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Real name: Pepper
Member Since: 01/09/2011
Membership Status: Member

Finally decided to join the site after spending ages being a creeper.

...will eventually get around to reviewing all my favorite stories...
 
Reviews by pepper-maroon
Why is Logan feeling so hunted? Maybe Marie has something to do with it.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Foof, Humor
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 7600 - Hits: 3656
Complete?: Yes - Published: 09/01/2006 - Last Updated: 09/01/2006
Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed
Date: 12/07/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Absolutely love foofy bits like this. Logan was hilarious and the dialogue had me cracking up with laughter every other minute.

Do take a hint Logan!!

Thanks,
-Pepper

An AU fic in which Charles Xavier and the rest of the X-Men are in a very, very different line of work.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 51605 - Hits: 9897
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/17/2003 - Last Updated: 04/17/2003
Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed star star star star star
Date: 12/06/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Da dunk. Oomph.

Hot damn! I mean, HOT DAMN!

Love this AU. Love everything about it. Just my kind of fic. X-men, porno style.

Where can I find a Maximus Erectus?

I read this a while back as a stalker of this site. After reading a vast amount, I had to be a member so I could review hot fics like this. Then I added to my favs so I read it over and over again.

Thanks,
-Pepper

Rogue goes off the rails as the pressure is on with Logan.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: This Song
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 20431 - Hits: 4357
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/03/2008 - Last Updated: 05/03/2008
Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed
Date: 07/05/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Goody Two Shoes

I don't know why there are more reviews for this, but it was amazingly awesome.

Love Rogue...I mean how can you not ;)

-Pepper

Logan has taken in a desperate and on-the-run Marie who has offered ‘anything’ in exchange for his protection. Logan wants everything. This story chronicles is what happens to them and their relationship dynamic as they learn about each other during the return ride to Xavier’s. It also explores how their rather non-traditional relationship is received by the team once they arrive at the mansion. This story was inspired by Kristine’s “Anything” http://www.wolverineandrogue.com/wrfa/viewstory.php?sid=2559. This story will make more sense if you have read "Anything" first as my opening chapter picks up right where Kristine’s story ends. Besides her story is one of the best W/R pieces ever written so you might as well go read it - NOW! :)…I’ll wait.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Dark, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 8
Wordcount: 74499 - Hits: 115567
Complete?: No - Published: 09/14/2009 - Last Updated: 04/11/2012
Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed
Date: 05/25/2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Um..WOW..and..yummy....I suddenly want to go take a shower with a hairy and well-endowed man.

Bastard that Logan may be, I believe you have got his true nature spot on. This is a more primal, instinctual Logan and something about his raw emotion has baited me.

I've been a creeper for ages on this site and only recently actually joined. Once I saw your update, I had to review.

Great job and the smut is un-fucking-believable!!!

....must go find a man...NOW!!!!!!!!

Thanks,
-Pepper

Author's Response: Pepper - :)~ Thank you for your review. I love that my writing is \'inspiring\'. When you find Logan let me know if he has a brother!. I am glad you took the bait. I have no idea why this bastard Logan spoke to me (okay well that\'s not true, I have an idea) but anyway I am glad you find him as spell-binding as I do.

It ain't easy to trick a telepath--unless you've got another one telling you how.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Angst, Dark, Drama, PWP
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read, Rape/Non-Con

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 18040 - Hits: 29198
Complete?: No - Published: 04/06/2010 - Last Updated: 01/16/2014
Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed
Date: 01/11/2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

After finally transitioning over here from fanfiction.net, I saw that you had updated. *does a little dance*

You saved me from going crazy after being snowed in for the past 2 days.

I hate Jean even more. I didn't think it was possible to hate a person this much, but I definitely do. She needs some adamantium claws ripping her apart.

Looking forward to the next installment...

Author's Response: So glad you made the move to WRFA. I actually post and play in both worlds, but this one seems to have a whole crop of outrageously talented writers who either don\'t know about or don\'t bother with FF.net. Of course, the FF sandbox allows for a multitude of fandoms while this one is limited to the ROGAN world, mostly. I have noticed your byline on the FF pages and in my review box there. Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!\r\n\r\nAnd thanks especially for taking the time to let me know you are enjoying my Jean hatefest.\r\n\r\nSo how sick is it that I actually enjoy making people hate Jean enough to want her dead? And how twisted does it make me when I giggle at the image of those claws hacking her into a pile of goo? Or smile wistfully at the mental picture of her hurtling earthward at break-neck speed after being tossed from the Blackbird at 30,000 feet? (Thanks for that, Sahara.) Trouble is, in this story, death is actually too mild a punishment for what she\'s done -- just ask Logan, or the professor, and let\'s not forget Rogue. However, that doesn\'t mean MegaBitch will want to live once they\'re done with her...We live in hope... --Wendie

'This just became one of those nights.'

