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I grew up hating the X-Men because my older brothers loved them. Then I saw the first movie, and well... Now i read the comics, watch the movies (and the cartoons), write the fanfic... Am thinking of writing my PhD on X-Men... Yeah, I'm a nerd. But I'm proud of it... Bub...Hobbits away, ho!
 
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Now COMPLETE!

Yes, another AU. :-D Logan is on a mission to contact a powerful mutant and convince her to join the X-Men. Things go awry, of course. ;-) Here's an excerpt: “You’ve been shot before,” she said, and he could practically see her mind piecing it together. “And you don’t want to go to the authorities.” He saw that icy calmness creep back into her demeanor as her scent changed sharply. She was no longer afraid for him, now she was afraid of him. “Who do you work for? Did he send you to find me?”

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Angst, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 13
Wordcount: 34127 - Hits: 90149
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/27/2011 - Last Updated: 05/07/2011
Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed
Date: 03/27/2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Contact

hey, good start. really look forward to reading more... hobbits away, hey!

Author's Response: Glad you\'re liking it! Thanks for reviewing!

Before she could reach that fight bar in Canada, Rogue was taken in and raised by Mystique. Years later, she and Wolverine meet for the first time as fellow X-Men. Fate draws them together after a very unusual attack leaves Wolverine in a unique position to help. AU with movie/comicverse elements.

Rated: Adult
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Animal Death, Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 20
Wordcount: 68600 - Hits: 159983
Complete?: No - Published: 07/01/2011 - Last Updated: 10/23/2011
Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed
Date: 11/15/2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

hey, i'd been meaning to read this for aaaages and now that i have i must say i'm really enjoying it. the stuff with the emergence of feral rogue earlier was handled really well (not easy that, the giggle factor on that sort of writing is a smile wide but you ably avoided it). i just hope that there's more of this on the way; thanks for a very interesting read. hobbits away, hey! PS did you ever find yourself a beta?

Sometimes love is the unrequited kind. Rogue is growing up. Logan is in love with Jean. And nothing is simple.

Rated: Adult
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 15101 - Hits: 29378
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/01/2011 - Last Updated: 08/02/2011
Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed
Date: 08/02/2011 Title: Chapter 5: Epilogue

i loved this. it depressed the hell out of me, but i loved it. beautifully written, well done.

Now COMPLETE! Logan goes undercover to investigate Sebastian Shaw after Jean disappears. He finds Rogue there, but what is her connection to Shaw, and can the two of them form an unlikely alliance? Of course they can, it's me! Pure Rogan, don't worry, Jean is just a plot device. ;-)

My usual, which means AU, with drama, action, angst, hot Rogan sex, and a happy ending. And I promise never to leave a story unfinished.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Animal Death

Series: None
Chapters: 22
Wordcount: 49458 - Hits: 157004
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/29/2011 - Last Updated: 11/14/2011
Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed
Date: 08/17/2011 Title: Chapter 6: The Touch

hey, i'm really enjoying this; like the idea of slowly piecing her mutation and its effects together, looking forward to more interactions with shaw. have at it, woman! :-P

Author's Response: I\'m so glad you\'re enjoying this! This is the first story I\'ve written where Rogue doesn\'t already know all about her mutation, it\'s quite challenging to have her figuring it out! Thanks so much for your review.

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed
Date: 08/20/2011 Title: Chapter 7: The Call

Bravo, as always you have me coming back for more... can't wait to read the next...

Author's Response: So glad you\'re liking it! Thanks so much for reviewing. :-D

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed
Date: 07/30/2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Deal

hey, consider me in. just interested in the stakes here... loved shaw in x-men first class BYW, can't wait to see what you do to him... hobbits away, hey!

Author's Response: Yay! Glad you\'re on board. Yeah, Shaw is a good villain, isn\'t he? Plus I\'m too lazy to make up my own villains, and I\'ve already run through both Stryker and Magneto...

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed
Date: 08/09/2011 Title: Chapter 4: The Meeting

very, very interesting. more please!

Author's Response: So glad you\'re liking it! More coming up. :-)

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed
Date: 08/28/2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Game

i'm loving this story, and i so want to read the next installment. enjoying the tension, the humour and the characterisations (spot on with azazel and emma, BTW) more, i want more!

Author's Response: I\'m so glad you\'re liking it! Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed
Date: 09/13/2011 Title: Chapter 11: The Cage

as always exciting. know what you mean about reviews being thin on the ground, so here's yours: Bravo!

