopping! I was complete lost in this! I am SO looking forward to your next chapter - great work! :)

Author's Response: Hee. You needn\'t look forward very far, seeing as I just posted it :). Glad you\'re enjoying the story!

Reviewer: serafim Signed
Date: 07/05/2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

And yet again, another fantastic chapter. I love how Logan and Rogue interacted with each other - so feral indeed! Is it okay that I was so hoping he was going to tear away at her?!

Okay, I'll calm down now. Scott would have imploded/exploded at the sight, poor proper baby that he is.

After reading that, I think I need some of that alcohol myself so considerately left behind on the bathtub ledge. (I loved that in the last chapter as well!)

Great, great job! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much. Is it terrible to say you\'re my favorite reviewer? And it\'s not just because you heap on the praise. Really.