Rated: Adult
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: PWP
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 940 - Hits: 3629
Complete?: Yes - Published: 09/12/2010 - Last Updated: 09/12/2010
Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed star star star star star
Date: 12/14/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Gah!

Hot!

HOT!

My computer is in flames...can't touch it.....

Love it! I was snickering water through my nose while reading until the end whereby I had melted into mush.

So jealous of Marie...I mean, you know...because of Logan...and his gifted manhood.

And the Queen certainly never sang out like that...hehe.

Thanks!
-Pepper

Author's Response: I am positively giddy that you enjoyed this and wholeheartedly over the moon that you took time to let me know. And, yeah, I have ALWAYS been jealous of Marie... --Wendie

Five days of torture, before her blood time. Scent so thick with musk that it made his judgment suspect, and his hands untrustworthy.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, PWP
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 9851 - Hits: 46959
Complete?: Yes - Published: 01/21/2011 - Last Updated: 02/14/2011
Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed
Date: 12/11/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Scent

Hell yeah, he better stay!

I love your description of Logan's raw, primal need...her scent.

You got him down -- from the way he avoids her to attempting an explanation -- to a fucking T!!

Love it! Off to read more.
-Pepper

Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed
Date: 12/11/2011 Title: Chapter 2: Hearing

"Tell me how"....indeed.

I do see the potential squick...but come on...Marie and Logan...in a sense they are fucked up so that they follow a code unto themselves.

The tension...the emotion...it packs a sensually hot punch!

Clicking that next button NOW!

Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed
Date: 12/12/2011 Title: Chapter 3: Taste

You're killing me woman!

In other words, I like it. Sex without touching has never been that HOT!!!

Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed
Date: 12/12/2011 Title: Chapter 4: Sight

Kitty & Jubes' takes were awesome.

And the hotness continues. This is totally epic! Saying I love it would not do it justice.

Ever been to Cold Stone Creamery? The sizes there are "Like it," "Love it," and "Gotta have it." Well, the sentiment behind "Gotta have it" reflects my thoughts.

Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed
Date: 12/12/2011 Title: Chapter 5: Touch

I am mush....a pile of mush...Instincts in their purest form calling out to each other...This is genius...Makes me wish I had a man...

Basically, I can't string something constructive together right now because I'm too emotionally overwhelmed (in a good way).

Definitely enjoyed this and it has gone into my favs so that I can read again and again.

Thanks,
-Pepper

Rogue could almost taste his presence. Feel his hands as he guided her through the postures, see the bead of sweat making its way down the planes of his back as he turned away from her. She had to blink to chase away the fantasy: he wasn’t here yet. He might not want to come with them. With her. She had left him for dead, after all.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 30
Wordcount: 81308 - Hits: 275509
Complete?: Yes - Published: 02/23/2011 - Last Updated: 07/01/2013
Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed
Date: 02/26/2011 Title: Chapter 2: In the Zone

This certainly deserves to be finished. I love the way you've weaved back and forth. The description is both simple and rich at the same time which makes me feel like I'm in the moment and every one of Rogue's feelings are palpable.

I'm tense waiting to find out what happened between them. When I read the last line of this chapter, I literally banged my fist on the table saying, "More, damnit. Give me MORE!!!"

I believe that pretty much sums up my feelings towards this story. I'll be lurking around until the next update. ;)

Thanks,
Pepper

Author's Response: I\'m so glad you\'re enjoying it. I\'m going to try and post the next chapter on Friday or Saturday of this week (Australian time). All I have to do is write it ;)

Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed
Date: 02/27/2011 Title: Chapter 3: So fucking bad

I really like this portrayal of Logan. He seems so...twisted. Is it disturbing that I like his crudeness? Or maybe the way Rogue reacts to him?

I can't find the exact words to describe how I feel about this story, but I know I'm addicted to the intensity. So many things are pulling me in....wow...

