Excellent. I bought every line of this except the part about Logan crying himself to sleep. All his uncharacteristic weeping in X3 aside, the big lug just doesn't strike me as the teary type. Still, I really liked this. Rogue's perspective was perfect and I loved the last line. On to the sequel... --Wendie

I always knew Bobby was either a dickless wonder or a raging creep. The saddest part of this whole thing is that Logan may have entirely misinterpreted why she was crying. Not all tears are from sadness or pain. Sometimes they come from gratitude. --Wendie

I should know better than to read this stuff while suffering from the I-know-it's-in-there-somewhere-but-I-can't-find-the-right-fucking-words-when-I-want-them-dammit! frustration of writing a difficult chapter. But obviously I don't know any better. This was fantastic. Grrrrr. It's in there somewhere... --Wendie

Praise be to the generator...now, THAT is my kind of celebration. Party of two, simple words, honest feelings...and not an overworked rhyme anywhere in sight. Outstanding. --Wendie

Awesome description on the 'mind-fucking' parts, especially the paragraphs that begin Gasping as he took a nipple into (his) mouth... and Long, slow, circular caresses.... I dig the 'argument' over who's going to touch Rogue where she most wants to be touched...and the result when Logan wins.

Love Charles' last line, too. It's good to know he's 'only human' on that score. Great job. --Wendie

'a hissing flood of bitter bliss' Now THAT is an image I can sink *my* teeth into. Excellent. --Wendie

Logan thinking of himself as a 'clueless twit'...now that's entertainment! Loved this. --Wendie

Very clever. Rogue's comment at the end and then Logan's last line wrap it up neatly, yet we are still left to decide for ourselves if it was really him.
Personally, I'm going with 'Hell, yes!' --Wendie

OK, so after a delayed bout of tears over this, I finally figured out what I wanted to say. Logan often thinks he doesn't have a heart. He couldn't be more wrong. Could a heartless soul have fed her, cleaned her and even dressed her--right down to her socks--in preparation for her last moments? It was like a funeral director or a coroner caring for the body, because that's all that's left, it's all they CAN do, because the person is already gone. Logan was compassionate enough take the opportunity to show her such care while she could still appreciate it. Absolutely heart-rending... --Wendie

Short, very sweet (and HOT!) and very definitely to the point. Who would have guessed the Wolverine had the soul of a poet? LOVE THIS! --Wendie

I have no idea why, but this was so touching it made me cry. *sniff* I guess a 'settled' Logan is enough to choke me up. Nice work. --Wendie

OK, you first timers are really starting to bug me. You're too good at this! And a songfic to boot. Not just some random idea that you get to run wild with, but a structured bit of poetry, really, that you had to conform to. Very well done. --Wendie