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Reviews by Shuni
A very dark AU in which disturbing things happen. Be warned.

Rated: Mature
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Dark
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 17564 - Hits: 15114
Complete?: Yes - Published: 12/30/2006 - Last Updated: 12/30/2006
Reviewer: Shuni Signed
Date: 01/17/2011 Title: Chapter 3: In Our Times To Come

Read this with a whole lot of emotional music playing in the backround and you can guess what my mood is right now.
Really. Really. You write the most emotional stories I've ever read in the world of fan fiction. They get right to my soul ans that is something only a few stories or books are really able to. At least to this extend. I am soo... shaken. Really, I'm shaken. The first part with Rogue dying, it was so intense, the way they acted, the way Logan acted, you did a really awesome job there. Really Really great work.

The course of true love...it never did run smooth. Rogue's inner Marie is causing havoc... or was it the other way round?

Rated: R
Categories: X1, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Foof
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 7
Wordcount: 8293 - Hits: 45289
Complete?: Yes - Published: 01/09/2007 - Last Updated: 01/15/2007
Reviewer: Shuni Signed
Date: 01/03/2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

You are so funny :D Really great. Read a few of the other stories too, and I guess now I'm getting the "foof"-point (never understood what it ment, stupid me xD)
Well, whatever, really well done :D

Logan has battled Sabretooth, Mystique and Deathstryke and lived to tell about it. But now, he must face an even more formidable challenge: the L word.

Rated: G
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Foof, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2824 - Hits: 2574
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/24/2007 - Last Updated: 03/24/2007
Reviewer: Shuni Signed
Date: 01/30/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Say The Words

This is so cute. Cute like candy, cute like the cutest stuff I've ever read, cute like i could smile the whole evening. Just very, very cute. That made my day :-)

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I\'m glad you enjoyed it. :)

Rogan...nature-documentary style.

Rated: PG
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Foof
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1322 - Hits: 3503
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/30/2007 - Last Updated: 04/30/2007
Reviewer: Shuni Signed
Date: 01/02/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

:D :D Sooo funny :D

Jubilee and Kitty have ideas about Wolverine and Rogue... Nuf said.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Foof
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 18905 - Hits: 3029
Complete?: Yes - Published: 10/01/2007 - Last Updated: 10/01/2007
Reviewer: Shuni Signed
Date: 01/17/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, this was really out of character but so funny I had tears in my eyes. Good job ^^

One Rogue. Two timelines. Three personalities. Every possibility. Rogue discovers who she is, could have been, and everything she can become.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 13
Wordcount: 165764 - Hits: 92233
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/05/2007 - Last Updated: 11/05/2007
Reviewer: Shuni Signed star star star star star
Date: 02/02/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

The truth is, this story overwhelms me.
It is complex and it is full of emotion and so full of truth that I'm one more time very sad that my english is still so bad that I'm not able to grasp all the feeling your story contains.
This is a story to think about even if you've finished reading. And you earned my respect for creating a story that gives me that feeling and that isn't just something to read just to distract your mind from reality for a short while.

Well, so. Five stars definitely ^^

"It's all a little less cheap romance novel, a little more gut-wrenching tragedy." Sequel to 'Down By The Water' -- it's not absolutely necessary to read that one, but it would make various things less confusing.

Rated: Mature
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 10874 - Hits: 3272
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/17/2007 - Last Updated: 11/17/2007
Reviewer: Shuni Signed star star star star star
Date: 04/10/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"Add Story to Favorites"

What's there to do when you're stuck in an elevator?

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 2
Wordcount: 2127 - Hits: 7726
Complete?: Yes - Published: 12/15/2007 - Last Updated: 12/15/2007
Reviewer: Shuni Signed star star star star
Date: 01/09/2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

:D

Sometimes we get the balance wrong. Life is not about knowing the answers, life is what happens while you're looking for them. And the bad decisions? The screw-ups? They're what keep it interesting.


Rated: Adult
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Angst, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 31
Wordcount: 91223 - Hits: 315581
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/31/2008 - Last Updated: 10/11/2009
Reviewer: Shuni Signed
Date: 01/02/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow, this story was great! I would leave you a bigger comment but I've got to get up in about seven hours, so i just say things like they are: Really great story, great writing, loved it! I'm looking forward to read oyur other stuff.

But for now, I'm off to bed. Good night :D

Author's Response: Hi, sorry for the late response, but just wanted to say thanks! And I\'m glad you enjoyed reading it!

"...It's her eighteenth birthday and she's using her duffel bag as a pillow."
Special days in Rogue's life.

