K - super happy you updated this! Just a quick review because I need to go back and read back a few chapters to back into the swing of things, but thank you so much for updating! Fantastic writing!

Very beautifully written - you really expressed how much Logan/Wolverine cared for her.

“Marie,” he rasped, eyes on hers, “you know this means forever, right?”

One of the best ways of Logan telling Marie that he loves her I have ever read. :)

OOOoo, what's going on here?

Very nice dialogue between Rogue and Elizaveta - the trust the child has towards her and the affection Rogue has for her really shines through. I won't tell you my guesses are about what's going to happen - I would be too mortified if I was way off the mark lol! Thanks for the update - great work as always! :)

I have officially made today "serafim day" and will spend it settling in and reading this story as slowly and as thoroughly as I can. I remember reading it a while ago, but now that you're updating again, I can't help but invest in this story again.

This deserves a lengthy review for each chapter because it is simply amazing. Really. What you have taken here, the premise of your story is nothing short than mesmerizing and your writing just transcends it. You are extra-ordinary at telling this story - words fail. Really. They fail.

So many parts of this chapter got me breathless but here's a few:

His voice was thick and laden deep with seduction, want, and most importantly command.

This pretty much summed up the first chapter for me. :)

He thought he saw what might have been a very very small uptick of a smile from her, but she just nodded instead.

There she is. I don't think Logan quite understands what he's getting himself into here!

Love it. This is the Wolverine/Logan that I just simply ADORE. :)

Author's Response: I am in awe that you have given me an entire day. I really hope to keep up with your expectations as we go forward. Thank you for taking the time to review each chapter, it is very much appreciated. Have fun picking up your youngest and hopefully I will get chapter 7 done before the 4th of July holiday. :) Thank you again, Alesia

Very intense chapter.

His thighs looked like they could hold up the weight of the sky.

It's descriptions like these that stun me. Your thought process is mind-boggling.

Like I said, very intense chapter - you explained the relationship he had with Jean with such clarity, I never hated her as much as I did reading about how she strung him along. The silk boxers? Wow. What. A. Bitch.

Poor Marie - a real Jekyl and Hyde moment with Logan at the end! :)

Author's Response: Logan is going to have to work on that Jekyl and Hyde thing, he has to learn he must think before he reacts when it comes to Marie, but sad to say we aren\'t there yet.

Damn, he was one lucky, corrupt, dishonorable son of a bitch.

What. A. Chapter.

You, my dear, are the queen of all Smutdom. Holy, holy, holy hotness - I am taking notes (for my story, *ahem* not for... you know...um...where is my damn husband?!)

;)

Author's Response: Thanks, my aim with this story was to keep the smut throughout the entire thing so don\'t worry we have more to go (or to come...:P)

What a powerful chapter!!! That was so heartbreaking - poor Logan, poor Marie. After everything Marie has gone through, she deserves happily ever after....please tell there is one...

Author's Response: There is light at the end of the darkness I promise, though we might have a long way to go to get there!! I am a sucker for happy endings!!

Oh no, I hope everything's okay with Laura. :( Beautifully described, I really like reading Logan as a kind, attentive father. But really, poor little kid - you've done a great job showing how the lab affected her.

Oh wow. Very hot. It was only a matter of time, wasn't it? Hopefully they'll figure out a way out. Great job.

So, I get this update while I'm waiting for my daughter's school bus to arrive, and I stupidly think I can do it justice while reading it on my tiny iphone. From the first few sentences, I knew that I was going to be transported. So, impatient though I am, I very calmly retrieved my child, made her lunch, and once she was safely placed on the sofa to watch her Yo Gabba, Gabba, I sat down to read your latest installment.

I don't even know how to begin. I couldn't very well cut and paste the entire content of your latest Chapter, but in all honesty, each and every single word was perfection. It is gobsmacking how you are able to immerse yourself so completely into your imagination that you can describe what you see in such a masterful, thorough manner. I envisioned everything with such clarity! The inner dialogue, the interactions with the guard, Frost and even Control, the setting of the home and its inhabitants - just, well...masterful. That's the best word for it.
I am so glad you have reposted you story, it's incredible. I am constantly amazed by the quality of writing I find on this site, and you my dear, set the bar with this new addition.

Thanks so much for this :)

Author's Response: When I first opened the reviews page and saw the length of your review I thought \"Oh oh, what have I done now?\" Because past experiences have proved that I usually only get long reviews when someone has a bone to pick with something I\'ve written. However, having now read your enthusiastic words I find myself humbled and more than a tad excited by how much enjoyment you got out of the latest chapter. I won\'t say the words come easy, because they don\'t, and sometimes I sit for hours with my pen in hand just trying to think of a single word to describe a particular feeling. However, Wolverine is so much a part of me - (I\'ve been reading his adventures in the comics since I was eight years old) - that I often feel I know him better than he knows himself and when I am writing for him I seem to \'plug\' into his mindset, thus enabling his particular way of looking at things to come forward. Crazy, I know, but there it is! I am so pleased you are enjoying the story so far. I am enjoying writing it and it\'s a huge relief and an encouragement to know that I am actually producing something that my readers deem worthy of their time. Thank you so much for your kind words! I hope I can continue to earn your praise and encouragement!!