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Hi, just finished reading this awesome story! You took a great deal of time to think through the little details and how certain things might work. I really like this - that's quite rare.
Great that you included Rose into Logan's flashback (I think it's Rose, isn't it?). Will Marie be able to give Logan his Past back - telling him about it? Will you include Victor as Logan's half-brother?
Hope you'll update soon! Can't wait for more
I re-read the whole story and I'm so into it now... I hope you'll update soon. I also love your story 'Last chance' and hope to read more soon.
I love this story and hope you'll updae soon!
Great another update! I wonder if in her vision, Marie is pregnant and whom Logan tries to save - their baby or Marie... Please update soon!
lol that might have traumatized the little girl even more.
Please update soon!
Great update! I like the idea of Rogue and the little girl bonding - at first I didn't like the girl at first, but now I do.
Please update soon!
Yeay, more chapters! I didn't see that one coming that Rachel is suddenly on their side - Todd was obvious.
Please update soon (both stories please)!
A cliffhanger! How mean of you! Please update soon!
lol, when I read the "After he achieves climax, he d) pats you on the head and says, “Good job, kid.”’”" I couldn't hold in my laughter! Was this indeed the answer in the real Cosmo quiz?!?!?!
Uhu, lil' Jacie thinks Rogue's pregnant... the gossip will go up to a new level...
Love this story! Hope you'll update soon!
I found this update and I was so happy to read more about this awesome story! Now please don't let us hanging here, I love the idea of the plot and I wanna know Logan's respont to Jacie's question.
Oh, please update this story soon!
This story is great! I can't wait how Marie will apeace the beast, she had hurt.
Please update soon!
Nicely written. I like that they finally get that they rushed things at first.
Hope you'll update soon!
Just found this story and its prequel. I first thought this turns into a only sex fic, but then you began to introduce the pasts of the characters and their traumatas and emotions and that gave the story a twist and somehow plot.
I wonder how old Marie is. You mentioned Logan lost his memory 12 years ago, so Marie should be 14.
I like that Logan wants her to built up her self esteem and noticed how careful he has to be with what he does or says, since she does exactly what he wants (I saw that with the cold shower coming).
He wants to rule every aspect of her, what makes this all rather dark, but still he wants that she is fine (even looking out for her wight). I just wonder that he doesn't seem to care about protecting her from himself - they had a lot of sex and never used a condom. And considering her condition he had picked her up and that she was a virgin (in Anything Marie said 'please don't come in me'), I don't think she was taking the pill.
I wonder how both of them would react if their doings would have consequences. What would a pregnancy do to their slowly building trust and affection?
Please update soon
Author's Response: Desy - Thanks so much for the review. I didn\'t start to write a fic with as much sex in it as this one has in it but I did want to write a story that the sex continued along with the plot. I hope I am achieving that.\r\nIn Kristine\'s notes for \'Anything\' she calls Marie 16ish. I have conitnued with that idea. Although I am going to pick at that a little bit in future chapters. I hadn\'t ever invisioned Marie being 14. I am not sure what Logan\'s memory has to do with Marie\'s age (although if you know of a reason they should be linked, please let me know!)\r\nThere are certainly consequences coming for both Marie and Logan. I would agree with you that she is concerned about pregnancy based on the line from \'Anything\'. Both she and Logan have made assumptions about things like pregnancy but have yet to voice those assumptions. Don\'t worry both the assumptions and consequences are coming.
Great chapter! I Love it!
Concerning your question to my last review: In X1 Marie was 17 and Logan had lost his memories 15 years ago, making her 2 years old when that happened. When you said Logan lost his memories 12 years ago in your story, I just added those 2 years to get Marie's age.
Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens when they leave (when he gives her clothes and if she wants to clean his 'cozy' camper and how they fall into a daily routine...)
LOL great where Logan everyweher searched for the baby: in the dresser drawers... lol
And poor Scott, Jean won't be happy to hear of his blackmailing...
Please update soon! This story is so damn funny!
So she's already teething. Does that mean she grows faster than normal kids and Logan will soon have a defiant toddler to take care of?
Poor Scott! I mean, Marie can always turn into her metal-form (just making the car even heavier and saving her) or snatch Logan's healing when he touches her after the impact.
Please update soon!
Love this story! Though I'm a big Logan/Marie shipper, I also like the idea of Victor/Marie (since the origin-movie, that is, Liev Schreiber rules!).
Marie having sex with Victor would be kinda fair, since Logan took that Marie-substitute... and she chooses the other feral/Logan's brother...
The new twist would be interesting: On the one hand Marie could bring the brothers back together (maybe Vic would finally tell Jimmy bout his past), or the two ferals might have a new reason to drift further apart
Anyway, hope you'll update soon!
Author's Response: I LOVE LIEV SCHREIBER AS VICTOR. That\'s who I decided to base the looks of victor off of if anyone didn\'t catch that. I dunno where exactly Im going to leave Marie with though... not entirely sure how I\'m going to pull it off, but I will think of something. As for Vic and Logan... I dunno how I\'m going to leave them either. I should be updating tonight though... once I have actually written the next chapter. haha
I like how you describe the similarities between the brothers and what a huge impact Logan had on Marie's picture of the 'ideal' man...
Hope you'll update soon! Can't wait for Marie&Victor
That's so mean to leave it there!
Like it that Victor is gentle and doesn't simply take what he wants.
Please update soon!
I liked it and I somehow hope that they'll stay together.
Please update soon! Wanna know the morning after
Hehe, now that she's gone Logan realized what he had...
I hope he'll search for her soon, but on the other hand I don't want him to find her too soon - she needs a little more alone-time with Victor ;-)
I hope the next chappie will show us a little more about Victor and Marie (love that pairing, too)
Can't wait for the next update of this great story!
I love this chapter! And I'm glad Marie didn't run again. I just wonder why her mental Logan is silent.
I'm so looking forward to your next chapter and I hope it will be about Marie and Victor getting to know each other better (I don't mean the physical way)
I kinda think it's getting a bit much different storylines, but on the other hand there could be much more twists in the plot.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to more Victor and Marie. I love the way you write Victor and I wonder how they will react with the other one around 24/7. Will Marie figure out that Victor is Logan's brother?