Author's Response: So glad you liked it! And now I am embarrassed, because I owe you a bunch of reviews for \"Stray.\" I wasn\'t sure that you actually checked them...it sounds stupid when I say it, but I reviewed every chapter of some of your other stories and you never responded or anything so I thought maybe you didn\'t check. I\'ll get right on it!

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed
Date: 09/16/2011 Title: Chapter 12: The File

i like the way you keep moving with this; every time i think "you know, i wonder what's happening with "the rogue," another chapter turns up, which is delightful. liked this, liked the introduction of the x-men and marie's worry about this new side to logan. great fun to read, as well as the back story. oh, and i took your advice and replied to my my reviews: normally i only reply to the ones i get when i'm writing the fic (you get a shout-out at the start of each new chapter) but you're right, it was kind of rude to not reply to them all. and don't worry about your last chapter's note: EVERYONE likes getting reviews. ain't no shame in that girl, as the lovely logan would say... update soon and hobbits away, hey!

Author's Response: Thanks! I got a little hung up on the smut chapter, but now things seem to be rolling along. I\'m glad you liked the introduction to the X-Men. And sorry if my comment about not responding to reviews sounded odd, I know it took me forever to set up alerts and I still sometimes miss it when people respond with new reviews to my complete stories. I\'ll definitely go back and start reviewing \"Stray\" from the beginning -- a great reason to re-read. I am worse about reviewing when I\'m writing my own story because I usually use precious laptop time to write my own stuff and read other stuff on my phone on the train, but I promise I\'ll get to it!

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed
Date: 09/18/2011 Title: Chapter 13: The Wall

you know, there's a reason we all like logan so much... probably my favourite chapter so far, i always love when marie gets to show her mettle and logan his soft side. really enjoyed it, cheers.

Author's Response: Thanks! I also have a thing for Strong!Marie and Tender!Logan so hopefully things will continue to progress in that direction.

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed
Date: 10/02/2011 Title: Chapter 15: The Contingency

i'm really enjoying this: rogue facing her demons (literally) and kicking some ass. also really looking forward to logan's "i don't know whether to kiss you or deck you," reaction when she wakes up... have at it woman! hobbits away, hey!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I\'m so glad you\'re liking it.

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed
Date: 10/07/2011 Title: Chapter 16: The Confrontation

enjoyable as always, looking forward to the next. cheers! hobbits away, hey!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed
Date: 10/16/2011 Title: Chapter 18: The Mark

enjoyable as always. the chapter runs too beautifully, there's nothing extraneous. nicely done :-)

Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked it, and didn\'t find it too wordy. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed
Date: 11/02/2011 Title: Chapter 20: The Standoff

sorry for the lack of reviews for the last chapter (loved it BTW), but Hallowe'en always means we're massively busy in work. Like where this is going, and like that rogue's decided to play shaw at his own game. am looking forward to the next

Author's Response: Trying to figure out what business has a Halloween rush...costume store? All-Edgar-Allen-Poe bookstore? I\'ll continue to speculate. Thanks so much for reviewing, I know it\'s much harder to keep up with reviews when you\'re writing, so as long as you keep the chapters of \"Stray\" coming you have my full permission to forgo reviews. ;-)

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed
Date: 11/06/2011 Title: Chapter 21: The Showdown

oooh, nicely done. azazel really is a git, isn't he? can't wait for the next chapter, loved how well this one flowed. the characterisations were spot-on too. and re: your question as to what i do for a living that's busy around hallowe'en: i work in a bar and coffee shop. us irish like to drink of a samhain, y'know ;)

Author's Response: Yes, Azazel is a git, for sure. I wish I had made him suffer a little more in the end, but I didn\'t want it to be distracting. Thanks so much for your reviews!

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed
Date: 11/14/2011 Title: Chapter 22: The Happy Ending

i do love a happy ending. and this one was totally worth waiting for. thanks for this love, i really enjoyed it. hobbits away, hey!

Author's Response: Aw, so glad you liked it! Thanks so much for your review. Anxiously awaiting more \"Stray\"!

Marie focused on dulling the pull of her skin, dampening her body’s desire to consume anything it came in contact with. That was the thing she hated about her mutation. Take, take, take. It felt selfish. She wished she had a mutation that was more suited to helping than hurting. Like if she could give away her own life force with a touch, rather than just steal others’.

