Is there any chance I could bribe you to finish this story? Name your price. Chapter 1 was a total hoot and this one just added to the fun. Please, please, please give me more! --Wendie

That's our Logan -- the soul of a poet and the mouth of a drunken sailor -- and we wouldn't have him any other way. This was terrific. Makes me want to go look up the rest of the Compass Points series someday when I have time to sit and appreciate it. --Wendie

This is too perfect. You've really got Scott pegged. I wonder if a whole lot of what he's hearing is pure acting, solely for an audience of one--one fearless leader, that is! --Wendie

This was spectacular. The 'I cried' lines were especially breathtaking and deadly accurate. Score another hit for the 'Story of the Moment' feature... --Wendie

This was beautifully written, but oh so wretched...so unbelievably, unnecessarily sad. Her hope didn't just die; she hung it with a noose braided from her own unfulfilled expectations and her stubborn unwillingness to tell him how she really felt. He had nothing to do with it. --Wendie

I almost didn't write this review, because I can't find the words to say how grateful I am that your muse whipped this out of you. This was truly amazing. --Wendie

Eerie, intriguing and original. I can't help but wonder how this one came to you. Excellent! --Wendie

Few things are as precious as Logan being forced to find the 'nurture' in his nature. This was great. --Wendie

Oh, girl, you look nothing like an idiot, I can assure you. This wonderful little fic makes you look like a talented writer I would very much like to see write lots more stories.

I wouldn't have to tell you about where I wanted to travel because I wouldn't want to be anywhere else.

This line makes me wonder what other places she told him she wanted to go before she worked up her nerve and got around to talking about Toronto, a place she thought he might want to go with her.

'Tony the imaginary hot dog vendor' -- fantastic.

So glad he said, 'Yes'. --Wendie

Amen. --Wendie.

It continues to puzzle me how wonderful little ficlets like this one can go so long with a big, fat zero in the review column. Didn't anybody else notice the heartbreaking honesty in this? Wasn't anyone else moved to comment on exquisite lines like these:

And for a moment, I consider answering him, telling him about the agony and the fire and the ice that turned me from lava to stone, but I discard that, because he wouldn't have understood.

So I speak to him in a language he *does* understand. I stop beside him and say, quietly, "Because, Logan, because I can."

I walk away without giving him time to respond, and as I do, my eyes feel like marbles: cold and clear, and empty as glass.

Apparently not. Personally, I couldn't stand to let something this good go unheralded. So I didn't. --Wendie

And, assuming he had time, I bet he tried every one of them. Our Logan is nothing if not thorough. --Wendie