Thanks!
-Pepper

Author's Response: *nods happily* I must confess I do have a love of the dark side. It\'s why I love Wolverine above all - he is not simple or straightforward, he has depths few other characters have. And in this story, we are exploring a Logan who WASN\'T rescued by the Xmen, or a sweet, innocent girl. He hasn\'t had that in his life. So, yes, he is dark. But he is on a journey, too. Thank you for reviewing ... it makes it all worthwhile when people connect with a story. Especially a piece like THIS.

Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed
Date: 03/05/2011 Title: Chapter 4: Demons

Oooh...I'm looking forward to what comes next. ;)

I love how they've both teamed up and duped the professor.

And how dark does Logan make Rogue--that is chilling and disturbing.

Their twisted dynamic has gotten me squirming in my seat. I'm going to go with my earlier comment of "More, damn it. Give me MORE!"

I'm hungry for what's next. Feed the beast! :)

Thanks,
Pepper

Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed
Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 12: Mixed messages

So sorry I haven't been reviewing lately. (Work, life, take your pick...)

This is just fucking awesome!!!!!! I have to read and reread each chapter as I drink in your wonderful use of words. (I just spent another night reading it from the beginning)

It's not just the way Logan and Marie interact, it's also the way they appear to others. Scott, Jean, and the Professor subtly offer insight into what the Wolverine and Rogue are all about.

Every time I'm done reading a chapter, I am left in whimpers. Not only from the feelings evoked by their tormented psyches, but also the fact that this hot story is keeping me on my toes!!!

I will have to get better about reviewing (but I always read during work where I don't sign in so that I can keep my obsession a secret ;)

Thanks,
-Pepper

Author's Response: It\'s OK, Pepper. One review like that every few chapters will keep me very happy indeed! I am really enjoying the time and space to explore all those different facets; quite obviously, the conflict between appearance and reality is something that intrigues me (especially with these characters), and I\'ve always liked looking at these two from the perspective of others. The next chapter might be a bit late but I\'ll do my best to find some extra whimper factor :D

Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed
Date: 06/27/2011 Title: Chapter 14: Unpredictable

GAH!!!

My mind has just been blown away....waiting for it to come back.....

Pepper

Just who came back from Canada...?

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X3, X-Men Origins Wolverine
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 4279 - Hits: 16804
Complete?: No - Published: 06/13/2011 - Last Updated: 07/13/2011
Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed
Date: 07/15/2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I can't think straight. I've been reduced to a pile of mush. This is hot and intense with a lovely combo of an alpha male.

I'm going to try and recover my brain function now.

Thanks,
Pepper

Sometimes love is the unrequited kind. Rogue is growing up. Logan is in love with Jean. And nothing is simple.

Rated: Adult
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 15101 - Hits: 29134
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/01/2011 - Last Updated: 08/02/2011
Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed
Date: 07/31/2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This is why I don't do angsty stuff...*wipes a tear*

Not that it was your fault. I have to go with serafim and say I knew something like this would come based on the title and all your notes. And like a moth to a flame, I read it, read it again, and reread it some more.

Yes, although settling does seem tempting, I'm proud of Marie for taking things into her own hands and making a decision.

*wipes another tear*

Looking forward to the epilogue...

Thanks,
Pepper

Author's Response: I\'m not an angst reader either usually, so I tried to give people fair warning. I\'m so glad you\'re proud of Marie for her decision though - thank you! You shouldn\'t have to wait too long for the epilogue. Gonna try and post it tomorrow (in theory!)

Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed star star half star
Date: 08/02/2011 Title: Chapter 5: Epilogue

Let me start off by saying thank you for a speedy update of an epilogue.

Now onwards:

Tasteful...very tasteful indeed.

And that's quite literally because I could taste Rogue's feelings.

This was absolutely gut and heart wrenching. I definitely have to say that this was the type of thing you read, but stays on your mind long after you're done.

Note to self: don't read angsty fics...especially when filling out med school applications. (which by the way, filling out applications are a bitch...almost makes me wonder why I'm doing this)

But you've managed to draw me into your world and hook me onto Rogue.

Rogue's maturity makes me proud. Because in the end, (I'm going to still finish my application just as she gets over her feelings)...because it's not about proving it to the world, it's about proving it to yourself and knowing that you deserve better.

Although I'm disappointed in Jean and Logan, I'm glad that everyone was able to move on and heal.

Moving away from the angsty end, I'm happy that Rogue is away from the mansion, healing and growing into her own woman.

