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for now, I'm just gonna write "great" till I come with something better.
Will be looking forward to read a new chapter.
Hi September.
Listen, this fic is great. There are so many awesome things about it; for starters, how you've portrayed Jean and Bobby, they're themselves; kind and so real to the actual deal. I like that very much. The way you've characterized them makes us - or me anyway, not hate them, but sympathize with them.
I also dig the "miserable" Marie. My favorite line is "Maybe it’s me. Maybe I was always untouchable. Maybe I was never meant to be touched." So good. It fits the while scenario.
I'm very hard to please when it comes to fics, but you've pleased me greatly with this one. Thumbs up.
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m so glad you\'re liking it so far.
Digging the whole dark, grim mansion/mission life. I dont know how I feel about Logan's note? But when Marie throws it away and takes it back to keep it.. reminds me of myself. Liked the chapter :)
I was gonna write "wow" cause I was speechless, but I've found my voice again.
So very poetically beautiful. Very well written - as always. I think we can all relate to Marie's dilemma here; staying with the man she loves, but no love in return? Or leaving the man she loves and being lonely, but assertive? What does she want, indeed!
Sometimes - no matter what - you just can't love whats good for you. Logan will always love Jean, even if it makes him miserable.
10/10
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m glad you found your voice again, because that was lovely feedback :o)
You've handled this so beautifully.
I'm not surprised either - about Jean and Logan. Its good. Or, as good as it can get. Marie can now move on for good, because there's no way he can return to her now. I like how you've portrayed these "couples" - we can't hate any of them, we can only sympathize. Even with Logan.
As for Scott.. Well, I'm glad Marie and Scott found together. They're equally heartbroken and lonely. They're so alike.
Deep sigh. What can I say? You've nailed it once more.
Author's Response: Thank you :o) I\'m so glad it came across ok!
Okay I read all the chapters last night, but promised I'd review today. So ummm... I really like this one :)
Author's Response: Haha I\'m glad! Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review. It definitely inspires me to get my butt in gear and write more quickly :P.
Your chapters are so short! But I guess they work well? So anyway, I totally feel Marie! Being afraid of getting exposed and being yourself with someone you like. Its the hardest, cause you dont wanna lose them, but you dont wanna lie to then either cause then it wouldnt be real :(
More please!!!!
Author's Response: Yes, the chapters are pretty short. For some reason it just worked out that way as I wrote it. But I try to post several chapters at a time to make up for that :). So glad you\'re enjoying the story, and thanks for reviewing!
I want Logan :-/
And updates
Author's Response: I want Logan too. But the updates, that I can give ya ;). Thanks for reading.
Omg this is SOOO awesome!!! You've gotta continue!! This is the first time I've come across things like this! And I Love it! Please continue!!! Pleaseeee I'm begging you!
*Adds to favorite*
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I will add the next pages later tonight.