Oh, please add to this story! Talk about evil cliffhangers!

Author's Response: There is more to this story - its part of a series....you can find the next story at this link: http://wolverineandrogue.com/wrfa/viewstory.php?sid=96

This is a GREAT story! I read it through TWICE without stopping! I would love to see you continue into the future--maybe even see both groups have to work together because some student got kidnapped and Storm's group couldn't get her back--maybe a friend of Rogue's son or daughter?

Author's Response: Been thinking of something along those lines. Something that would tie everything together and bring Storm - who showed more understanding then anyone else - and Rogue\'s team back together. Thanks for a great suggestion! I\'m so glad you enjoy my work.

WOW! You are a terrific writer! I love the fact that you have a great vocabulary and you aren't afraid to use it! And you aren't afraid to take on difficult topics as you've proven in this story! I would LOVE to see you carry this forward! Could you make work?

However, you have a large number of mistakes in this story and others; this makes me think that your work may not be beta'd. Why not? You have a large body or work. You are a published author. Surely your publisher wants THAT work corrected--why not fix the work on this site? You are a WONDERFUL writer! Why let anything detract from ANY of your work?

Author's Response: Thank you Path for your response. \r\n\r\nTruthfully, most of the work that has been posted here was for fun, and some has been done while on a break from my other writing. I\'d love to get it beta\'d...I have been planning on going back and editing, polishing my work on here. I love this fandom and enjoy writing for it. Again, thanks so much for your comments. I appreciate them greatly!

Great story, as I am becoming used to -- from you. Your dialog is wonderful! I see very few writers that do as well. If you take constructive criticism, I found a few small errors: “No buts,” Logan growled. “Just do it Peter. Trust me you don’t want this on your conscious." According to Merriam- Webster's Dictionary, the word you want, the way you used it, is "conscience"--that small, still voice inside each one of us that tells when we are doing something wrong. Also. I have noticed that you do the its/it's mistake that tons of people who got through middle school and high school without a grammar teacher make; "it's" equals "it is" the apostrophe shows that it's a contraction. "Its" has no no apostrophe, which means that something belongs to it: The vine covered wall was covering a secret; a man hid in its shadow. Terrific story!