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Marie focused on dulling the pull of her skin, dampening her body’s desire to consume anything it came in contact with. That was the thing she hated about her mutation. Take, take, take. It felt selfish. She wished she had a mutation that was more suited to helping than hurting. Like if she could give away her own life force with a touch, rather than just steal others’.

Post-X3. A little angst and a lot fluff. Nothing especially original or well-written here, to be honest, but hopefully a fun little read.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Foof, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 13
Wordcount: 10851 - Hits: 97047
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/04/2011 - Last Updated: 08/07/2011
Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star
Date: 08/05/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Thirsty

Wow, I loved that story! You killed me with the short chapters on my slooooow cell phone, but it was worth all the waiting. ;-) Such a great characterization of them both, very sexy, nice revelations all around (Marie's insecurity and fear of growing up, Logan's yearnings)...the list of great stuff is endless. I really love playful, ebullient Logan, it's something you so rarely see and so charming. Laughed out loud at "You're black and white and red all over!" But I agree with other reviewers. I think you are missing a lucky Chapter 13. Don't wanna waste a Mature rating, do ya? ;-)

Author's Response: Ha! Sorry, lame 3G, I feel ya. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review. After your suggestion and a couple of others, I went on and added that lucky chapter. Ended up being as long as the whole rest of the story, heh.

Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star
Date: 08/08/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Thirsty

Aw...I'm so glad I was obnoxious in pushing you to write Chapter 13. It was just awesome. I do have a very...er, vivid (i.e. "perverted") imagination, but I would not have been able to imagine such a wonderful scene that fit the characters you established so perfectly. It was sweet, and sexy, and unexpected, and as you say, so very real. A truly great ending to a great story.

Author's Response: Thanks :). You have no idea how many times during the course of this chapter I started to go off in a decidedly NC-17 direction . . . but then . . . thinking about the characters, and Logan knowing how inexperienced she is, I just didn\'t think he would let things go *quite* that far on their first night, y\'know? I wanted it to be good, but also realistic and a little awkward. And there\'s certainly room for a sequel now, AFTER Feral, lol.

Marie D'Ancanto is an assassin and her target is James Logan Howlett aka The Wolverine.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 10
Wordcount: 23804 - Hits: 55030
Complete?: Yes - Published: 09/08/2011 - Last Updated: 01/09/2012
Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star
Date: 09/08/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Assignment

Yay! A new story by Katya Jade! I like it a lot so far. You did a really good job portraying ragamuffin Rogue. ;-)

Favorite line:
Erik Lensherr had a flair for the dramatic and a definite knack for understatement.

I don't know why, it just sums him up perfectly.

Can't wait for The Meeting! :-D

Author's Response: Thank you! Coming from you that\'s a great compliment! I\'m so glad you liked it and thanks for the title of the next chapter. ;)

Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star
Date: 09/19/2011 Title: Chapter 2: Meeting

Yay! And is it disloyal to Rogue to be happy that Logan will be at least a little on his guard? And LOL at the QuickieMart.

Author's Response: I actually looked that one up! :D

Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star
Date: 09/19/2011 Title: Chapter 3: Dinner

Don't you just love it when a plan...I mean, chapter... comes together? Although Eek for poor Chuck getting decapitated before he even gets a line. ;-) I was kind of in favor of Logan's plan there at the end, but hopefully that will come later. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Well, I\'m more happy that people aren\'t wanting to burn me at the stake for beheading Charles. But, sometimes you just listen to what the muse tells you. :p Thanks!

Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 10/27/2011 Title: Chapter 4: Change of Plans

Sorry, I'm woefully behind on all my reviews, but trying to catch up story by story. This is very intriguing...keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate you \'catching up\' with me. :)

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Date: 10/27/2011 Title: Chapter 5: Road Trip

Jean working with Magneto? Interesting!

Author's Response: My little world is upside down. :p

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Date: 10/27/2011 Title: Chapter 6: Good Times, Worse Times

Doh! Go get your girl back, Logan!

Author's Response: You know it!

Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 12/04/2011 Title: Chapter 7: Old Friends

Hooray! Rescue is on its way. I always like when Logan and Remy are friends, for some reason. And interesting to see Victor's reaction, I wonder which side he's going to come down on in the end. Keep writing...as long as it's still fun for you!

Author's Response: The block\'s aren\'t fun but when I can get past them, it\'s great. I do love Logan and Remy as buddies - I\'ve always had a soft spot for the Cajun (I\'ve got a Jubilee/Remy piece at ff.net). I\'ve got lots of ideas now, I only need to get them crafted the right way. Thank you (as always) for your reviews. :)

AU story. X-men Evolution with a little X-men the movie mixed in.
Professor X makes a personal request of Logan while he's away from the school, to find and bring home a former stundent of his by the name of Rogue. However, Rogue isn't alone when Logan finds her and he gets more than he bargains for.

