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Member Since: 07/12/2010
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Come Back by Marie [Reviews - 2]
Logan and Marie get married. Life is wonderful. But Logan has an accident and is believed to be dead. Written for the WRFA Annibirthary Challenge.

Rated: PG
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 8705 - Hits: 3291
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/13/2008 - Last Updated: 04/13/2008
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Reviewer: CartoonRogue10 Signed
Date: 07/14/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Come Back

Well, I guess it's just a little too sugary sweet for me. It's not bad, but there are some things that just seemed improbable, like Scott's reaction to the relationship. There were also some elements that I thought could have been explored more thoroughly, like Logan's reaction to waking up without a memory and with the claws in a slightly more peaceful setting, and some of the interaction just felt stilted. Plus, there's still no way to know at two weeks that someone is pregnant. Symptoms like nausea don't even start to develop until four or so weeks. I just didn't find it very believable.

Everything Unsaid by justanji star star star half star [Reviews - 6]
Events take place in the future predicted by Xavier in Wolverine and the X-Men.

Everything had gone wrong.
Everything; after that fateful day when the Professor and Jean Grey had disappeared, nothing ever felt right again.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: Wolverine & the X-Men
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Vignette
Tags: None
Warnings: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3898 - Hits: 2321
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/14/2010 - Last Updated: 07/14/2010
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Reviewer: CartoonRogue10 Signed
Date: 07/15/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Everything Unsaid

I like the concept, but I kept getting confused a lot. I think it was due to a vague transition from present to past as well as a somewhat jumbled action scene. I just found it very hard to get through. Maybe you should consider a beta reader. That might help with some of the coherency issues.

Author's Response: Thanks for the input, I actually had it read twice before uploading it, but I guess my reader must have missed it. I tried to make the past in italics.. but I wonder if they didn\'t show up in the updated file. Thanks for reading and thanks for your input!

The Girl by RoseSumner star star star star star [Reviews - 414]
"We love to learn we are not alone."-C.S. Lewis. The Wolverine meets, saves, and reluctantly befriends a girl while undercover.

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Rape/Non-Con

Series: None
Chapters: 21
Wordcount: 56200 - Hits: 167599
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/14/2010 - Last Updated: 02/09/2011
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Reviewer: CartoonRogue10 Signed
Date: 07/14/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Huh. I'm intrigued.

Author's Response: Thank you!!!!

More Than Friends by Ally star star star star half star [Reviews - 10]
Would two people who are just friends act like this? Sequel to "Bitter Disappointments."

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 6
Wordcount: 7273 - Hits: 28082
Complete?: No - Published: 07/30/2010 - Last Updated: 05/29/2013
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Reviewer: CartoonRogue10 Signed
Date: 07/30/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aw, Logan's being all protective! Still, it seems like they're just friends so far.

Reviewer: CartoonRogue10 Signed
Date: 07/30/2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ha! I love Snarky!Rogue!

Reviewer: CartoonRogue10 Signed
Date: 07/30/2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hot in a slightly frightening way! Take more breaks to write!