Rated: PG
Categories: AU, X1, X2, X3
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3420 - Hits: 4043
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/22/2009 - Last Updated: 03/22/2009
Reviewer: Shuni Signed
Date: 12/28/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like this :-)

Author's Response: I\'m glad. ;~D

"It wasn't about doing the right thing. He just couldn't bring himself to do anything else, with her." Logan stumbles upon Marie in a mutant experimentation lab.

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Rape/Non-Con

Series: None
Chapters: 8
Wordcount: 23377 - Hits: 72913
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/31/2010 - Last Updated: 04/24/2010
Reviewer: Shuni Signed
Date: 12/28/2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Well, this is...

Okay, first of all, this is really well written, really hard stuff regarding the things that happened to Rogue and Xavier did let happen to her.

I don't know how to say and how to describe my opinion of this story.

I cannot really cotton up with (I looked that term up on leo.org, do you know what I mean? xD) with the Logan you created, at least at the end. Didn't Logan have any doubts about the rightness of having sex with her? Isn't it... I don't know, it feels like he lured or maybe trained her to sleep with him? ... I don't know. It feels like it isn't her own decision.
How can he love her? Love her as a woman, for her mind, for her character, if they hardly hold/ and seem to not be able to hold a conversation? I cannot see a clear relation ship other than her totally relying on him and him feeling absolutely protective about her. Maybe the ending is to fast? In my opinion Marie should have developed a little bit more of an own character, learn how to cope with her past. If you don't want Marie to be tough or let her be a little bit more of an own person, than of course she can be dependent of him, but she really should be more vivid.

Okay. Now cut me into pieces xD

Seriously, I hope you are not upset with my review, that's how I feel about your story regardless of the fact that I enjoyed reading it just for your writing-skills. Honestly.

Author's Response: Ha. Everyone has their own opinion and I appreciate hearing yours. What many like can completely put off one person, and visa versa. Moviemom, a member here, once said (in that amazingly insightful way of hers) \"As much as he wanted her, it was never about sex, not really. It was about giving her back her womanhood, making her whole again--not letting what They did to her define her, or deprive her, forever.\" To me, this story was about Logan taking care of Marie. Beyond that I cannot and will not justify it, though I am always, always grateful to hear a reader\'s thoughts. Thank you.

retired featured story In which everything comes full circle. Part angst, part happiness, and a coin-toss decides the end.

Rated: R
Categories: X1, X2, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 6
Wordcount: 38572 - Hits: 35479
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/05/2010 - Last Updated: 07/10/2010
Reviewer: Shuni Signed
Date: 12/27/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story is more angsty than anything I've ever read. I am sooo depressed. And to be honest the ending hardly makes up to it, i still feel very depressed, maybe only with a very tiny spark of hope inside my aching heart..... xD

Well, where to start?
I am relatively new to Marie and Logan - Fan Fictions. I like the pairing, over all I like Wolverine in the movies (Hugh Jackman - I'd like to do sooo many nasty things with him :D)And the idea of him an Rogie is just very cute.
So, after I read some very good stories of an author called Becca (really, she's a goddess, her homepage is loganandmarie.com) I found myself looking for other good stories and then schwupps! (that's a german term, at the moment I#m lost for the right translation xD) I found this side and - by far more important - your stories!! They are VERY good, even if I find myself a little bit unsure about what to think of all the different ways to create a universe where Logan and Marie can be/ are together. It's all new to me. But after reading some of your work I'm opening up to all different kind of settings and plots and whatever. I definitely keep up to your work because they carry so much emotion and thats the most important thing of a story - at least if you ask me xD

Well, that's it. I did some babbling, I hope it's not that bad I did. And, as you probably know by now, I'm not a native speaker but come from good ol' germany, so I apologize for all the mistakes I made xD

So. Keep on working, you've got one more fan here waiting for updates, new stories and stuff. double thumps up! :D

Author's Response: Lmao!!!! I think this site is just a means to bring together all the people who would like to do nasty things to Hugh Jackman. Thank you so much, I\'m honored that you feel that way (about you discovering my writing, not making you depressed....okay, I\'m kinda proud of the depressed thing too. Making a reader feel any strong emotion, even hatred, is an accomplishment for a writer). I hope you have a great time exploring this fandom, there are many brilliant minds to be found...I\'d suggest you try Aranenumanesse, Jenn, and Terri. All goddesses.

"We love to learn we are not alone."-C.S. Lewis. The Wolverine meets, saves, and reluctantly befriends a girl while undercover.

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Rape/Non-Con

Series: None
Chapters: 21
Wordcount: 56200 - Hits: 166011
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/14/2010 - Last Updated: 02/09/2011
Reviewer: Shuni Signed
Date: 02/01/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeell.....

First of all, great chapter. Very emotional, both Logan and Marie.