Rated: R
Categories: AU, X-Men Evolution, X1
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 10
Wordcount: 19131 - Hits: 61462
Complete?: No - Published: 09/16/2011 - Last Updated: 05/27/2012
Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 09/19/2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm really liking this! Looking forward to seeing where you take it.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I\'m so glad to hear that you are enjoying the story so far.

Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 10/24/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm with it! Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I\'m trying to work through some ideas, but I hope to have the next chapter out soon.

Marie is at a lab. Logan ends up there too. What will happen when their world collide?

A series of 100 short scenes that tell their story. Back to Back POV.

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Dark, Drabble, Humor, Shipper, Vignette
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 27
Wordcount: 9270 - Hits: 148483
Complete?: No - Published: 09/20/2011 - Last Updated: 10/21/2015
Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star
Date: 09/20/2011 Title: Chapter 17: Obsession

So sorry you lost all your reviews! I am really liking this -- the chemistry is awesome, and I love half-mad Rogue. Please keep updating!

Author's Response: *shrugs*Eh, it\'s not a big deal anymore. I\'m over it. *grin* Besides, I\'m getting lots of loveys from everyone now, but I do suppose that things are getting more interesting. I\'m trying to keep them both in the specific backgrounds that I\'ve created for them, and have them act accordingly. I wanted to set the president early on, Logan does what he wants, when he wants, who he wants, and how he wants and doesn\'t take any shit from anyone about it. Marie is completely adaptable and saner than everyone believes, but it\'s by choice that she lives inside her head most of the time.\r\n\r\nThanks for taking the time to review, I\'m so glad to be back in the fandom!

Marie gets sick of life at the mansion and decides to go on her trip to Alaska. Logan tags along.

Rated: Adult
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 10608 - Hits: 23365
Complete?: No - Published: 10/05/2011 - Last Updated: 11/14/2011
Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star
Date: 10/05/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter the First

A truly great start...I am so interested to see where you go with these characters on their journey. I really like stories where you can't exactly figure out what Logan's thinking...it really makes you feel for Rogue and how she feels.

Author's Response: Thanks for your confidence. And review =) I want to really work on how Rogue feels so I don\'t want to be distracted by Logan =P

Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star
Date: 10/14/2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter the Second

I really like how you describe Marie's mind/walls. It's such a common theme in fics, but you still made it seem fresh.

I also like the little Logan/Rogue moments! Keep it coming!

Author's Response: Thank you. I\'ll try.

Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star
Date: 10/30/2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter the Third

I really like how you're developing the relationship between them. Again, the way you're only using Marie's point of view, so that Logan's motives and emotions seem mysterious -- it's very intriguing. You do the angst really well, but this bit of foof has to be my favorite line:

“It’s not like we’re shopping for pink frilly things and rainbows,” Logan protested. “Camping gear, that’s manly shopping.”

Author's Response: I giggled a little when I wrote it.

Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 11/08/2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter the Fourth

I'm really liking this! This was particularly neat.

I needed to check on the walls before sleep. I remember thinking “barbaric” a few times during the fights so there was a possibility Erik had made a new crack somewhere.

Author's Response: Thanks!

What happens when Logan is asleep, but Wolverine isn't? Just a little vignette that popped into my head. Envisioned as post-X3, but could be AU as well. Logan/Marie est. relationship. Pure PWP.

Rated: Adult
Categories: X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, PWP, Vignette
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 881 - Hits: 5088
Complete?: Yes - Published: 10/24/2011 - Last Updated: 10/24/2011
Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star
Date: 10/24/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aw...sexy Wolverine, angsty Logan, this story has it all! Yum.

Author's Response: Sexy Wolvie and angsty Logan--it\'s true, what more could you possibly need? Hehe.

Typical how they met story. Typical for Wolverine and Rogue anyway. The rating is pretty much a precaution at this point.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: None
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read, Not Spellchecked

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 7751 - Hits: 31278
Complete?: No - Published: 10/28/2011 - Last Updated: 06/01/2012
Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 10/31/2011 Title: Don't Walk Away

Typing on your phone -- that is true dedication! You deserve a review just for that. I'm interested to see where you go from here. Flex those fingers and keep typing! :-D

Roped into attending a conference in Alaska with the X-Geeks, Logan meets up with Marie under very different circumstances. They don't quite live up to each other's fantasies. But maybe that's a good thing.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Angst, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 51
Wordcount: 25812 - Hits: 424682
Complete?: No - Published: 11/07/2011 - Last Updated: 12/13/2011
Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star
Date: 11/07/2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Convention

Yay!!!! Not only is a new story so exciting, but so many chapters. Now hurry, hurry! Keep posting!

