very beautifully written.

Author's Response: Thank you x

yay.... updates... as always, i love this story.

Beautiful. It made me cry. :)

i love love love this story...

I am not sure, never got into the comics and can't remember the cartoon, why most people write Emma Frost as being a total B*tch. But I love it.

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m pretty happy with it myself. It\'s coming to a close soon though, although I have been pulled away from my fanfic by NaNoWriMo.

Mostly it\'s because Emma Frost is a bitch, and we love her for it. She\'s even a bitch when she\'s playing on the side of the good. *grin*

In history though, she\'s in love with Scott, who\'s in love with Jean. Since they were teens. (I think) She wants to be good, but I think that mostly she doesn\'t know how. That and she\'s been manipulated by bad people to do bad things for so long, bitchiness is her normal reaction. She\'s been known to say that her ability to read people telepathically is her right of self protection. *grin*

love it love it love it. great work.

wow, surprised that Logan or Rogue didn't kill Jubliee. I hate when people call him an animal. How cruel.

you are an evil genius

once again... you have managed to touch my heart...

oh God...

this story was so hard to read. My five yr old cousin has hadleukemia since he was 2 yrs old. So this made me cry. Cause it is my one prayer that he get well.

Thank you for writing this beautiful piece.

ohhh... i am not big on tears.. but that was just beautiful. Thank you.

love how this story is turning out. can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: thanks so much! i am working on the next chapter now. I\'m getting a little frustrated with how slow I am going with it, but the results have been worth it! Keep reading and i love reviews!!!

i love the fact that you wrote a much older version of Rogue.

And that she didn't have to rely on Logan to take care of some jerk.

Author's Response: I hate that Rogue is such a teenager in the movies. I was so used to the confident, sexy, grown up Rogue from the comics and even the cartoons that seeing her young and vulnerale like that always chaffed me a little bit. I like my Rogue grown up. She\'s more fun that way.

Also, I think that this kinda goes back to the comics/cartoons again because she was always so powerful, never needed anyone to do anything for her, and generally took care of her own messes and fuckups.

And this Rogue, one who\'s grown up around Logan, with him as a Mentor of sorts, definately didn\'t need him to help her out. *grin*

loving this story so far.. sad that she lost her baby.

can't wait to read more.