Post-X3. A little angst and a lot fluff. Nothing especially original or well-written here, to be honest, but hopefully a fun little read.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Foof, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 13
Wordcount: 10851 - Hits: 97499
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/04/2011 - Last Updated: 08/07/2011
Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed
Date: 08/24/2011 Title: Chapter 13: The Smutty Part

i just wanted to say, i really liked this. i pretty much read the story as you were posting it, and i kept meaning to leave a review. i loved the way you made the relationship real and not idyllic (especially their first encounter, because that's never perfectly choreographed and spectacular. you made marie into a very realistic young woman with realistic insecurities and you managed to do the same with logan while keeping him in character. well done :-)

Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate you taking the time to leave a review :). So glad you liked the story. I\'ve been meaning to read yours and September\'s and Jaq\'s work as soon as I\'m finished with \'Feral.\' Yeah, first encounters are always a little awkward. But I really think that\'s part of what makes them so special and sweet, ya know? I do look forward to writing a sequel to this, in which they *ahem* learn to choreograph things a bit more spectacularly ;).

She respected his privacy enough to leave his memories alone. But tomorrow, she was taking the Cure. Tomorrow, they might be gone.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, UST
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 4
Wordcount: 4895 - Hits: 20620
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/12/2011 - Last Updated: 08/20/2011
Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed
Date: 08/12/2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Memory Room

well i'm onboard. and judging by the way logan-in-her-head is talking, i'm not the only one...

Author's Response: Hey, not so sure about Logan, he\'s a bit screwed up, poor darling. Thanks for reviewing!

Roped into attending a conference in Alaska with the X-Geeks, Logan meets up with Marie under very different circumstances. They don't quite live up to each other's fantasies. But maybe that's a good thing.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Angst, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 51
Wordcount: 25812 - Hits: 427049
Complete?: No - Published: 11/07/2011 - Last Updated: 12/13/2011
Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed
Date: 11/13/2011 Title: Chapter 22: The Change of Rules

i've been reading this as it was being posted and i have to say i love it. i wasn't sure whether i'd enjoy the set-up but i was pleasantly surprised (as a waitress for five years however i can tell you that young rogue is gonna have to toughen up with both her customers and her boss). that said, i'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this, and i really like this version of logan and marie. hobbits away, hey!

Author's Response: Pleasantly surprised? That\'s great! I was kind of worried, because I\'m neither a waitress nor a stripper, but I tried to make the characterization as realistic as possible. Still, I was worried anyone who has worked in one of those two professions might read this and be like \'WTF stupid writer has no clue what she\'s talking about\' haha. Thanks for the feedback, and let me know if I screw anything up ;P

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed
Date: 11/27/2011 Title: Chapter 41: The Blade

have to say, have been reading this from the beginning and am really enjoying it. looking forward to the next... hobbits away, hey!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. Glad you\'re enjoying the story, as I always enjoy yours!

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed
Date: 11/30/2011 Title: Chapter 45: The Wolverine

ha! i'm not usually blood-thirsty but that git had it coming. still loving this story, looking forward to the next chapter(s). hobbits away, hey!

Author's Response: Yep, if anyone deserves eternal punishment at the hands of a claw-wielding mutant, it\'s creeps like Jose ;P. Thanks for reading! Hope you enjoy the rest of the story

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed
Date: 12/17/2011 Title: Chapter 51: The Afterlife

sorry this is late, meant to review earlier. really enjoying this, hope to read more soon.

Now COMPLETE!: A black-market ring dealing in mutants, and Logan and Marie. AU. My usual promises -- good grammar, smut, angst, action, drama, and a happy ending.

Rated: Mature
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Angst, Drama, PWP, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 31
Wordcount: 56517 - Hits: 241241
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/25/2011 - Last Updated: 05/24/2012
Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed
Date: 01/14/2012 Title: Chapter 14: The Wall

our girl's about to do something foolish, isn't she? (grins) still enjoying this... hobbits away, hey!

Author's Response: Always! I try not to make the characters do anything hopelessly stupid, I hope, but as for...impulsive? reckless? short-sighted? self-defeating? Bring it on!

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed
Date: 11/27/2011 Title: Chapter 2: The Questions

colour me intrigued... and do i sense a cameo by my two favourite logan's angels in the offing? i look forward to reading the rest. hobbits away, hey!

Author's Response: No idea where the story is going after chapter 6, but you pretty much know Jubes and Kitty are going to play a larger role than they usually do in my fics. Thanks so much for reviewing!