And in my honest opinion, I always believed Scott was too absorbed in Jean to be himself. I'm relieved that both he and Rogue are finally carving their identities.

Beyond that, it's like I said, this is the type of fic that stays on your mind long after you're done reading. I can't completely express my sentiments, but I'm feeling down in a good way. It's like watching Game of Thrones. Everyone knew Ned Stark was going to die, and you didn't want him to, but when he did, it ruined the rest of the week. I'm not saying you ruined my week, but this piece definitely hit all the right spots in making me feel in tune with all the characters. Plus, I am definitely pushed into a philosophical mode about the kinds of people we are.

Btw, the mankini definitely puts all sorts of images in my mind and gave me a good laugh after I was done reading.

Thanks,
Pepper

Author's Response: Thank you :o) I\'m very flattered that you said this was the kind of fic that stays on your mind long after reading. I kinda like the idea of that! Good luck with your med school apps.

Logan is having a very good morning. Or is he?

Rated: Adult
Categories: X1, AU, Comicverse
Characters: None
Genres: Foof, Holiday, Humor, PWP, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1194 - Hits: 4557
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/17/2011 - Last Updated: 08/17/2011
Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed
Date: 12/14/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

For real??? Seriously??

*keels over in laughter*

His dialogue had me snorting all through my drink.

And it was a magnet????hahaha

-Pepper

Roped into attending a conference in Alaska with the X-Geeks, Logan meets up with Marie under very different circumstances. They don't quite live up to each other's fantasies. But maybe that's a good thing.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Angst, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 51
Wordcount: 25812 - Hits: 424085
Complete?: No - Published: 11/07/2011 - Last Updated: 12/13/2011
Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed star star star star star
Date: 12/05/2011 Title: Chapter 45: The Wolverine

Ok, I am finally getting back to reading again!

I wanted to review each chapter, but I just got so caught up in the thick of everything that I couldn't stop hitting the NEXT button until it came to a skidding stop. I know this one review won't suffice, but I was just gripped by the feelings of both Logan & Marie.

I'm glad Jose got what he deserved especially after what he did to Marie and the countless other girls.

Another thing that really struck me is the fact that Wolverine is in her mind, protecting her and supporting her. It's like he's not just a dark beast locked and kept away, but he's doing what his mate needs.

Everything about this is painfully beautiful. I hope Marie gets to her mate soon.

Update please!

Thanks,
-Pepper

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and leaving such a thoughtful review! I\'m glad you\'re getting back into this site. There sure are a lot of great stories. I\'m really glad you\'ve enjoyed this one. Anyway, thanks again for the feedback, and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story :)

Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed
Date: 12/13/2011 Title: Chapter 51: The Afterlife

I'm sitting at work, bored as hell, when my phone blows up alerting me to updates.

I practically flew through these chapters devouring them like a thirsty person in a desert who finally finds water.

Awesome job! The connection between them is strengthening despite Logan being unconscious and Marie still reeling from the feral state.

I can't wait until Logan wakes up. Why do you always have to end at the good parts??? Arrggg!

Good luck with your final! I finished mine last week. *Evil laughs*

Thanks,
-Pepper

Author's Response: Glad to relieve your boredom, at least for a little while =). And congrats on your finals *grumble grumble*. Logan and Marie are definitely going to be growing closer. They still don\'t really know each other yet, even though they have this strong instinctual connection. It\'s kinda fun to write!

Now COMPLETE!: A black-market ring dealing in mutants, and Logan and Marie. AU. My usual promises -- good grammar, smut, angst, action, drama, and a happy ending.

Rated: Mature
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Angst, Drama, PWP, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 31
Wordcount: 56517 - Hits: 240189
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/25/2011 - Last Updated: 05/24/2012
Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed
Date: 12/04/2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Merchandise

Yay! Finally am getting around to reading fics again!

Love the premise and as for Marco and his bait shop...he's fucking evil!!!

Author's Response: Hooray! Welcome back! Glad you like the premise. I realize it could be a little squicky. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed
Date: 12/04/2011 Title: Chapter 2: The Questions

Jubes & Kitty? No! How?

Author's Response: Yup! :-D

Reviewer: pepper-maroon Signed star star star star star
Date: 12/04/2011 Title: Chapter 3: The Snag

Who the hell blew Logan's cover?

I literally cringed in pain from your gory, graphic description. My eye is twitching now.

Author's Response: Good question! Which I knew the answer. Sorry about the eye thing...thanks so much for reviewing!