But really, this story is not finished at all! You could write (probably you've allready done it) a fluffy epilogue, but I have to agree with one of the earlier reviewers, that wouldn't do justice to the rest of the story. There are so many thoughts that have to be thought by both of them, so much important stuff they have to talk about. I mean, Marie ran away from him because she was afraid of him. It cannot all be solved by him saving her. Nevertheless she was raped and nevertheless she was hardly able to cope with it untill now. She is so fragile and unsure of herself, she has to gain some strength and some self respect (especially when it comes to Jubes >.>)
They have to gain an emotional closeness that's not there yet because they hardly talked.
I wonder what the ending will look like and I cannot imagine how you are going to put all the development the characters (still) have to go trough into an epilogue, which doesn't mean that it might not be possible. I'm just wondering.

And at the end I hope everything I said made sense to you xD

My best wishes,
Shuni

Reviewer: Shuni Signed
Date: 01/05/2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Hola!!
I'm looking forward to reading this story in one piece. It's sad that after each chapter you have to stop so you don't get the chance to get the atmosphere and all.
I read very much until the last two parts in one piece and really, it was awesome, although the way they met and all is completely different than in the movies, which basically is all I know about the X-Men universe, altough recently I started watching X-Men Evolution on YOutube xD
Well. I'm going to read the whole story in one turn once you've posted all of it. And then I'm so going to get lost in your story that I won't be able to talk to anybody more than three or four sentences when I've finished, what always happens when I read a good story.

So, to sum it up and to stop babbling around, I like your story even though it's different from the movie and I hope you will post the remaining parts very soon so that I will get the luck and the joy to read it in one go.
I hope what I said made sense :D

Have a nice evening,
Shuni

Author's Response: There are many different types of stories (if you click on the \'Help\' button, there\'s a really great list of them). This is an AU--Alternate Universe, which means it is different in many ways from the movie, if that makes things any less confusing. :~) I\'m glad you\'ve enjoyed it so far, and I hope you continue to for the remaining chapters. Thank you!!!!!

Reviewer: Shuni Signed
Date: 01/06/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you, now I know one more of these short cuts :D

Well, I'm not at all confused about different settings because first of course I know that there's more than the movies (as I reconsidered my comment later yesterday evening i thought that it might would seem kind of ignorant. So, just to declare it at this point: I'm not. If it seems to be like it, blame the foreign language (muahah, perfect excuse :D)) and second I may be new to x-men ff but I read a loooot of hp ff's so I dare say there's really little I wouldn't expect to read here - some of which i like more and some of which i like less. But at least I know that I like yours :D

Author's Response: I\'m glad you do. :~D :~D :~D

Rogue's past comes back to haunt her...in the form of fashion. Naturally, Jubilee is there to um...help.

*Not part of a series - that's a glitch*

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X1, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Foof, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1630 - Hits: 3207
Complete?: Yes - Published: 10/14/2010 - Last Updated: 10/14/2010
Reviewer: Shuni Signed
Date: 01/05/2011 Title: Chapter 1: What a Difference Punctuation Makes

This is very, very funny and I love the ending! This is great! Well done *Thumbs up*

Author's Response: Hey, thanks!

Booze, half-naked Logan, growling, and indignation.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: AU, X1
Characters: None
Genres: Foof, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2037 - Hits: 4740
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/24/2010 - Last Updated: 11/24/2010
Reviewer: Shuni Signed
Date: 01/05/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

:D :D Really great!! "THE Eyebrow" Bwahahaha!!! A really funny little story just right for me before I go to bed, sweet dreams guaranteed *imagines Logans outfit... or rather the lack of it*

Author's Response: Ah yes, shouldn\'t something as fantastic & expressive get capital letters? He should insure The Eyebrow. Thanks for the review :)

Nobody likes to be the new kid. Marie is exactly that, and has a thorough distaste towards the situation, until she meets a very special guy. Marie's point of view.

“It’s often just enough to be with someone. I don't need to touch them. Not even talk. A feeling passes between you both. You're not alone.”
-Marilyn Monroe

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: Central
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2716 - Hits: 2423
Complete?: No - Published: 01/03/2011 - Last Updated: 01/03/2011
Reviewer: Shuni Signed
Date: 01/26/2012 Title: Chapter 1: September 3rd

I would look very forward to read more of this =)

"It is harder to love than to find someone to love."

...The path of the Xmen has become much darker in recent years. Rogue finds her way to the mansion one night and meets our favorite surly Canadian--but has she been there before? And what exactly do they want with her?

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 11
Wordcount: 26484 - Hits: 57873
Complete?: No - Published: 02/27/2011 - Last Updated: 02/09/2018
Reviewer: Shuni Signed
Date: 03/14/2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like this ^^

Author's Response: I\'m very glad you do. :~D