Author's Response: Hehe, well, they\'re pretty short chapters. Not sure why that always happens--my chapters are either a few hundred words, or 4000+. Weird.

Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star
Date: 11/10/2011 Title: Chapter 16: The Names

So...please? More? Like, now-ish? I swear, the last thing I do before I go to bed at night is refresh the site to see if you've posted, and it's the first thing I do in the morning. I really want to read the rest of this!

There are lots of great lines, but this is one was my favorite:

Logan would’ve whapped the idiot in the back of the head if he didn’t fear knocking his glasses off.

And I loved this too:

A soft growl came up in his throat before he could stop it. Oh. Oh hell.

Usually a whipped-puppy Marie would bother me a little, but this Marie is so pitch-perfect she's really sympathetic -- not at all maudlin or melodramatic. I'm not sure how you did it, but it's great to read.

Author's Response: LOL, Doc. Sorry to keep you waiting ;). Had a minor crisis at work which seriously cut into my fanfic time--no fairs! Stupid life. Anyways, I\'m really glad you\'ve enjoyed this story so far. And yeah, I felt kind of uncomfortable writing her character that way too, but as a product of her circumstances, it seemed more likely to me that she would become meek and skittish as a coping mechanism, rather than hardened and mean. But I think she\'ll come around some once she gets out of her terrible situation!

Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 11/12/2011 Title: Chapter 17: The Angel

Yay! You're back! Now I'm going to be refreshing all day waiting for updates. :-) I'm glad they're talking about it. And poor Marie...I'm so glad Logan had good timing. Favorite lines:

I was afraid, he thought.

“I was an asshole,” he said.

And, sorry, but I can't help laughing at this...:

Marie,” Logan repeated, inhaling deeply, every exhale carrying a hint of a growl. He needed to stop that, or she was going to realize something was wrong with him.

...thinking that poor Marie probably thinks he's asthmatic or something. ;-)

Author's Response: LOL yep. This was what I meant when I said a \'different\' characterization of Logan. Poor guy\'s kind of embarrassed of his animal side. Not to worry; I\'m sure Marie will disabuse him of that notion in no time.

Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star
Date: 11/16/2011 Title: Chapter 22: The Change of Rules

You are doing such a great job with this story...I like seeing Marie get a little bit of spark back, and it's cute how she can only do it because she thinks Logan is drunk. I like how she's taking charge, and poor Logan's fraying restraint is very sexy.

I really like how you're handling Logan's shame regarding his animal side. It's not overdone at all, just a natural assumption on his part that if she knows it'll change how she feels about him. And the little comments that hint at his damage, like this:
" Shit this good doesn’t happen to me."

I love me some damaged Logan. ;-) Now get writing, darlin'!

Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star
Date: 11/20/2011 Title: Chapter 26: The Compliment

Awwww...I literally went "squee!" when I saw you had updated this. This story has hooked me in like crazy...I think your little chapters have some crack-like addictive properties. I really liked Marie taking control -- and Logan's restraint was very hot. It was all the more sad to see her go back to her whipped-puppy persona. I hope Logan can help her get past that. I really want to know what the morning brings, and how she reacts to his "secrets." So...get writing! Pretty please?

Author's Response: LOL crackfic huh? I like it! Yes, there is a reason for that abrupt shift back to the whipped-puppy persona. Logan is definitely going to work on helping her get past that. And he\'s not the only one with \"secrets\" :)

Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 11/21/2011 Title: Chapter 26: The Compliment

This was a really good touch too:

“You’ve got the most beautiful skin, baby. Like porcelain. I love it.”

Marie looked away, her arms still folded over her stomach. “Thanks. Thanks for sayin’ that.“ Her voice grew a little thick. “That’s really nice.”

I had pretty much forgotten about Marie's mutation. I am dying to see what happens when they both "come clean" about their mutations.

Author's Response: Well, circumstances are going to lead them to discover each other\'s mutations in a pretty unusual way. And I\'m glad you liked Logan\'s compliment. It just seemed like a perfect moment to me too, with him not realizing just how much that would mean to her :)

Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star
Date: 11/21/2011 Title: Chapter 28: The Bright Spot

I'd love to leave a review, but I'm too busy frantically refreshing, hoping to see the next chapter up... ;-)

Aw, Marie's thoughts are so sweet. And very clever idea, having Marie have absorbed a stripper's memories. I was kind of wondering how she was so "expert" with the dancing and...other things. ;-)

Author's Response: LOL I\'m so sorry I left ya hanging! Things have been crazy busy erghh. Thank God for the holiday weekend. Hopefully I can get the rest of this story churned out and run the next chapter of Feral by you! Yeah, you didn\'t think I\'d have a reason for suddenly turning Marie into a confident sex goddess? Silly, silly ;)